Translucence - Finished. - Page 88

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

193.2k

Users

115

Likes

5.8k

Frequent Posters

Tyro thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

dileep khrana is the one who committed the sin n now every1 is paying for it...

this time i actually feel sorry for vikram...seems like even he also hates what he has become...all coz his father...

maan as COO of vikram's comp...that wud be exciting to c...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part.

Thanks for the pm.
6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago


mind blowing update Sookie...some decisions made by parents destroy their children's life...today Vikram hates himself but he can't go back now...

thanx for pm
Lily201 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
That was another eye-opener of an update -- again I feel the effects of reeling from shock 😲- truly the first time the Khurana family talked under the same roof--I thought all of them were more or less single minded & idiosyncratic considering each of them had their own flaw or vice & that made them fight the other.
But Vikram-Dileep's discussion turned tables completely - they were once just normal people with their individual ambitions - which were crushed due to their not so fatherly patriarch. Sr Khurana sort of went overboard in his bid to save the capital 'n' ostensibly teach his offsprings independently handling of the rough side of business when he left them wanton.
So Vikram's explanation shows why the bro-sis duo of Mitalee-Vikram are so rigidly stingy & adopt the foul tactics they did.But still the misunderstanding between the siblings needs clarification coz of their daddy's dearest negligence they stand against the other.
So we have Maan trying to assess the situation -by actually taking the leadership of Khurana Capital-- why do I think its gonna get ugly -considering that new revelation to Vikram of Dileep softening up 'n' making exception for Maan as well ??
Another thing---what brought the sudden sympathy & change in Sr Khurana that he wants to assuage his wrongs & right the bad side of his children at this point??😕
Edited by Lily201 - 13 years ago
-Sookie- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Disclaimer: Chapter is not edited. Apologies for any errors.

Chapter 24:

"And you are here because…" Geet trailed her eyes full of sleep and stifling a yawn. Maan was at her door and seven in the morning on a Sunday which also happened to be her off day.

"I woke up today morning and I realized that you and I haven't spent any quality time together." Maan said chirpily bringing his face a mere inch away from hers. Geet raised an eyebrow. "So let's go somewhere." Maan gave her a big grin. Maan's grin faltered when there was no reply from her.

Geet looked at him for a moment and promptly slammed the door shut on his face.

Maan's jaw dropped.

"Geeet." He knew he was whining like a three year old but he didn't care.

"I want to sleep Maan. Let's meet when its morning, alright?" Geet said from other side of the door, her voice already away from the door.

"Its seven in the morning darling," he shouted.

There was silence for several moments. He wondered if Geet was being serious and he had managed to piss her off this early in the morning.

"Morning as in three in the afternoon idiot," she replied breezily.

"Oh come on Geet don't be like this. Should I go to hospital, get myself admitted and proclaim an emergency stating that only my personal doctor can touch me?" Maan said still yelling through the door. He heard shuffling of feet from other side of the door which encouraged him a bit.

"Oohh…so we have a doctor-patient fantasy going on between us; you in your blue scrubs and I in hospital gown. And then there is the VIP suit with a comfy couch and soft bed," said Maan wickedly. "Didn't think you were of this type Geet," he chuckled. He could only imagine how red Geet would have turned; not from embarrassment but from anger. She hated when he casually passed on sexual innuendos when she was working.

"That image is quite disturbing," said a voice from the now opened door.

Maan's jaw dropped.

"Geet left minutes ago and I think it was sometime when you talked about doctor-patient fantasy," Maya said repressing her laughter. Maan flushed and tried to come up with a coherent response.

"Cool it handsome. I'll see if I can convince Geet to go out with you, alright?" Maya said kindly. Maan hadn't fully recovered to formulate a decent response. He simply nodded swallowing hard. Idiot.

Maan sat down and literally twiddle his thumbs waiting for Maya aunty to show up with or without demon-Geet. He knew it for a fact that she hated waking up early during off days and even when they were kids, Sunday mornings used to start somewhere around noon for her.

"Can you wait for thirty minutes?" Maya's voice came from hallway. Maan stood up automatically as soon as she walked into the living room.

"Of course, I will." Maan sighed in relief.

"I am sorry but you will have to tend to yourself till Geet comes. Actually Tara and I are headed for the airport," Maya said flustered at their predicament.

"Oh, please don't apologize Maya aunty. I will be fine." Maan replied.

"Actually I am more worried about you and Geet being here unsupervised," Nayantara said coming in. Maya flushed at her daughter's comment.

He might as well paint his face scarlet if he started letting every darn comment affect him. He cleared his throat hiding the nervousness of being in the same room as his potential life partner's mother and sister for the first time.

"We are what? Fifteen year olds?" Maan asked with his trademark blase indifference.

"Oh no, no, no; my sister is a responsible adult where as you – are an irresponsible little prick with no moral constraints who goes around and breaks hearts of poor women." Nayantara was pissed at him. He fathomed he deserved it for insulting her or passing sarcastic remarks whenever they met at a social gathering. She was sort of president or founder of his hate club; if there was one, that is.

"That is enough." Maya's voice was hard. Nayantara fumed at him and walked past without as much a spare glance at him or her mother as she walked past her.

"Sorry Maan but we should be really leaving now." Maya said and turned around to leave but faltered. "Don't break her heart again Maan," she said softly. Maan swallowed hard. "There won't be a next time," she said and disappeared in the hallway. Maan sat back on the sofa, Maya's voice ringing in his head.

-- o00o --

"I am here. Now what?" Geet said announcing herself to Maan who was reading a magazine. He stood up at smiled wanly at her.

"We can go out for breakfast and then for a drive." He said.

"I don't like sun," said Geet flatly. Maan stared at her.

"Pardon?" Maan was sure if a mosquito was to fly into his mouth, he probably wouldn't notice it.

"Are you deaf? I said I don't like going out in sunshine," replied Geet irritated. He was kind of anticipating the annoyance and the irritation but really, who doesn't like sunshine? Was she serious?

"Seriously?" He didn't know why he asked the same thing again.

She merely shot him a death glare.

"No problem at all. We can entertain ourselves indoors," Maan replied hurriedly. "We can simply cuddle up right here," he said patting the sofa.

"I prefer no-physical contact." She said. Maan cursed his bad luck.

"We can sit and talk?" Maan didn't know he was asking or proposing a solution.

"We can use cellphones for that," she ensured that sarcasm didn't ooze out completely.

"How about we watch a movie?"

"I have migraine." Her answer was ready.

"How about I go home?" Maan asked, frustration creeping in.

"Please don't go," she said, again without missing a beat. Maan looked at her sharply. He sighed.

"You want to stay at home but you don't want to talk or come anywhere near me or want to indulge in any entertainment activity. Have I got it right?" Maan asked.

"Perfect." She replied serenely.

"Cook lunch," said Maan after moments of thinking.

"Eh?" She looked surprised. "At seven frigging in the morning?"

"Sure, why not?" Maan shrugged. Geet looked at him as if he had suddenly sprouted another arm or something.

"Fine. What do you want to eat?" She said walking towards kitchen.

He was taken aback at her sudden acceptance.

"You know my favorites," he said hoping she wouldn't make a big deal out of it.

"Whatever. But am not chopping any vegetables," she replied and continued her walk. He sighed in relief.

"I'll do that." He said allowing a goofy grin to take over his face.

As he cut vegetables at snail pace, he watched Geet performing various tasks around the kitchen and maintaining a casual conversation with him about weather, hospital, inflation, random music bands, odd facts etc. When they weren't talking, they worked in compatible silence without pressurizing themselves to talk something, anything. There wasn't any need for that.

She stuck a spoon in his mouth and raised an eyebrow non-verbally asking about the taste. He merely nodded in response, his heart hammering in his chest so loudly that he swore even she could hear it. She continued to buzz around the kitchen talking to him about something mundane when he realized that this was one of those moments which one would tell their kids and their grandchildren when they spoke of past and good memories. It would also become the memory that he would hold on to in future whenever he felt the suffocation that he usually felt in a relationship.

This memory, the one of many, would make him breathe deeper.

This realization was long time coming.

I love her.

To be continued.

Music companion for the day: Who says you can't go home by Bon Jovi featuring Jennifer Nettles

Maaneet099 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
res
OMG OMG OMG OMGGG that was f****ing beautiful (plz negate my curse... i do that when i am extremely happy or sad n this case is the former 😃)
finally that buddhu realized he loved her?? i am going to read this update several times before i can calm my nerves... uff... thats the best update i have read for the day 😃 gracias!! he better realize he can never suffocate in this relationship with geet.

PS: Moi First!! 😳
Edited by Maaneet099 - 13 years ago
richiiiii thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
even my heart is hammering in my chest
godd...that was awesome...
*off to re-read it*
--edit--
i hate cutting vegetables too...😆
Edited by richiiiii - 13 years ago
mechantefille thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
For a character like Maan that you painted - the sheer teenager feel, the veneration that you made out of his actions was so buoyant...for a minute I thought I was reading some other FF- n then I thought I could see spring flowers and happy colours erupt out, around Maneet.

But, then again - it's just the acknowledgement to self,that might get Maan to work ahead and move faster...towards his aim and towards getting his woman.

Sook, you sure know how to surprise me.
I gotta be honest...a lot of Economics tends to put me off and this was just the respite I needed - so go on get back to the intrigue - I've been enervated! 🤗

sorry for the late comment.
luv
Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
Raina123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update that was great!!!!!finally the realization dawn upon maan ,finally some maan and geet alone time 😍.lets see where this leads

eagrly looking frwrd to the next update 😉
update soon
raina 👏
Edited by Raina123 - 13 years ago
ninand thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
aww.. an endearing Maan, from an insistent kid, to a blushing would-be bride(😆), to a man with a happy realization.. his imagination really tickled me- he had it down to telling stories to their grandkids !

Damn sweet update Sookie.. Continue soon !


Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".