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Amiiish

@Amiiish

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Im hooked on to this, u wont belive I read this FF in One go, back to back, the whole night. One of Ma fav now, loved it totally. Actually I was at the Reel FF thread, and read someone mentioning that your writing is similar to D, and I was like I have to check out her work, and I must say how did I miss your work, its outstanding, and I loved both the story and the way you write. Cant wait to the next update. Ps do suggest me other FF/works of yours.
Amu

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#572

@Sooks-- The enigma surrounding the Khuranas and Handa clan deepens and entangles as you pop new incidents regarding it on us- but guess its your style after having experienced one of your out-and - out thriller😆

The most gut-wrenching and throat parching part was the Maan-Geet encounter -a lot which was unsaid and unanswered was discussed but still the underlying grave mood got to me and I can't help feeling sad for both of them😭

Loved how you fit in Emily -the Satya-Emily duo blew away the stereotype " sidekick" in a grand manner -wonder if they'll turn catalysts for MG besides being on board for Khurana Co's strategy team with Maan😃

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#573

Loved the update!!! So Maan feeling the pressure of getting into the Khurana business now and I think Satya's accident came like a shocker to him and made him realize the gravity of the situation at hand and he is not even half through it at present!!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Hola !

One of the last ones to comment I see- but I told you - its my day off 😊

Well the attack by Vikram and Mitalee was kinda expected - and I find it perfect that Maan was snubbed right the first time - he'll be more cautious now and evaluate his enemy better - anyways, he knew who he was up against...

Emily's character is totally out of the world - if I aspire to be like someone in the fictional world - it would be her , honest😃 I liked her strength of mind and thinking on her feet ...

Loved the bond between Maan and his friends - its real strong - and hadnt i mentioned in a previous post that Maan didnt take Vaidehi to his home? Wow..👏 for me 😆.. Well, I was kinda relieved when he said he'll break up ... truly Sookie, thinking all over again - I feel I didnt want Geet to be in victim's position - once you made her open her mouth, I cooled down...

Well Maan Geet scene was surprising - everything on this day was opposite to what happens on other days - Geet wanting to take Maan to his hospital room, asking for coffee and if he is

alright !!

Somehow I feel among men and women of similar age, the women always grow up emotionally faster than men - it looks quite same here when Geet thinks that she knew all this was coming ..

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Just to add, love your dialogue:

"It wasn't time for this yet."

I see this is not the first time you have used it in this story and I guess it wont be the last..

I am really looking forward to see what happens when "it is time" 😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#576

part 15
wow these people will do anything i mean ANYTHING for money and power...
disgusting...
inspite of Maan making it all on himself Satya is harmed...
oh Maan is breaking up with Vaidehi...
Geet seems to understand Maan more than himself and Maan Geet...
these 2 are connected in more inexplicable ways...
cont soon dear...

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#577

@Sooks-- Sorry Sooks- I almost missed the previous update ,but after reading it -I empathize with Maan's sentiments- despite his outwards cynicism and sarcasm the fact is the tyrannic business world did hit him back with a sense of betrayal

Seems like Mitalee despite being the cool planner has a lot of insecurities up her sleeve regarding getting the coveted position in family legacy

Still Maan trying to face the situation head on though his friends and ownership laid in jeopardy was courageous and the way Geet recapitulated his academic life and connected the dots with present scenario with the truth that he was evolving as a person -gave a much brighter insight

I truly think I understand Maan-Geet after today's update - better than before

At the same time -seeing Emily in a fragile state really saddened the mood coz she was always the humorous strong head in the team -but showing that all of them realised the gravity of situation and soothed the other was an epitome of some positivity in the world shining in the foul tactics of the world

PS-- I wonder what were Sr Khurana's thoughts when he entered the biz world and pulled his family in the mud too

Edited by Lily201 - 13 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Sorry guys, I wont be able to update anything tonight.

Conked off due to painkillers...

Though I had decided not to update this over the weekend, this time I will however do so as I have missed today.

Have a great weekend everyone!
Sookie

PS: Those who read "Till Human voices..." there is going to be a surprise!

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imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Sorry guys, I wont be able to update anything tonight.

Conked off due to painkillers...

Though I had decided not to update this over the weekend, this time I will however do so as I have missed today.

Have a great weekend everyone!
Sookie

PS: Those who read "Till Human voices..." there is going to be a surprise!

Thats Okay . Take care. you have been updating continuously for so many days.
Akhir gabbar ko bhi ek din aaraam chhahiye. 😃

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Sorry guys, I wont be able to update anything tonight.

Conked off due to painkillers...

Though I had decided not to update this over the weekend, this time I will however do so as I have missed today.

Have a great weekend everyone!
Sookie

PS: Those who read "Till Human voices..." there is going to be a surprise!

Take care of yourself...

So the surprise is that we will get another Mystery from you?😃

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