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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aditya Dixit:


Ritesh Shah:


Atul Dhingra


Kajal:


These are the characters, i hope you can relate to the part better with these.
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Edited by sindhyaa. - 13 years ago
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Chapter 4:

Ritesh Shah

College which had once seemed so tough to handle now seemed so easy. I was sure this would surprise Kanika, my best friend since school. She was in the same college as me, only a little smarter, and hence in electronics, as compared to me, I am in civil. Our class was among all the classes of our batch, the most enjoyable one. It was our antics that annoyed teachers so bad, that the Head of department "HOD" had twice visited our class giving us a pleasant lecture on how they would get us kicked out of the college, disappointingly they had changed their mind at the last moment with a stupid apology letter a weirdo, Shanmugham Iyer from our class had written to our HOD on behalf of our entire class, as though we had asked for it.

Now the HOD thought we were truly sorry and was now a little distracted from us. Sad right? I know. The HOD's company is so very pleasing to us in such a degrading way that we find it quiet annoying to have him not pay attention to us. But again that's how life is right? If you want to win something, you got to lose something.

Although im still not sure what we won out of the ordeal that is worth giving up our great HOD's company, my new college friends Aditya Dixit and Atul Dhingra seem to think we will find out the consequences pretty soon.

Aditya and Atul are two idiots I never thought I'd end up hanging around with. Specifically Atul. Atul was an insane brainiac. Everytime he spoke, it made you look around wondering whether you're the only one who felt like he'd entered some weird scientific world that you understood nothing about. But when he wasn't talking to the teachers trying to act oversmart, he actually sounded normal. He was quiet shy and tiresome at most times, but still, in a really weird way he was fun to hang around with, specially when Aditya was around. Aditya was a guy I could relate to a lot. He was outspoken, fun and extremely annoying, just like me. And with the two of them, life in college was actually quiet enjoyable. There were only three girls in our class, Kajal Mehta, Purnima Tambe and Chayya Sharma.

Kajal Mehta was a boyish girl. If it were me, I wouldn't even call her a girl. She was a complete boy. Everything she did reminded me of boys. Her walk, her talks, everything. On the other hand, Purnima Tambe was downright girlish. She got a "Handbag" to college. She wore shorts clothes to the extremes, that most guys found hot. I find it hard to accept that even now. Purnima was a dwarf. She was so short that her clothes looked like she'd stolen baby clothes from some shop. She was more on the fat side which made her look downright abysmal to even think of wearing such clothes, even worse was I couldn't imagine how she travelled in trains wearing those clothes.

Chayya Sharma on the other hand was a new species in our class, she was unfigurable, she seemed like Atul in the form of a girl, in her behavior, smart, shy and quiet. She was somewhere between Purnima and Kajal. She wasn't totally boyish and she wasn't abysmally girlish like Purnima. She was more on the normal side, and yet she dint like socializing, or rather she dint make any effort to bother.

She was pretty, and wore nice clothes, and hence in the beginning I'd thought she was one of those extremely conceited girls that you met in the pubs sometimes, but no, I had been wrong there. Not a single conceited snobbish girl would've ever given Atul Dhingra a second look, not one. But chayya did. She actually hanged around with him a lot in the practical periods.

In the practical periods, I would pair up with Aditya to perform the experiment and Atul would pair up with Chayya to perform the same. In the beginning heads had turned in their directions whenever such things happened, but soon we got used to them hanging around together, and of course the tragedy that the only normal and pretty girl in the class made an effort to talk to the only lame brainiac in the class.

Half our trimester was over and we were completely loaded with work in the form of assignments and tests. Atul was almost always busy helping Aditya out. I on the other hand had to do all my work alone without any help or guidance. And hence it wasn't news to me when people started saying that I look too tired, or I seem too worked up. What else could I possibly do?

I mostly sat alone these days at the back of the class trying my level best to finish all my work in between these classes. Even on the trains sometimes I would have a book propped open in front of me, trying my best to focus, pushing out all other thoughts from my head. It was on one of these ordeals that I for the first time talked to Chayya Sharma.

She was sitting on the platform in the Andheri station waiting for the train. She lived in Panvel and hence had to change the train in wadala, just like me, I lived in Kharghar. Atul and Aditya lived near churchgate and hence took another train. From my platform I could see them loitering around on the platform adjacent to mine as they waited for the train.

Adityas new love interest, Kajal was also on the platform, and it seemed he was annoying her by singing girlish love songs specifically for her. I knew it was working because I could see a huge scowl on her face. I laughed to myself as I took a seat beside Chayya. She looked up and then without a word she turned back to her phone. I got perked up with the challenge. I started staring at Chayya. If I was going to ever become her friend, it was now or never.

It took just a few seconds for her to look up again; I smiled. She gave me a shifty smile back. I introduced myself even though we both knew each others names. It was one of those things that you just HAD to do to become friends.

"How about getting into the general compartment with me today?" I decided to annoy her.

"How about getting into the ladies compartment with me today?" She gave me a one of those over-smart looks that I sometimes got from Atul.

"You're staying too much with Atul"

"Problem?"

I stared at her. Definitely not the conceited type I told myself.

"Just as long as the ladies don't kick me out."

"Ill do the talking?" She smiled broadly. Funny how much more prettier a person looks if they smile, I thought. She was definitely not a girl I wanted to miss in here, like I had much of a choice, but still.

I wanted to be over smart like Atul and say, "I no longer worry about being a brilliant conversationalist. I simply try to be a good listener. I notice that people who do that are usually welcome wherever they go"

But then I thought, if she knew Atul, she definitely would know this one was said by Frank Bettger.

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That's all that I could write. Im sorry about the huge delay.

Hope you guys like it.

Love

Sindhya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for updating this awesome update!!!!
loved it.
esp. Chayya and Ritesh's convo.
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Part 5
Unnati Bhatt

Finally it was the night of the freshers, a night that nearly all of us were desperately waiting for. Our college had been a refreshing suprise for me, the guys were not just good looking and nice, they were also extremely comfortable with hanging around with girls, unlike in my old school. It was easier to hang around with guys out here and that somehow added to the excitement of it all. I couldnt wait for the freshers event to start.

At first i had planned to get ready at vishalakshis place, one of my newest close friends. But i had decided against it when she had given me a straight no on my face, because vishalakshi was going to her childhood best friend, chayya's place in order to get ready for it. This of course wasn't so surprising as it happened, i had just a few days ago witnessed chayya and vishalakshi having a screaming match because of the absymal amount of time visha spent with us rather than with her. It wasn't our fault anyway that we were a much more enjoyable company to have as compared to her, i thought. But i dint say a word.

Whatever little liking i had towards chayya on the orientation had all but vanished. Now if you ever see me hanging around with her, it would only be out of compulsion.
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So now i had decided to get ready with niharika, another girl who i liked hanging around with in college. Niharika sachdev was rich and snobby but i guessed it would be easier having her as your friend rather than your enemy. She lived in ville parle which was so close to our college that we could easily reach college in less than 10 mins even with traffic.

Me and niharika reached college at about 6 30 after having a great time dressing up and trying quiet a few new dresses of hers.

It took us only a few minutes to look around and find our classmates. There i saw huddled in a group sipping a drink, amit, vishalakshi, nihal and karan.

"She sure knows how to keep boys hooked." Niharika whispered to me. I gave an inaudible laugh. Vishalakshi, to be precise, looked absolutely stunning. She had tied hair with streaks of brown and grey in it. She was wearing a polka dot dress which looked prett and classy. And she was animatedly chatting with all the three boys together.


She sure has a great taste in dressing" i replied. Niharika nodded with a frown on her face. It was obvious she wasn't used to being sidetracked, specially when it came to boys. I smirked and walked ahead

The freshers was exactly how i had thought it would be. Fun, fun and more fun. It started with some nice music, talks and of course pictures with nearly everyone i knew, even if it was only by the face. I surprised myself by clicking a picture with chayya as well, who to my surprise dint look at all withdrawn and shabby as she had on the first day. She was wearing a green colored knee length flowy dress with great looking accessories. And to top it all of she was hanging around witb 3 amazing looking guys and a punk girl. Together the 5 of them looked like they were having the time of their lives.

Later that night i left home with amit on his bike. He was in an exceptionally good mood and kept cracking jokes all the way back home. Though it was a nice change, it still aroused an intense suspicion in me. What had created such intense euphoria within amit and who had he been hanging around with all through in the freshers?

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Short right? I promise to write a longer part next time.
Hope you like this one.
Sindhya
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Edited by sindhyaa. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice parts, cindy!
so there are new characters? okay, there are a lot of characters now!
chayya is hanging out with a whole different crowd. she was kind of like the nerd, and thats why she got along with atul.
ritesh found her a little descent compared to the other girls, but then she didn't mingle n stuff. he talked to her in the station once, and kind of liked her!
unnati was friends with niharika just for the sake of it, but whats the point? and V was getting a lot of attention from guys. thats interesting!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful FF..
Plz add me in your so list..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great one!!!!! yes, next time i want it long with amit and chayya scene, pretty please😃.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice parts... but there was no amit in these two :(
rietesh sounds interesting... looking fwd to read more 😊

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