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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear...First of all toh congrats .you became IF-Rokerzzz.👍🏼...Now coming to the update...Loved i to the core👏...Flashback moments are treat to read..OMG..Armaan and his anger... love AR moments ...try to update soon...Thanks for the PM..Take care

Lots of Love
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sweety
amazing updt!
loved the flashback!
loved AR moments!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey sweety 😊😊
Whass up?????????😊
I am sooner than i myself expected😆😆 at least i made it on the 1 part unlike the previous time...
for the part, its definitly veryyy beautiful...the way u described AR confession is soo brilliant...i liked it...😊😊😊
but i can found a streak of aggressiveness and violence in this Armaan too...
just thinks he is always like that...😕😕
He loves Riddhima .thats sure but he can't help beeing violent and obsessive over her...
really good going buddy...👏ClapClapClap
And don't be afraid...its not too much adult that u hav written😉😉
love 😊
roshni
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey riaaa

wassup buddy nice update

luvd d strtin scene

n also possesionm of armaan over shilpa

as he ws nt allowin her to tok to ayaan

i ws feelin lk butterflies in my stomach 😆

kip writin buddy

cont soon

n thnx fr d pm

luv

Bipin

Edited by arsh4life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wana thankx these people who pres like button,😊
...Doctor..., blue_lotus22, roshni_A, khush1432, kritika_n, miss93, hotKaJen, backy, vidu87, sweetdesire, anumeha_rajat, kashishk, sweetsurabhi94,

PART 4 (AR VERSION)

After that day,there confesion every thing changes ,riddhima and arman completed their studeis after 2 years,in these two years their love increase day day.Then after completion they do marriage and after about a mounth they got to know that they gona be parents and aramn sadi to riddhima that he now wana go back to his home,his country.Riddhima happily agree to him.After comming to india riddhima felt happy as she for the fisrt time met her in laws but when arman took her to his kabela she was surprised to see the surrounding,but she dont say anything but when she came to know that aramn has two mom she felt teribly strange.But thr world snacthed under her feet wehn she came to know that arman was already married.Ater that riddhima felt extremly bad,she asked arman for divorce.But arman said her that on any scost arman will not leave her.From that till now she and arman never share good relation.
FlashBack ends...
Riddhima towards arman side again and look at his face.She still not beleive in just one year ,only one year her whole life changes.But now she has to do sommething she has to for herself,for her son's future.She for the last time look at arman face and then she went into deep slumber...
Next morning when riddhima feels some one hands on her waist,she suddenly wakes up and sit but then relax a bit when she realises that its arman's hand.Riddhima look at time and realises its 8 am,she tried to remove arman's hand from her waist but arman hand's get tightned.Due to riddhima strugles arman gets up , look towards riddhima and smiles and moves towards her and kiss her on her forehead.Riddhima closes her eyes ,when arman saw riddhima closed eyes he leaned more closer to her and kisses on eyes then on lips.The kiss was quit furious. Their kiss broke due to voices comming from outside,from hall.Arman quickly went to hall and was amused to see a girl of riddhima age siting with his father in bridal dress and was crying.Arman ask:Baba ye kon hai??.He replied:tumhari nai ma or is kabela ki nai sardarni.Arman second mother shabana says:arman baba inko salam kaho.Arman look at his mother and saw same expresion ,Blank expresion and says:aslam,baba mai ja k tayar hota hai.Before going arman for once again and look at his mom as if asking for something,he wana ask her why she is not saying anything why???.Arman angerily enter his room and closed the door making loud noise.Riddhima was playing with arhan and when she saw arman wiith such anger she felt afraid, so she put arhan on the bed and go towards him,and placed her hand on arman shoulder.Arman turns backward and hugg riddhima tightly and cries his heart out and says: riddhima again again he did thid to my mother why??why?he did this to my mom or ma phir chup wo kuch nahi bolti wo kuch nahi,phir unka chehra per koi expresion nahi,ridhima mai 28 sal ka ho aj tak mai na kabhi meri ma ko muskrata huwa nahi dekha ,wo kabhi nahi kuch bolti kabhi.Riddhima hugg him back and try to sooth him by rubbing his back like a baby.After a while arman calms down a down and look at her face with sorrow and grief.Riddhima couldnt hold herself back so she hugged him again.After that he get ready and took arhan with him.Riddhima came out of room .She want to meet armans riddhima,she wana know why she is like this,it has been a 8 to 9 mounth but she never talk to armans mother,she wana talk to her.Shw was going towards arman mothers room but she stopped when she heard the voice of a girl crying and pleading from armans father room,riddhima stood on her spot ,she wanted to go insdie and help that poor girl but she cant get the courage to do so.She quickly runs towards her room and lock herself in a room.Riddhima felt hell bad she is feeling afraid for herself for her son,she had never gone through such kind of situation.
In the evening se agains go towards armans first mother room.When she enters room,the room was dark but in some place where table and chair kept ,the lamp light is present.She saw many books in the room. she look keenly the room and finds that it is very creative.Then she saw a english book and when was about to pick the book she heard a faint yet beutiful voice :"kon hai".Riddhima turns around and saw arman's mother standing there,riddhima always admire her beauty,she is simple yet amazingly very beutiful.She saw many womens,english women but this women ,she has diffrent spark.Riddhima chain of thought broke by armans mother again:ap yaha kia kar rahi ho yaha???Riddhima says:ap kasi ho,apse meri kabhi bhi ziada bat nahi hui.Armans mother:Hum,she took a sigh and miles then she continued :hum bilkul theek hai,ap yaha per kio ai hai??Riddhima was amzed the she spoke bcz in this house no one speaks so weel defined but this women she has beutiful voice yet her way of speaking s very good.Riddhima replies:mai apse milna ai ho,ap apna kamra se zida bahir nahi niklati.But the women doesnt reply further.Riddhima speaks again:mai apse ak bat poccho have you ever been to some foriegn country bcz i czn sense british assence in your voice???.Arman's mom sigh and say :ha hum Enlgand se hai,jaha se ap ai hai,per ab to bhoht sal ho gai hai humay yaha ked kar...mera kena ka matlab hai shadi kar k ai hua.Riddhima: nai ap na pehlla kuch or kaha tha.


1 ins of my 2 last part guys,thats it for now will update on weekand,i guess so....

ARSH version scroll down

NOTE
ONE imp think only those will get pm who had commented or even press like button
and if this time i dont get good repnse i will not give the update
and only those will pasrt through pm who realy wana read and had commented
sorry for sounding rude
maria

maria😊
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wana thankx these people who pres like button,😊
KSGforever08, Nihson, kritika_n, akshad, KSG-ROOP, Kashkidiwani, moonlight2630, meeru_s_armaan, vidu87, zigzagway_sadi, backy, priyanki, fri42911, krazy4kash, teenorchid, sweetdesire, KaSh-Maneet-Fan, anumeha_rajat,

PART 3 (ARSH VERSION)

After that day,there confesion every thing changes ,Shilpa and arman completed their studeis after 2 years,in these two years their love increase day day.Then after completion they do marriage and after about a mounth they got to know that they gona be parents and aramn sadi to Shilpa that he now wana go back to his home,his country.Shilpa happily agree to him.After comming to india shilpa felt happy as she for the fisrt time met her in laws but when arman took her to his kabela she was surprised to see the surrounding,but she dont say anything but when she came to know that aramn has two mom she felt teribly strange.But her world snacthed under her feet wehn she came to know that arman was already married.Ater that shilpa felt extremly bad,she asked arman for divorce.But arman said her that on any scost arman will not leave her.From that till now she and arman never share good relation.
FlashBack ends...
Shilpa towards arman side again and look at his face.She still not beleive in just one year ,only one year her whole life changes.But now she has to do sommething she has to for herself,for her son's future.She for the last time look at arman face and then she went into deep slumber...
Next morning when shilpa feels some one hands on her waist,she suddenly wakes up and sit but then relax a bit when she realises that its arman's hand.Shilpa look at time and realises its 8 am,she tried to remove arman's hand from her waist but arman hand's get tightned.Due to shilpa strugles arman gets up , look towards shilpa and smiles and moves towards her and kiss her on her forehead.Shilpa closes her eyes ,when arman saw shilpa closed eyes he leaned more closer to her and kisses on eyes then on lips.The kiss was quit furious. Their kiss broke due to voices comming from outside,from hall.Arman quickly went to hall and was amused to see a girl of shilpa age siting with his father in bridal dress and was crying.Arman ask:Baba ye kon hai??.He replied:tumhari nai ma or is kabela ki nai sardarni.Arman second mother shabana says:arman baba inko salam kaho.Arman look at his mother and saw same expresion ,Blank expresion and says:aslam,baba mai ja k tayar hota hai.Before going arman for once again and look at his mom as if asking for something,he wana ask her why she is not saying anything why???.Arman angerily enter his room and closed the door making loud noise.Shilpa was playing with arhan and when she saw arman wiith such anger she felt afraid, so she put arhan on the bed and go towards him,and placed her hand on arman shoulder.Arman turns backward and hugg shilpa tightly and cries his heart out and says: shilpa again again he did thid to my mother why??why?he did this to my mom or ma phir chup wo kuch nahi bolti wo kuch nahi,phir unka chehra per koi expresion nahi,shilpa mai 28 sal ka ho aj tak mai na kabhi meri ma ko muskrata huwa nahi dekha ,wo kabhi nahi kuch bolti kabhi.Shilpa hugg him back and try to sooth him by rubbing his back like a baby.After a while arman calms down a down and look at her face with sorrow and grief.Shilpa couldnt hold herself back so she hugged him again.After that he get ready and took arhan with him.Shilpa came out of room .She want to meet armans shilpa,she wana know why she is like this,it has been a 8 to 9 mounth but she never talk to armans mother,she wana talk to her.Shw was going towards arman mothers room but she stopped when she heard the voice of a girl crying and pleading from armans father room,shilpa stood on her spot ,she wanted to go insdie and help that poor girl but she cant get the courage to do so.She quickly runs towards her room and lock herself in a room.Shilpa felt hell bad she is feeling afraid for herself for her son,she had never gone through such kind of situation.
In the evening she agains go towards armans first mother room.When she enters room,the room was dark but in some place where table and chair kept ,the lamp light is present.She saw many books in the room. she look keenly the room and finds that it is very creative.Then she saw a english book and when was about to pick the book she heard a faint yet beutiful voice :"kon hai"Shilpa turns around and saw arman's mother standing there,shilpa always admire her beauty,she is simple yet amazingly very beutiful.She saw many womens,english women but this women ,she has diffrent spark.Shilpa chain of thought broke by armans mother again:ap yaha kia kar rahi ho yaha???Shilpa says:ap kasi ho,apse meri kabhi bhi ziada bat nahi hui.Armans mother:Hum,she took a sigh and miles then she continued :hum bilkul theek hai,ap yaha per kio ai hai??Shilpa was amzed the she spoke bcz in this house no one speaks so weel defined but this women she has beutiful voice yet her way of speaking s very good.Shilpa replies:mai apse milna ai ho,ap apna kamra se zida bahir nahi niklati.But the women doesnt reply further.Shilpa speaks again:mai apse ak bat poccho have you ever been to some foriegn country bcz i czn sense british assence in your voice???.Arman's mom sigh and say :ha hum Enlgand se hai,jaha se ap ai hai,per ab to bhoht sal ho gai hai humay yaha ked kar...mera kena ka matlab hai shadi kar k ai hua.Shilpa: nai ap na pehlla kuch or kaha tha.



^thats it for now ,1 ins of 2 last part ,will update whole part on weekand,hope so😆



IMPORTANT NOTE:)
ONE imp think only those will get pm who had commented or even press like button
and if this time i dont get good repnse i will not give the update
and only those will pasrt through pm who realy wana read and had commented
sorry for sounding rude
maria 😊
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
resd..
superb instalmnt
luvd it
jldi jldi part ko complete kro plzzz
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
Edited by vidu87 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Ria thank u sweety 4 the wonderful update n the pm😃.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Eww so armaan has another wife too?
Ew
Cont soon loved it lol

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