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Posted: 13 years ago
hey maria
firstly thnk u soo much fr tis dedication
i hope ur exams go really well
nd u pass with flying colours
will miss u nd ur lovely comments fr a mnth :(
coming to d update
it was really sweet cute nd amazing
totally loved d description
u wrote this os really beautifully
update soon
nd thnx fr d pm
btw once again all d very best fr ur exams :)
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Hey:)

great os, can't wait to read more
con. soon and tnx for the pm
love miss93
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update!!!!!!!!
oh no, ehasan kidnaped shilpa, too.
i am shocked to know that ryan is ehasan's son.
how is it possible?
waiting to read next part.
please continue soon.
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Hey guys thank you soo much for your comments on my work
loved each and every comment
thank you
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Hey people out there??How r you all??
I am back with another OS on AR ...Its basically Inspire by my one of fav couple TOM AND LYNYTTE..I loved this couple!...
hope you guys like it!

AR VERSION
~Love wins at the end~
A man sitting on the bar having his drink,he felt a tap n his shoulder and he turns around.His heart skip seeing the face in-front of him..eve after 18 years of marriage she still hold the same control over his heart,but he overcome it soon.And panic aroused inside him as he realized she is here he immediately ask:
"What are you doing here riddhima???plz go from here Kathrine can come anytime and I dont want her to be upset on her b day plz go!"
Riddhima brought the paper out of her bag and place in front of him and says:
"Katherine is coming soon,she caught up with some work!.You tell me are you sign these papers Arman?"
Arman look the papers and was shock out of wits and how the hell she got these papers???
.He says:"Riddhima how you know Katherine is late and h-o-ow you g-o-got these pa-apers Riddhima??
Riddhima look at him with tears in her eyes and say in chock voice:"Does it really matter how I got these papers??I got these papers by your new room mate..you wanted to break our marriage ,brought divorce paper and sign them with out even considering me???Does our relationship change soo much that you dont even bother telling me??
Arman look down with guilt shining in his eyes and say:"Riddhima I really dont know how Katherine gave you these pap.."
But riddhima cut him in between and ask:"Arman do you really want me sign these papers??you really want to break our marriage??"
Riddhima look into his eyes for answer but arman avert his gaze and look down.Riddhima sigh and without even thinking pick the pen and sign the papers and left from there without saying anything..Arman look at her retiring image with in five minutes there relationship broke..within five minutes there marriage broke!.Arman close down as tears trickle down his eyes!
*******************************************************
Riddhima drive back home in daze..she felt a strange feeling born inside..she was not in her control..She parked the car infront of the..now her house.She sigh and close her eyes to look fresh she dont want to tensed there kids.She finally look at her image in car mirror and come out of car.She was going to hose when she heard Rog throwing basket on road in.She went to them and was gonna ask when he heard roger saying :
"these doctor are mad really mad"
By saying this he went inside,riddhima look at Karen(Roger wife,both are the old couple of riddhima lane!).Keran look at her with teary eyes:
Keran:'Doctor told us today,my cancer is back and unfortunately spread into my whole body..now i have very few day left!:
Riddhima look at her with tears in her eyes another shock,she love this couple soo much,when ever she is in problem this couple help her but now...Riddhima was speechless,she has no word to say she just left from there.

*****************************************
Riddhima enter her house tired,worn out,heart broken,She close the door and lean into it,She close her eyes as tears trickle her eyes.She felt a tug on her pants she look down and saw her 11 years daughter standing there with her hands on her hips looking at her with CARE TO EXPLAIN WHERE WERE YOU?? expression.Riddhima quickly smile at her and mumble sorry baby in turn ariha reply
"What sorry mom tomorrow is my b day and we don't even done a little preparation*then she said with sad expression"tomorrow is dad last day here too he is going to india for whole year with that bitch"
Riddhima raise her voice"ARIHA,is that way to talk about your elders,go to your room I promise tomorrow's party will be great baby and now went into room do your home work I will set dinner for you"
********************************************************
Arman enter into his and Katherine apartment,he still was in thought where he and riddhima going,he know one thing he don't want to give riddhima divorce that's why he never was able to give her those divorce paper,but then what is Katherine to him,He thought,they have been living together for more than 3 months then why he not able to give Katherine riddhima's place.He sighed and thought may be bcz riddhima is my first love ,i have spent 18 years with her, and more over she is mother of my kids,but why I am not able to move on.He tried hard to know what he wanted,feeling tired and sick of his dilemma he entered his and Katherine apartment.He want to have a good nap but when he enter his apartment he saw his boss and some clients sitting in living room.He look at Katherine with confuse look who smile at him and give him peck on his lip and whisper"I have a surprise for you".Before she could say further his boss Harry got up and say
"Katherine let me do the owner*he look at arman and say"You don't want to go to mumbai rightso, you r not going">Arman look confuse and say:"Why??"
Harry:"Well all thankx to your wife,She hook up with me to stop your promotion and now she dumped me">
Arman is now hell confuse first all that divorce thing and now harry words ,he says :
"Why riddhima dumped you ,you were dating right"
Harry:"Yeah she was dating me but only to stop you from going to india but now she found another man,and you know what arman she dumped me for some one else,well dude hats of to you you bearded her for more than 18 years"
Arman felt a different sensation he try to calm him and say:"Harry forget that lets start the presentation"..
But harry cut him between and looking towards clients he says:
"Guys this man is really great,who beared a women like her for whole 18 years,i was not even able to bear her for one week,trust me guys she is ass whole,bitch and...*then he look towards arman and say*"I am damn sure she is very bad in be..."
Before he says arman hit his face badly and says in rage:
"Never I say never ever talk about my wife like that get that you Son Of Witch,she is my wife and my love remember that"
Harry got up angrily and say:"I am never gona say bad about her coz i never gona meet her,DUDE YOU ARE FIRED"Saying this heleft from there with his clients.Katherine was standing there with diffrent feelings on her face.Arman move his hand in his hairs to calm his nerves.He open his and look up.He saw Katherine looking at him with demanding expresion.He took a sigh,now he knows why he is not able to leave riddhima and give katherine her place coz there is only one woman whom he loved,loves and will love that is Riddhima.He look at Katherine and say:"Sorry Katherine ,I don't know what to say.."
Katherine cut him and say:"So,you still love her huh???then why was you with me huh??
Arman:"You are my friend,i know it will sound strange but you are that person who support me when ,my and riddhima relation was going bad"
There was silence prevailed in the room.Then Katherine says:
"I should have already known you never love me,you still love her,i always saw that in your eyes you never remove your wedding band even after living with me for months but use to ignore but now all confusion clear *Sigh*arman bye!"
Before arman could say or stop her she left.Arman sit on sofa and stare at his wedding band,how everything change,they love each other then why this happens to them...his mobile ring he sees the caller id and smile its ariha their one and only baby doll after 2 two sons,all his worry tension what ever just seeing the id name,she is his princes bu t he remembers how she don't talk to him after he told her about him seeing Katherine,hope she now talk to me.He picks up his phone and say:
"Hey princes wats up??"
He wish to hear her cheerful voice but he heard only a question
Ariha:"Dad you coming to my b day party or not???"
Arman had tears in his eyes:"Prnices how come i will not come in your b day party you are my life baby.."
Before he could say further ariha cut him saying:"mom calling,sorry bye!"
Arman close his eyes how his princes talk to him really hurt him!
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Arman park his car and look at the house,its their house,riddhima and him.He spend his most beautiful year 18 years in this house.He knows now its anymore their ,he left Katherine but riddhima has moved on and may tonight is last day when they meeting each other.He was about to inside the house when he saw roger sitting outside the house .Arman went to him he knows about Karen.He goes near and say :"Hi buddy how r you and how is Karen???
Rog smiles and say:" I am absolutely fine you tell?"
Arman:"Me fine too,so hows life going on??where is keran??
Roger:"She is fine sleeping.You know today for the first time in our 30 years of marriage we talk our heart out,and i told her her how much i love her.Today when i know that there is no time left for me ,i want to take it all out.Bcz from now on life is not gona give me chance to talk to her,you know this life is so small to tell our love one that we love them and care for them,some times when we want to say that,life didn't give us time,so what ever we have in our heart we should let it out,bcz no one know what happen next..."
There was silence prevailed in the peace full garden,arman can understand the double meaning of roger words,he know he is indicating to riddhima.He close his eyes when h felt a hand on his hand he look up and saw roger seeing him.He says
:"Arman go talk to her"
Arman:"I want to go but she has moved on and i dont think she want me in her life back"
Roger:"but why not try for love".
*********************************************
Riddhima place cake in the middle of the table,when she going to put candles she cant find them,Susan her neighbor says:"
Riddhima I guess candles are at my place go and brought them".Riddhima smiles and went outside,while she was heading back she heard:"Riddhima"
Riddhima who this voice is she dont want to turn back so she keeps on walking but he stops her again:"Riddhima pleaze listen to me"
Riddhima stops and without turning back she says:"There is nothing which i could hear arman"
Arman:"Riddhima pleaze!You know what when i left you ,our fighting over different things were increeasing day after day I don't want to fight with you everyday so i thought may its good for us to get separate but when i look now i admit it was my biggest mistake..riddhima to tell you the truth i don't know why it all happen and i dont have any explanation for that and i know you moved on but there is one thing which i want to tell you and never told any woman other than you its that
I LOVE YOU,AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU"riddhima didnt speak anything ,arman again say:"Riddhima plz say something"
Riddhima turn back and say:"Yes I moved on">Arman closes his eyes and was about to leave when riddhima says:"Yes i love some one ,and you know what who is he??"
Arman again look at riddhima and saw her coming towards him saying:"ITS YOU,ITS YOU ,ITS YOU AND IT WILL BE ALWAYS YOU,if i loved some one and still love its only one person and thats you".When riddhima finishes they both were extremely close their breath touching each other lips.Riddhima slowly came more closer to him and whisper at his lips i love ...the words never left her mouth as her mouth was taken by arman,he kissed her furiously,riddhima too resiprocate in same way.They broke the kiss but arman keep kissing her furiously on her face.They have tears in their eyes.Arman again again was gonna kiss when she heard her daughter and sn Arhan standing their with tears in their eyes and beside the Peter was standing.Riddhima whisper in his ear you wana know whom with i moved on.Arman look at her confuse.She smiles and say it was peter and burst into fitters of laughing along with arhan,ariha and peter.Arman kept there standing embarrass...coz peter was gay!




Okay guys this is my last attempt in writing feild, I am worst writer still some people there read my ff and os Still love you guys:) .But you people are great.Yarain has been discontinued and I had seen that thread only 7 people out 39 ask me to continue,so others don't want to read it...



Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey people out there??How r you all??
I am back with another OS on AR ...Its basically Inspire by my one of fav couple TOM AND LYNYTTE..I loved this couple!...
hope you guys like it!

ArSh VERSION
~Love wins at the end~
A man sitting on the bar having his drink,he felt a tap n his shoulder and he turns around.His heart skip seeing the face in-front of him..eve after 18 years of marriage she still hold the same control over his heart,but he overcome it soon.And panic aroused inside him as he realized she is here he immediately ask:
"What are you doing here shilpa???plz go from here Kathrine can come anytime and I dont want her to be upset on her b day plz go!"
Shilpa brought the paper out of her bag and place in front of him and says:
"Katherine is coming soon,she caught up with some work!.You tell me are you sign these papers Arman?"
Arman look the papers and was shock out of wits and how the hell she got these papers???
.He says:"Shilpa how you know Katherine is late and h-o-ow you g-o-got these pa-apers Shilpa??
Shilpa look at him with tears in her eyes and say in chock voice:"Does it really matter how I got these papers??I got these papers by your new room mate..you wanted to break our marriage ,brought divorce paper and sign them with out even considering me???Does our relationship change soo much that you dont even bother telling me??
Arman look down with guilt shining in his eyes and say:"Shilpa I really dont know how Katherine gave you these pap.."
But Shilpa cut him in between and ask:"Arman do you really want me sign these papers??you really want to break our marriage??"
Shilpa look into his eyes for answer but arman avert his gaze and look down.Shilpa sigh and without even thinking pick the pen and sign the papers and left from there without saying anything..Arman look at her retiring image with in five minutes there relationship broke..within five minutes there marriage broke!.Arman close down as tears trickle down his eyes!
*******************************************************
Shilpa drive back home in daze..she felt a strange feeling born inside..she was not in her control..She parked the car infront of the..now her house.She sigh and close her eyes to look fresh she dont want to tensed there kids.She finally look at her image in car mirror and come out of car.She was going to hose when she heard Rog throwing basket on road in.She went to them and was gonna ask when he heard roger saying :
"these doctor are mad really mad"
By saying this he went inside,Shilpa look at Karen(Roger wife,both are the old couple of Shilpa lane!).Keran look at her with teary eyes:
Keran:'Doctor told us today,my cancer is back and unfortunately spread into my whole body..now i have very few day left!:
Shilpa look at her with tears in her eyes another shock,she love this couple soo much,when ever she is in problem this couple help her but now...Shilpa was speechless,she has no word to say she just left from there.
Shilpa enter her house tired,worn out,heart broken,She close the door and lean into it,She close her eyes as tears trickle her eyes.She felt a tug on her pants she look down and saw her 11 years daughter standing there with her hands on her hips looking at her with CARE TO EXPLAIN WHERE WERE YOU?? expression.Shilpa quickly smile at her and mumble sorry baby in turn ariha reply
"What sorry mom tomorrow is my b day and we don't even done a little preparation*then she said with sad expression"tomorrow is dad last day here too he is going to india for whole year with that bitch"
Shilpa raise her voice"ARIHA,is that way to talk about your elders,go to your room I promise tomorrow's party will be great baby and now went into room do your home work I will set dinner for you"
********************************************************
Arman enter into his and Katherine apartment,he still was in thought where he and Shilpa going,he know one thing he don't want to give Shilpa divorce that's why he never was able to give her those divorce paper,but then what is Katherine to him,He thought,they have been living together for more than 3 months then why he not able to give Katherine Shilpa's place.He sighed and thought may be bcz Shilpa is my first love ,i have spent 18 years with her, and more over she is mother of my kids,but why I am not able to move on.He tried hard to know what he wanted,feeling tired and sick of his dilemma he entered his and Katherine apartment.He want to have a good nap but when he enter his apartment he saw his boss and some clients sitting in living room.He look at Katherine with confuse look who smile at him and give him peck on his lip and whisper"I have a surprise for you".Before she could say further his boss Harry got up and say
"Katherine let me do the owner*he look at arman and say"You don't want to go to mumbai rightso, you r not going">Arman look confuse and say:"Why??"
Harry:"Well all thankx to your wife,She hook up with me to stop your promotion and now she dumped me">
Arman is now hell confuse first all that divorce thing and now harry words ,he says :
"Why Shilpa dumped you ,you were dating right"
Harry:"Yeah she was dating me but only to stop you from going to india but now she found another man,and you know what arman she dumped me for some one else,well dude hats of to you you bearded her for more than 18 years"
Arman felt a different sensation he try to calm him and say:"Harry forget that lets start the presentation"..
But harry cut him between and looking towards clients he says:
"Guys this man is really great,who beared a women like her for whole 18 years,i was not even able to bear her for one week,trust me guys she is ass whole,bitch and...*then he look towards arman and say*"I am damn sure she is very bad in be..."
Before he says arman hit his face badly and says in rage:
"Never I say never ever talk about my wife like that get that you Son Of Witch,she is my wife and my love remember that"
Harry got up angrily and say:"I am never gona say bad about her coz i never gona meet her,DUDE YOU ARE FIRED"Saying this he left from there with his clients.Katherine was standing there with diffrent feelings on her face.Arman move his hand in his hairs to calm his nerves.He open his and look up.He saw Katherine looking at him with demanding expression.He took a sigh,now he knows why he is not able to leave Shilpa and give katherine her place coz there is only one woman whom he loved,loves and will love that is Shilpa.He look at Katherine and say:"Sorry Katherine ,I don't know what to say.."
Katherine cut him and say:"So,you still love her huh???then why was you with me huh??
Arman:"You are my friend,i know it will sound strange but you are that person who support me when ,my and Shilpa relation was going bad"
There was silence prevailed in the room.Then Katherine says:
"I should have already known you never love me,you still love her,i always saw that in your eyes you never remove your wedding band even after living with me for months but use to ignore but now all confusion clear *Sigh*arman bye!"
Before arman could say or stop her she left.Arman sit on sofa and stare at his wedding band,how everything change,they love each other then why this happens to them...his mobile ring he sees the caller id and smile its ariha their one and only baby doll after 2 two sons,all his worry tension what ever just seeing the id name,she is his princes bu t he remembers how she don't talk to him after he told her about him seeing Katherine,hope she now talk to me.He picks up his phone and say:
"Hey princes wats up??"
He wish to hear her cheerful voice but he heard only a question
Ariha:"Dad you coming to my b day party or not???"
Arman had tears in his eyes:"Prnices how come i will not come in your b day party you are my life baby.."
Before he could say further ariha cut him saying:"mom calling,sorry bye!"
Arman close his eyes how his princes talk to him really hurt him!
********************************
Arman park his car and look at the house,its their house,Shilpa and him.He spend his most beautiful year 18 years in this house.He knows now its anymore their ,he left Katherine but Shilpa has moved on and may tonight is last day when they meeting each other.He was about to inside the house when he saw roger sitting outside the house .Arman went to him he knows about Karen.He goes near and say :"Hi buddy how r you and how is Karen???
Rog smiles and say:" I am absolutely fine you tell?"
Arman:"Me fine too,so hows life going on??where is keran??
Roger:"She is fine sleeping.You know today for the first time in our 30 years of marriage we talk our heart out,and i told her her how much i love her.Today when i know that there is no time left for me ,i want to take it all out.Bcz from now on life is not gona give me chance to talk to her,you know this life is so small to tell our love one that we love them and care for them,some times when we want to say that,life didn't give us time,so what ever we have in our heart we should let it out,bcz no one know what happen next..."
There was silence prevailed in the peace full garden,arman can understand the double meaning of roger words,he know he is indicating to Shilpa.He close his eyes when h felt a hand on his hand he look up and saw roger seeing him.He says
:"Arman go talk to her"
Arman:"I want to go but she has moved on and i dont think she want me in her life back"
Roger:"but why not try for love".
*********************************************
Shilpa place cake in the middle of the table,when she going to put candles she cant find them,Susan her neighbor says:"
Shilpa I guess candles are at my place go and brought them".Shilpa smiles and went outside,while she was heading back she heard:"Shilpa"
Shilpa who this voice is she dont want to turn back so she keeps on walking but he stops her again:"Shilpa pleaze listen to me"
Shilpa stops and without turning back she says:"There is nothing which i could hear arman"
Arman:"Shilpa pleaze!You know what when i left you ,our fighting over different things were increeasing day after day I don't want to fight with you everyday so i thought may its good for us to get separate but when i look now i admit it was my biggest mistake..Shilpa to tell you the truth i don't know why it all happen and i dont have any explanation for that and i know you moved on but there is one thing which i want to tell you and never told any woman other than you its that
I LOVE YOU,AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU"Shilpa didnt speak anything ,arman again say:" plz Shilpa say something"
Shilpa turn back and say:"Yes I moved on">Arman closes his eyes and was about to leave when shilpa says:"Yes i love some one ,and you know what who is he??"
Arman again look at shilpa and saw her coming towards him saying:"ITS YOU,ITS YOU ,ITS YOU AND IT WILL BE ALWAYS YOU,if i loved some one and still love its only one person and thats you".When shilpa finishes they both were extremely close their breath touching each other lips.Shilpa slowly came more closer to him and whisper at his lips i love ...the words never left her mouth as her mouth was taken by arman,he kissed her furiously,Shilpa too resiprocate in same way.They broke the kiss but arman keep kissing her furiously on her face.They have tears in their eyes.Arman again again was gonna kiss when she heard her daughter and sn Arhan standing their with tears in their eyes and beside the Peter was standing.Shilpa whisper in his ear you wana know whom with i moved on.Arman look at her confuse.She smiles and say it was peter and burst into fitters of laughing along with arhan,ariha and peter.Arman kept there standing embarrass...coz peter was gay!




Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE ON Yarian thread dont miss it!
its really important:)

Yarian page 51



Thank you note:)


Here was the last peace of work written by me:) well may be if i got some idea will write an os
I wana thank geet api,roshniapi,Srishti,Kas mannet fan,Fri491 ,ammy 12
thank you soo much every one,may be i miss the names but i love you all:)

Bye Bye see you all around
thankx for bearing my writting
love you
maria:)
Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey sis come to mb cc or your cc
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Originally posted by: mijanur

Hey sis come to mb cc or your cc



I am comming bro
was updating:)
Posted: 13 years ago
Great one shot.
Complte it soon.

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