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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

nice concept

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

GUYS iam overwhelmed by the response you guys giv me in the last os thankx a ton for your such a gr8 responce.Thankx alot...

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AR VERSION
PART 2

Arman came home at 4 pm.He enter in the house with the help of dublicate key.When he enter he heard some noise from the kicthen.When he saw riddhima in the kicthen he says you home that too early!!riddhima saw him and say yeah today there was no serious case or emergency so i came back home alia is sleeping.Arman smiles and hug riddhima from back and nuzzels in her hair.Ridhima too lightly smile and take a sigh.Riddhima says after a while "arman".ARman while nuzzling whisper "hmmm".Riddhima says i was thinking of leaving the job.This make arman a bit angry but he calm himslef and turns riddhima and make her look at him riddhima listen you hav to do this if you stop your practice you cant be good doctor we discused it alot time now alia is too of 1 year.And more over we had hired a governace only for alia,riddhima this is for the last time when iam saying this for the last time ,we are not discussing this thing never again pleaze(guys do to this smsing nd cahtting i forgot plz spelling so can anyone tell me plz spelling lol!!hehhehehheh)You are not gonna leav this job .I know thats your dream to become a good doctor and now this i too wana.Riddhima nods and smiles.Arman saw riddhima smilling he kissed her.when they broke,arman suddenly says riddhima your parents are comming tomorrow.Riddhima became numb on the spot and smiles fade away from her face.Arman notice this.He says what happen riddhima you are not happy.After our marriage you never go to your house.Riddhima cant reply as they heard the vail of alia riddhima runs towards alia room and saw alia crying, she put alia in her hand and make her came.After 10 to 15 min with gr8 difi she make alia calm and then she handed alia to arman,he took her out of the room.Riddhima too follow him to downstaris.She sevres arman with tea and make coffe for her.Arman notice the change in riddhima.So he dont ask why she is not happy her parents are comming.Aman starts playing with alia.Riddhima make diiner for arman.They are having their dinner when door bell ring.Arman was feeding alia so riddhima open the door.When riddhima opens the door she became pale.she has no words to speak.she wana cry but...In this while a lady in her 40 or 50 hugg her and say i miss you my bacha after her a man hugg riddhima riddhima dont hugg her mother but she do hugg her father and cry a bit,then she smiles but her smiles fade away when she a guy in her 20 and he say aslam api(or di).Riddhima gave him half smile.Ridhima took all of them in her living room where arman was sitting with a sleeping alia in his hand.Arman gets up to see his inlaws and say hello to them.(Riddhima parents after her marrige forst time to come to her house and for the fist time they see alia.they hav seen alia but her photos that too arman sent not riddhima.why???you will no soon*wink*.Riddhima mother try to pick alia and arman willingly gav ali to her but riddhima take alia from her hand.And say she will put her in her their rooms as she is sleeping.Riddhima was going to their room when her father srops her and say riddhima bacha if you dont mind may i pick alia.I am dying to feel the warmth of my daughter's daghter.A tear drop from riddhima's eyes she quickly handed her daughter to her papa.This make riddhima mom angry and she says in a liud voice "Hamesha apna bap ki ladli ma ki to koi qadar hi nahi yakeen nahi hota k ye meri apni beti hai".After this riddhima cant control herself she quickly walks towards kicthen.Arman was hell angry due to riddhima mom but dont say anything.After 2 to 3 hours riddhima parents left the house.Riddhima was not soo pleased due to her parents arrive and arman notice that .He notice that riddhima dont talk to her mom alot and to her brother but to her father she is quite comfortable with him When they were in their lying on the bed.Riddhima back was facing arman.Arman says riddhima iam sorry.Riddhima turn towards arman with a shock expresion and say him plz dont say sorry.i dot think soo you done anything wrong.Arman reply i thought by inviting your parents to our happy but instead you became more sad.I am sorry riddhima.Riddhima smiles and hugg him and say arman iam not at all angry at you.PLZ but dont call them again plz dont ask why but dont call them again its a request plz.By saying this she hugg him .Arman dont say anything .His kiss her and switch of the light.
Next day aman open his eyes and saw towards riddhima side but dont find her.He quickly wear his shirt.When he wears his shirt he saw riddhima comming out of the washroom wearing beutiful red dress.Arman was memorized by her beuity but then he rember something and starts laughing.Riddhima saw him laughing and ask why are you laughing.Arman says wifey i know you were very busy in your house chores,job and me,so may be sometime you for got something,But that doesnt mean that you forgets day too.Wifey today in sunday.And you are wearing beutiful dress and prepare your self with so difficulty, all set for going to hospital but today is sunday jana.Now go and chage your selve and hav a rest.But riddhima don move from her place.Arman said with naughtinees if you cant your drees may I.Riddhima blushes a bit then say i dont forget today is sunday.Actauly there is a small function.As new interns are comming today and we were goona complete our intership so our deen held a small function,thats why i prepare myself,sorry i forgot to tell you,I will back till 3 or 4 pm.Alia is still sleeping your break fast is in the microvave .Arman smiles and say sorry i make fun of you.So enjoy your function and come back soon.He kisses her cheek.Riddhima smiles and too kisses his cheek and went to function.
After riddhima left arman goes towards washroom when he was about to enter the washroom he sawa riddhima's diary on the floor near the cupboard when he put it up it was unlocked.....
Okay guys this was the second part of the os.i try to finsh it in 2 parts but ...
okay next part will surlely the last part of this os
if any one like my work and wana read my work and wana pm add my pm account to your buddy list or ask for the pm in your comments
maria
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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

GUYS iam overwhelmed by the response you guys giv me in the last os thankx a ton for your such a gr8 responce.Thankx alot...

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ARSH VERSION
PART2

Arman came home at 4 pm.He enter in the house with the help of dublicate key.When he enter he heard some noise from the kicthen.When he saw shilpa in the kicthen he says you home that too early!!shilpa saw him and say yeah today there was no serious case or emergency so i came back home alia is sleeping.Arman smiles and hug shilpa from back and nuzzels in her hair.shilpa too lightly smile and take a sigh.shilpa says after a while "arman".ARman while nuzzling whisper "hmmm".shilpa says i was thinking of leaving the job.This make arman a bit angry but he calm himslef and turns shilpa and make her look at him shilpa listen you hav to do this if you stop your practice you cant be good doctor we discused it alot time now alia is too of 1 year.And more over we had hired a governace only for alia,shilpa this is for the last time when iam saying this for the last time ,we are not discussing this thing never again pleaze(guys do to this smsing nd cahtting i forgot plz spelling so can anyone tell me plz spelling lol!!hehhehehheh)You are not gonna leav this job .I know thats your dream to become a good doctor and now this i too wana.shilpa nods and smiles.Arman saw shilpa smilling he kissed her.when they broke,arman suddenly says shilpa your parents are comming tomorrow.shilpa became numb on the spot and smiles fade away from her face.Arman notice this.He says what happen shilpa you are not happy.After our marriage you never go to your house.Shilpa cant reply as they heard the vail of alia shilpa runs towards alia room and saw alia crying, she put alia in her hand and make her came.After 10 to 15 min with gr8 difi she make alia calm and then she handed alia to arman,he took her out of the room.Shilpa too follow him to downstaris.She serves arman with tea and make coffe for her.Arman notice the change in shilpa.So he dont ask why she is not happy her parents are comming.Aman starts playing with alia.Shilpa make diiner for arman.They are having their dinner when door bell ring.Arman was feeding alia so shilpa open the door.When shilpa opens the door she became pale.she has no words to speak.she wana cry but...In this while a lady in her 40 or 50 hugg her and say i miss you my bacha after her a man hugg shilpa .Shilpa dont hugg her mother but she do hugg her father and cry a bit,then she smiles but her smiles fade away when she a guy in her 20 and he say aslam api(or di).Shilpa gave him half smile.Shilpa took all of them in her living room where arman was sitting with a sleeping alia in his hand.Arman gets up to see his in laws and say hello to them.(Shilpa parents after her marrige forst time to come to her house and for the fist time they see alia.they hav seen alia but her photos that too arman sent not Shilpa.why???you will no soon*wink*).Sihilpa mother try to pick alia and arman willingly gav ali to her but shilpa take alia from her hand.And say she will put her in her their rooms as she is sleeping.Shilpa was going to their room when her father srops her and say shilpa bacha if you dont mind may i pick alia.I am dying to feel the warmth of my daughter's daghter.A tear drop from shilpa's eyes she quickly handed her daughter to her papa.This make shilpa mom angry and she says in a loud voice "Hamesha apna bap ki ladli ma ki to koi qadar hi nahi yakeen nahi hota k ye meri apni beti hai".After this shilpa cant control herself she quickly walks towards kicthen.Arman was hell angry due to shilpa mom but dont say anything.After 2 to 3 hours shilpa parents left the house.Shilpa was not soo pleased due to her parents arrive and arman notice that.He notice that shilpa dont talk to her mom alot and to her brother but to her father she is quite comfortable with him When they were in their lying on the bed.Shilpa back was facing arman.Arman says shilpa iam sorry.Shilpa turn towards arman with a shock expresion and say him plz dont say sorry.i dot think soo you done anything wrong.Arman reply i thought by inviting your parents to our happy but instead you became more sad.I am sorry Shilpa.Shilpa smiles and hugg him and say arman iam not at all angry at you.PLZ but dont call them again plz dont ask why but dont call them again its a request plz.By saying this she hugg him .Arman dont say anything .His kiss her and switch of the light.
Next day aman open his eyes and saw towards shilpa side but dont find her.He quickly wear his shirt.When he wears his shirt he saw shilpa comming out of the washroom wearing beutiful red dress.Arman was memorized by her beuity but then he remember something and starts laughing.Shilpa saw him laughing and ask why are you laughing.Arman says wifey i know you were very busy in your house chores,job and me,so may be sometime you for got somethings,But that doesnt mean that you forgets day too.Wifey today in sunday.And you are weared beutiful dress and prepare your self with so difficulty, all set for going to hospital but today is sunday jana.Now go and chage your selve and hav a rest.But shilpa doesnt move from her place.Arman said with naughtinees if you cant change your drees may I.Shilpa blushes a bit then say i dont forget today is sunday.Actauly there is a small function.As new interns are comming today and we were goona complete our intership so our deen held a small function,thats why i prepare myself,sorry i forgot to tell you,I will back till 3 or 4 pm.Alia is still sleeping your break fast is in the microvave .Arman smiles and say sorry i make fun of you.So enjoy your function and come back soon.He kisses her cheek.Shilpa smiles and too kisses his cheek and went to function.
After shilpa left arman goes towards washroom when he was about to enter the washroom he saw shilpa's diary on the floor near the cupboard when he put it up it was unlocked...
Okay guys this was the second part of the os.i try to finsh it in 2 parts but ...
okay next part will surlely the last part of this os

Guys this is the fist part of my os...This os contian 2 parts 1 is this 2 will come soon tooo
if any one like my work and wana read my work and wana pm add my pm account to your buddy list or ask for the pm in your comments
maria:)<<<<<

Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago

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Ayesha87

@Ayesha87

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Thanks a lot for this gallery😃

Very nice OS...keep up the good work👏

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

i love ur wrk and really wanna read more from u..plz pm me when u update..i love the story..plz write more on arsh...

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hey dear...😊😊

I wont say sorry for being late .as i feel i hav already used it so many times that it would sound cliche...I am the queen of late commenters...😭😭

The os Is really a very nice one...👏👏

loved how Armaan Supported her...U really hav put down a serious issue...

I really want to know what happed in Riddhima's past? ...why she is so indiffrent to her mother and bro?...😲

And I feel we will know it once Armaan reads his diary...

waiting for it eagerly...

Take care...😊

love

Roshni...

Edited by roshni_A - 14 years ago

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

awsome 2nd part sis.your story reach in good twist.smart thinking sis.i become more anxious to know riddhima's past.pls update soon.thanks for pm

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eesha ahmed

@ssidra

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey,

Awsome part!

wonder why riddhima behaves with his family like this..

cont soon!

thanks for the pm!

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Hey dear
Awesome update
loved it to the core
AR are so cute
but why riddhima is nt comfortable with her mom?😕
want to read riddhima's diary
so do continue soon
thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago