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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

That was brilliant! Loved it! Can't wait to read more of translucence

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Hey Sooks ,Congrats!! Very interesting start. Geet's comments cracked me up!😆 The girl molesting Maan??Gosh!!🤣

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

congrats new FF 🥳

brilliant start👏⭐️

me already in love with ur geet

she so sweet to cover for friend

wow she popular doc

love how she gave him insulting dose

maan sounds playboy

pls do cont soon

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: manashi
me late...nahiii🤢

Edited:

"There are two kinds of writer: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder."

- Brian Aldiss😊

Hats off to you Sooks...👏👏

I have already fallen for your Geet...😳

Smart : The way she handled the intern😳

Witty: The way she retorted to that wannabe model😆

Intelligent: She is a doc, thats given😎

Helpful: She is filling in for her friend even when she is hell tired👏

Popular : The way the nurse interacted with her😃

Just one update Sooks and you have established her character...

Now coming to Devil Singh Khurana : Generally characters like this have golden hearts...but we never know with you Sooks...😆

Why do I have a feeling that he gets drunk and ill purposefully just to get into the hospital to stay close to Geet...and this whole making out was the good old "go green" technique?😎😈

Congratulations Sooks on your new story...and if morning shows the day...this is gonna be fun...

Thanx for the pm love...🤗

That was Fantabulouse Manashiii

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sush1

@sush1

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

This is a very different story 👏
Where the male protagonist in not in all his glory 😆

Glad that his armour has a chink
And the heroine has more than adequate plunk

I like it when the girl in the story, is all educated, intelligent and witty
Seriously following her career and not just plain pretty 😉

So bring on the updates, oh dear Sookie 😊
Let us see what interesting things will come out of your kitty

Last but not the least, do not forget to pm me your updates
As i am eagerly waiting for what lies ahead in maan's fate 😊

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AliceT

@AliceT

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

It seems the tables are turned this time...but when it comes to you Sookie, it's nothing new. Every time you manage to spin a story differently and I love reading your works dear 😊
My apologies for not following your other FF...had a very big issue to deal with. Though as soon as I'm free from some burdens, I'm sure gonna read it. Thank-you sooo much for sending the PM's dear. I'm gonna follow this FF right from the beginning...will make things easier for me. Just wanted to know, are you going to update this FF as frequently you update Till Human Voices...?

Coming to the update :
So Geet is the cool yet bossy babe this time, oozing out professionalism. It was high time to get rid of the canon and what a better way to do it by showing THE great MSK as a loafer ...lol 😆
But wasn't it too much...I mean making out on the HOSPITAL bed OMG!!?? Dr. Geet Handa dealt with the situation perfectly by gently bruising their egos 😉 *Hi5 to Dr. Handa*
*Hi5 to the person who created these characters... our Sookie* Cheerio!!

Thank-you dear for the PM.

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

hey Sooks

Rather unexpected I would say. Plus whats this font you are using? I know I sound silly, you can use whatever font you want but... I think we need to have a chat.

Good work. Made me laugh. Maan is seriously a weirdo. Who the hell comes to a hospital when they are bored? :S

Add me to PM list.

And yeah, plz dont leave the current one incomplete (I know I dont need to say this)

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

lovely start..new reader so give me some time..but seems int ahh spoilt brat i like that...

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kritika_n

@kritika_n

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

congrats 4 da new ff
sounds interesting
thanks 4 da pm

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

I totally love the new title -"Translucence" wonder what link it'll have to the story-- as for characterzations-well oh well isn't this Maan diametrically opposite from prim proper ACP from previous one ,but love the verbal duel--it has hopes for MG lovers/maniacs/fanatics like us😃 Thanks for PM

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