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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Are we in the que?

Is piyar ko mai kiya naam doan...

Love and hate...

I like this Maan...Smarty pants...

Well the truth bites and thats what Maan is pro in it...Love it...

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Hey Sooks

This one was more like you, with your nice sarcastic humor. Completely loved it.

So Maan is the unwanted guy in the family. He gives nice reactions by the way. His equation with his father is surprising.

Yeah, and I like Mitali too (for some weird reason)

As for Geet, its that combination of intelligent and gullible.

I was actually thinking up different reasons of Maan landing up all bashed up at night. :S Insomnia strikes!

Good to read some funny stuff. With thinly veiled serious issues of course

Thanks for the PM

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

This is going to be very very interesting read.. thanks a bunch for the update. looking forward to the next part.

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imshveta

@imshveta

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Ahh atleast in this one he thinks she is a naive idiot.
I can see their banter getting mire and more interesting.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

These two have be bemused and incredibly happy 😆 Awww the hate that emanates makes me giddy with excitement as to what hotness they shall personify in the next update 😉 Hmm . . . So MG seem to know each other better then I thought. Maan knows NT!? 😲

OH and the dysfunctional Khurana family is just a happy puzzle to be solved (or not) 😆 Loved it Sookie 😃

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Liz

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shona

@shona2010

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Loved it...

awesum update...

waiting for the next part

thaxx for the pm

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Your user-name beats mine in alphabetical order Faria...I guess you receive pms before than I do...Sooks...I object...damn...🤣🤣

Coming to the update:🤓

What a colorful family...ek se bar kar ek...🤣🤣

So dont we have a super-intelligent-but-in-hibernation hero...😳

He knows chess...that makes himsharp.😎

He admires art...that makes him human.😳

He does not marry to avoid heart break for his wife...that makes him considerate.

He knows about shirts...well that makes him whatever...😉

So there is a lot more to Maan Singh Khurana than what meets the eye.😉

One tight slap to NT...such a conniving low-life...😡😡

But the silver-lining...Maan was furious because Geet got manipulated?😉☺️

Is that a hint Sooks...😉

Please promise a happy ending Sooks...😃

Thanx for the pm...🤗

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

Geet wanted to soothe his pain fast 😳 Either she does feel for him or she just wants to get rid of him 😆 And knowing you Sookie, it's probably the latter. I second you Faria 😆

How in the world do you know men's shirts have buttons on the left and women's on the right? Imma go check my shirts 😆 It's correct, I was impressed reading that...its with the pants too...

Feel bad for Geet in the last paragraph, it really did offend her. And if her sister was intending what Maan implied she is a real bitch. But then again most older sisters are 😆 Hey watch out...i'm the oldest...But sure my baby bro might agree with you...😆

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Wow.. I love how they both are ready to chop-off each others head.. Geet in literal sense and Maan, making sure she is totally pissed off.. I liked the FedEx patience one.. I was laughing like anything when I read it.. Waiting for more.. Are we going to get daily updates on this one?? Pls say yes.. 😉