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-pixie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Double game pe double game...

Theres something definitely fishy about Deshmukh...is he going to ditch Maan at the worst possible moment? or will it be Kiki to the rescue?

I know Vikram and Mitalee are the bad guys- but how abt an update from their point of view...in this drama there is no black and white just very different shades of gray...so I do want to see their whites along with the blacks we have seen so far!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

The butcher remind me of me 😃

Deshmukh is giving me bad vibes.

I loved Satra-Emily-Maan's conversation.

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago

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-pixie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

The butcher reminded me of the Artist (From till human voices) for some reason! I guess they both seem so menacing!

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Am I the only one insane who cannot get over the way Emily introduced herself to Maan and got into working with Satya and Maan? Even after 2 updates, I keep going back to read that particular part again n again.. 😆

Sookie, your characters have such dept in them.. I really like Satya n Emily. So, Vikram found out. What is he planning to do now? Somehow, Mitalee seems to be more harmful to me. Also, this deshmukh seems to be very mysterious. Initially, I thought even kiki was with her father, but after last update I felt she truly feels for Maan. How deep are her feelings is not clear, but she at least respects him a little.. No geet, but given the circumstances I doubt we will be getting Maan-Geet scenes soon. Unless they decide to work together. I was happy to see how Geet gave it back to Maan.

Can we have one of the Emily-Geet conversation about Maan? It could be general how Maan is planning stuff.. Also, pls tell me is there even teeny tiny chance that Maan and Geet will land up together? Thou even I am not sure how Maan is going to makeup to her..

Ok, I think I did rant a lot.. Now I should go back to my work.. 😆😉

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

fantastic update...I relay enjoyed Satya ,Emily and Maan's convo...
no doubt this Deshmukh's attitude is definitely fishy ...perhaps he is double crossing him... missing geet ...😊 waiting for the next part...

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Hello Sookie

It's their way of a rebellion and saying 'f**k you' subtly

I completely love it when you put things neatly like these. :D

So Maan is confident that he still has time to live... Interesting. Good to see Vikram and Mitalee in their element. After all, this is a war.

Keeping Satya out of the picture was a good move, given the explanation.

Deshmukh looks fishy now. And paranoia about trucks? Well, I would say its not entirely pointless. I was always convinced that heavy vehicle drivers cant see me on the road. ;)

Good Work

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

I must admit the song selection is just excellent, specially Bang Bang...

"...Now he's gone. I don't know why
And till this day, sometimes I cry
He didn't even say goodbye
He didn't take the time to lie..."

The song is about how a girl fell in love with her childhood friend, a boy, who eventually left her and all she was left was to reminisce their good old days...
I had heard this song for the first time in Kill Bill...

Sooks, are you trying to tell us something 😉 ...music has always been a great inspiration when it comes to story telling! The underline theme of this story is very intriguing, the very dramatic structure, which is full of complications, conflict of interest and climax. Bravo for Drama! :)

Edited by night13 - 13 years ago