MG-SS-manayun kaise..?upd. Part-4 on Pg. 37. - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

Hii Priti Di...kaisi hai aap?hii deepa i am f9 dear...

awesome upd dear⭐️
amazing
fantastic
mindblowing
mashallah kya likhti ho tumthanky so-so much dear...i am really honoured...
i love each n every scene of maaneet...really me too...love writing about maaneet...
dadima oh rocking hai yaar...😆absolutely...
maza aagaya kya bolu mai i m speechlessthanky...
wow geet ne maan ke lia specially brush kia haihaan sirf maan ke liye...
aur mera maanu is chance ko miss kar raha hainot to worry abhi picture baaki hai mere dost...
bechara as usual nahi haar maanega 😳after all he is msk...
muje eye talk bhut pasand aaya😉mujhe bhi likhne mein bahut mazaa aaya...
bina bole hi sab kuch keh dia wowas usual maaneet's eyes...haiii jaanleva...
aur geet ne ye kya kia haila adi toh gayahaan...so toh hai...
bechara seh nae paaya hehehehe😆Poor adi...
ab dekte hai maan kya karta haiya wait n watch..
kya geet maan ke gusse ka sikhar hogi 😆Wait n watch...
ye dekhne ke lia toh next part tak
intezar karna padega plz upd soon dearabsolutely...ya sure...
Love
Deepa

thanx deepa for ur wonderful comments sweety...i am glad u loved it...

take care...
LOVE..
PRITI..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... loved it ...


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continue soon ...

thanx so much for loving the upd.
i have added... ya sure...
take care...

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Posted: 13 years ago
yahin hoon dear...thode comments hain unka ans de doon...phir upd. karti hoon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _mahi.ve_

omg its hilarius lvd id🤣
con asap

thanx a lot for loving it... ya sure...

take care...
LOVE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di kah res. karu...??
He he...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-3.

GEET- (in her usual bubbly mood)- kya hua maan aap aise rudra avtaar mein kyun khade hain…? Any problem sweety….?

MAAN- (angry mode)- geeet……

GEET- maan aap achanak se yun angry young mood mein kyun chale jaate ho? Itne hawwwttt talks maine isliye thode hi na kiye they….aur aap yahan conference room mein akele murti ki tarah kyun khade ho….?

She goes near him n keeps the tiffin on the table… " bataiya na maan…achcha thik hai kuch mat boliye kam se kam nashta toh kar lijiye…waise bhi aapne subah se kuch khaya bhi nahin tha…hai na….pata hai kya maine bhi subah se kuch nahin khaya hai socha ki aapse saath hi nashta kar loon"…in the meantime she has displayed all the food items on the table….aayine na saath baithkar nashta karte hain"…she puts her hand on the stomach….mujhe toh bahut zoro se bhookh lagi hai…" suddenly she looks up n sees that maan is nowhere in the room….

GEET- maan ab yeh kahan chale gaye…? Yeh maan bhi na inko mujhe pareshaan karne bahut mazaa ata hai…(looks up)- hai na babjii….ab main inhe kahan dhoondho….?call karti hoon she dials his number… " yeh inka number switched off kyun aa raha hai…abhi toh kuch der pehle tak thik tha…. Adi sir se poochti hoon…she dials his number…but again switched off… " adi sir ka bhi phone switch off hai… koi baat nahin pinky se poochti hoon…again same response… yeh ho kya raha hai…sabka phone switched off hai…aaj kya phone switch off karne ka din hai…. aur waise bhi jab maine maan ko call kiya tha tab sirf halo ki awaaz ki hi awaaz aayi thi…uske baad kuch sunai hi nahin de raha tha…lagta hai meri baatein sunkar MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA ki bolti bandh ho gai hogi…hai na…n she giggles…. Waise main jo soch rahin hoon woh… ho bhi sakta hai bada shahar badi baatein…jab rose day..frdship day..valentines day ho sakta hai…toh phone switch off day kyun nahin ho sakta…hai na Babajii…" chaddo main itna kyun soch rahin hoon…mujhe maan ko dhoondna hai….she gets up wraps up the tiffin…n moves out from the room… only to find to her utter astonishment….a vacant office….she holds the tiffin more closer n an instant fear wraps her…. "yeh office khali kyun hai…? Sab kahan chale gaye…? She shouts maan-maan….adi sir…pinky…but avail only her voice echoes back….suddenly she hears a sound n in fear drops the tiffin… " maan- maan aap kahan hain…?plzzz agar yeh koi mazak hai na toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga haan… " maan mujhe pata hai aap yahin-kahin ho na…dekhiye main bas teen tak count karungi…agar aap bahar nahin aaye toh…na main…

" toh tum kya karogi Geet…?

Hearing the voice she turns back …only to find her Maan…she instantly hugs him tightly…as if she got her life n soul back…her grip around him gets tighter n tighter…maan to reciprocates with equal fervor n hugs her back with same passion…his strong muscular arms…encircles her petite form n crushes her to his body…both of them gets completely lost in each others embrace…DHAK-DHAK…DHAK-DHAK…is the only sound filling that particular space….suddenly maan feels sth hawwt n wet on his neck…n he closes his eyes in pain…n says…

Geet…

GEET- maan plzzz….

MAAN- hmmm….

And then in the similar position…they both get settled down on the floor…geet is still holding him tightly n her grip is getting stronger n stronger…while settling on the floor a sharp edge of the glass door hits his back…which makes him wince in pain…but he keeps quite…n closes his eyes only to feel the warmth of her body…to inhale the intoxicating scent of her hair…he buries his head on her shoulder n places a soft kiss on her ear lobe…geet shivers in pleasure n bites his ear lobe….which makes him moan in pleasure n pain as blood is continuously oozing out from his back…but he is loving it…the pleasure of holding her love in his embrace has more impact on him than the pain…n it has completely transformed his pain in blissful pleasure…gradually geet's hand travels from his neck down to his back feeling his every part…n she feels sth wet n sticky on her hand…she quickly opens her eyes…only to see blood… " maan khoon-khoon….n she faints…

MAAN- geet- geet… he pats her cheek… " is pagali ladki ka main kya karun…khoon mera beh raha hai… aur behosh yeh ho rahi hai …" he picks her up n takes her to the conference room…makes her lie on the sofa…brings a glass of water n sprinkles on her face after few attempts she gets her consciousness back…she immediately gets up… n holds him by his shoulder… " maan- maan aap thik toh ho na…she turns him back n looks at his injured back with utmost concern n care… " yeh chot aapko kaise lagi aur kitna khoon beh raha hai maan…? He turns back …( shrugging her shoulder n says)…. " geet- geet main thik hoon…

GEET- kya thik hoon maan dekhiye na kitna khoon beh raha hai…aur aap keh rahein hain thik hoon… chaliye utariye…?

MAAN- ( shocked)- utariye kya…?

GEET- uff o maan aap bhi na kapde utariye ….?

MAAN- whaaattt….? Geet tum pagal ho gai ho…?

GEET- ismein pagal hone waali kaunsi baat hai maan…?

MAAN- geet tum…

GEET- maan aap utaar rahe ho ya nahin….?

MAAN- nahin…

GEET- maan main aakhiri baar keh rahin hoon utaariye…?

MAAN- geet yeh office hai….

GEET- toh…

MAAN- toh- toh ka kya matlab hai geet….?

GEET – maan agar aapne kapde nahin utaare na toh…

MAAN- toh tum kya karogi geet….?

GEET- toh main utaar doongi…

( Maan is wearing a white shirt)….

Saying this she moves closer to him n in an instant took off his shirt n throws it on the chair…. which makes maan wince in pain….once again…. " aaahhh….

GEET- maan I am sorry….woh main….

MAAN- its ok geet…

GEET- ( with tears in her eyes)- I am really sorry maan aapko bahut dard ho raha hoga na… aur maine… " magar aap bhi toh meri baat nahin maante na… toh main kya karun mujhe zabardasti karne par majboor kar dete hain…"

Maan cups her face n kisses away the tears from her cheeks….n places a soft kiss on her forehead…. " geet mujhe tumhara yun zabardsati karna , yun mujhpar haq jataana mujhe bahut achcha lagta hai…."

GEET- ( smiling)- sach…

MAAN- ( smiling)- much….

She hugs her again n by mistake her hand touches his wound….

MAAN- aaaooo….

Geet immediately moves back…. " I am sorry- I am sorry…."

MAAN- (playfully still holding her by waist close to him)- its ok mishty bade-bade conference room mein aisi oooh – aaahhh waali baatein hoti rehti hain….

GEET- whaattt…?

MAAN- tum nahin samjhogi mishty kuch-kuch hota hai….

GEET- achcha jii….

MAAN- haan jii….

GEET- maan hum yeh kuch-kuch baad mein karenge….pehle aap yeh bhi toh utaariye….

MAAN- ab kya… ?

GEET – uff maan aap bhi na yeh ( she points her finger towards his black vest)….

MAAN- kya ab yeh bhi utaarna padega….?

GEET- aur nahin toh kya… warna problem hogi na…aur phir main kaise…?

MAAN- ok-ok … he tries to take off his vest but due to pain he is unable to lift his hand….

GEET- ek minute maan rukiye main help karti hoon….

MAAN- its ok geet main kar loonga…

Geet glares at him… " maan"…

MAAN- ok….

She thinks a bit n then her eyes falls on a pair of scissors…. She takes them n turns back at him….walking slowly towards him…

MAAN- geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho…?

She puts her finger on his lips…. " shhh…

MAAN- geet tum…

GEET- chup bilkul chup….

She moves closer to him n caresses his face moving her finger ever so softly n sensually down to his lips…which makes maan shiver in pleasure…he closes his eyes n brings her more closer to him simply unaware of the fact that her other hand is also busy in doing the job with the scissors…..now their lips are a few inches apart….n he is getting restless to relish those sweet, pink n juicy lips just ready to devour them at any moment…but geet snaps back…saying… " ho gaya"…. Maan instantly opens his eyes….

MAAN- ( amazed)- ho gaya….par abhi toh shuru bhi nahin hua tha…

GEET- ae lo shuru hokar khatam bhi ho gaya….

MAAN- kya….aur mujhe pata bhi nahin chala….

GEET- hmmm…kyunki maine pata hi nahin lagne dia….

Maan still confused…geet slowly takes off his black vest which she had torn into half with the scissors….n shows it to him… " dekhiya ho gaya na"….

MAAN- ( angrily)- geeet…tum….

GEET- ab maine kya kiya maan…? Jo aap itna gussa ho rahein hain…? Main toh bas aapki help kar rahi thi…

MAAN- geet agar tum nahin hoti toh mera kya hota….?

GEET- isiliye toh babajii ne mujhe aapke paas bhej dia taaki aapko kuch na ho….

MAAN- hmmm…

GEET- kya hmmm…chaliye…

MAAN- ab is halat mein kahan jaaon…?

GEET- maan aap bina sawaal kiye meri baat maan sakte hain….

MAAN- hmmm…

She takes him towards the sofa n makes him sit comfortably facing his back towards her….then she brings the first aid box n sits behind him…. Her eyes gets watery seeing his wounded n bleeding back….she smoothly slides her fingers around the wound…feeling the pain… n softly puts a peck on the side… maan smiles slightly… then she takes the cotton n soaks it in dettol….

GEET- maan thoda jalega haan…

MAAN- smiles at her caring words… koi baat nahin geet main bardaash kar loonga…. Tum bas babajii ka naam lekar laga do….

Geet looks up n prays… " hey babajii….n puts the wet cotton on his wound (closing her eyes in pain)…n immediately starts "phooo…phooo…phooo…. Maan couldn't control his smile at her sweet n innocent gesture…. Then she gently wipes the blood…n puts the cream…n the band- aid ….. n once again puts several kisses around his wound n one on the band-aid too….

MAAN- geet agar mujhe pata hota ki tum aj mujhpar itne kisses shower karne waali ho toh main subah hi khud ko ….

She immediately turns him towards her n puts her hand on his mouth….bas ab iske aage ek aur shabd nahin…warna… n saying this she gets up….

MAAN- (passionately in his husky tone)- warna kya geet…haan bolo na…moves closer to her….

Geet blushes n tries to move away but maan grabs her n pins her to the wall….she looks into his deep passionate eyes n says… " maan chodiye na plzzz"….

MAAN- nahin chodunga…pehle tum mere sawaal ka jawaab do…?

GEET- nahin pehle aap mujhe yeh batayiye ki jab maine aap ko call kia toh aapne kuch bola kyun nahin….main bole jaa rhi thi aur aap na hmmm na haan…kuch bhi nahin bol rahe they…. Aur main aapke liye tiffin lekar aayi itne pyaar se magar aap gusse mein chale gaye bina kuch bole…kyun… aur yeh saara office khaali kyun hain? Sab kahan chale gaye…? woh bhi itni subah- subah…. Aur aapka phone bhi switch off aa raha tha…aur – aur….

Maan keeps his finger on her lips…. n whispers….in his husky voice…. "chup bilkul chup….kitna bolti ho tum geet thak nahin jaati….Geet nodes her head in negative…. Maan picks her up….

GEET- maan yeh aap kya kar rahein hain…?

MAAN- shhh…. Tumhe tumhaare sawaalon ke jawaab dene jaa raha hoon…

GEET- achcha aur yeh kaunsa tareeka hai sawaalon ke jawaab dene ka….?

MAAN- ( with a naughty grin)- yeh maan singh khurana ka tareeka hai….apni mishti ke sawaalon ka jawaab dene ka…. Saying this he carries her outside the room….

So once again here GEET is in dilemma….about MAAN'S actions….and MAAN what he is up to…?For that u all will have to wait for the next part…..plzzz do press the LIKE button… ur comments….criticisms….n suggestions r most welcome….as it encourages me to cont. writing more…Frds i think my OS is turning into SS...now...thanx to u all...

LOVE…

PRITI…

Edited by priti11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Di kah res. karu...??
He he...

le res. kar mere res. ke baad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello...helloss...

Sorry...sorry...
itna late comment karne ke liye...par apko pata hai mai kitni lazy hu... 😳


Last part mai itna hasane ke baad ab rulane ka plan tha kya...???
1st part mai toh you scared me...mujhe laga mera guess wrong ho gaya...
Par i'm not sure...mera guess sahi tha ya nahi...Maan gussa hua tha ya nahi...??


Aww...Maan got hurt...

🤣
''Bade bade conference rooms mai aisa ooh aaahh hoti rehti hai...'' 🤣
Oho jahlli Geet kuch nahi samajhti... 😉
I want this ooh aahh to happen... 😉

Sach mai ye Geet kitna bolti hai... 😆

Hayye...conference room cute, sweet, innocent sa romance ho raha hai... 😍

Haww...where is Maan taking her...??
I thought office mai hi oohh aaahh hoga... 😉 🤣
Waiting for more...


Arre...i forgot tp congratulate you...aapk os ab ss ban gaya...
Congo shongo ji... 🥳


Awesome part di...
Loved it...
Updt soon.
Bye tkcr...
Edited by Vidushi89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!
Maan is maan ...no one can do what he does
Luv
TC
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