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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

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The update has echoes of the last one - One decision by Dileep had impacted Mitalee n Vikram so much.

I can feel the adrenalin racing at the mere thought of Maan joinin K capital,

It's gonna be goo - oh so good - But I'm sure Vikram's gonna make it a Herculean Task for him.

Loved it Sook!

Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

awesomee!
cont soon
thank for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

I was so here first 😆 It just took me some time to read.

These people can only blame others. Maan blames his parents for the way he is. Vickram blames Dileep for the way he is. But then again I guess they're not all to wrong, a persons surroundings compel them to take extreme routes whether they want to or not.

Has Dileep really changed? I think he has, but knowing you anything can happen. Maybe with old age he is softening a tad bit. He reminds me of my grandma and V-M of my uncles 😳 Trust me, they are a lot alike.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

part 23
OMG this clan seriously always surprise me...
to everyone its like Dileep failed to make it good for his sons...
everyone has got the other to blame for their present scenario...
cont soon...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

Wow. The beginning of the chapter was all nice and light (kinda) and then BANG! That was something. Just not sure, what it was. All I can say is that, I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the update, Sookie!

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

wow too many techy details that my brain needs time digesting... but as for the update i am seeing more of the charac... Varun is capable i have deeling if steered well he could be of great help to Maan... as for Vikram i am seeing he is vulnerable too i wouldnt say the circustances made him the man he is but he chose to become one n Dileep cannot be blamed too much as a father. Vikram had Pratap uncle to guide him of course anything needs to be earned n i feel Maan is given what he wants because Dileep really feels the guilt of ignoring him but Vikram was given everything so he needs to earn a position as an heir...

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-Deepzz-

@-Deepzz-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

As they say making different choices shapes one's destiny . And every choice carries a consequence ... Dileep chose to not help his elder children...Vikram chose to take an easy path of shortcut deals to climb up the corporate ladder and lost himself...Mitalee chose to blame Maan and her father's lack of attention as her reasons for treading in the direction she took...

I would say the characters in your fic are very flawed and human ...I have actually come across such persons in real life..It is very rare to see an ethical person in this competitive world these days.

Fab chapter Sookie 👍🏼

On that note...My fav quote...

In the long run, we shape our lives, and we shape ourselves. The process never ends until we die. And the choices we make are ultimately our own responsibility.--Eleanor Roosevelt

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

awesome update...showing various loopholes as well as various techniques companies follow to manage their capital, for showing profit, for increasing revenue what not...i think their are many twists in past, no one is ready to reveal past...every one has their own reason for not reveling past like love, hate, corrupt etc...