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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

part 12
no Geet...
and Maan, is he really that serious of this new girl Vaidehi?
wow really liked Emily's attitude...
cont soon dear...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Sorry, one more from me on the latest chapter..

I guess Maan stopped by his home to pick up that something (remember where he had taken Geet)...but didnt take Vaidehi inside...

Vikram's man is a butcher and he's visiting the hospital...eeks !!

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

loved it!

emily character was surprising but I like her!

lets see till how long maan and vaidehi will be together!...

continue soon!

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deejayaqueel

@deejayaqueel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

He has to learn that he has to undo lots of things before he comes clean and gets together with Geet.
Do you really believe that people can really change to that extent ??

Chuck the stage of 'undoing', it seems he still isn't done with the 'doing' yet (pun intended!! 😆😆😉😉)

Looks like this 'alternate' version of Maan ruffled quite a few feathers... not just mine... Completely believable character... yet if things go on with Geet eventually accepting this Maan without much ado, i would be disappointed... any self-respecting woman should be loth to accept such a self-destructive relationship...!

Edited by deejayaqueel - 13 years ago

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chalobhago

@chalobhago

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

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Loooved Emily - sharp and great with Satya AND she's on Geet's side...Loved her comment to Maan and the effect: "You are already doing that for me Maan by dating someone who is not Geet," Emily said to Maan who was rendered speechless.

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Maan couldn't concentrate on the end of the year report he was reading. However Emily's words stuck in his head and haunted him for the rest of the day.

Yikes the butcher is going to the hospital...GEET???
Maan should get his ass on the right track - he's underestimating Vikram 😵

And i believe someone made Kiki/Vaidehi saaad😆

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Chuck the stage of 'undoing', it seems he still isn't done with the 'doing' yet (pun intended!! 😉)

Looks like this 'alternate' version of Maan ruffled quite a few feathers... not just mine... Completely believable character... yet if things go on with Geet eventually accepting this Maan without much ado, i would be disappointed... any self-respecting woman should be loth to accept such a self-destructive relationship...!

I so much agree with you...

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deejayaqueel

@deejayaqueel

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Soookieee????? Any comments???? 😃😃😃

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel
Soookieee????? Any comments???? 😃😃😃

Nope :-)

I don't respond to any comments here because it would give away the story or the changes that are to come in future. I would be either agreeing or dis-agreeing if I were to comment which kinda gives away what I am thinking - and I don't want that to happen, honestly.

I hope you understand my lack of comments in this thread 😊.

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deejayaqueel

@deejayaqueel

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Nope :-)

I don't respond to any comments here because it would give away the story or the changes that are to come in future. I would be either agreeing or dis-agreeing if I were to comment which kinda gives away what I am thinking - and I don't want that to happen, honestly.

I hope you understand my lack of comments in this thread 😊.

'I suppose so...'!!! 😉😉

PS: Am repeating myself but i REALLY want Geet to move on find someone really worth her... and for Maan to REALLY grovel before he can get her back...

Or better still, she could do the same to him... have the 'dish best served cold' 😆😆 (others, please dont kill me...!!)

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Chuck the stage of 'undoing', it seems he still isn't done with the 'doing' yet (pun intended!! 😉)

Looks like this 'alternate' version of Maan ruffled quite a few feathers... not just mine... Completely believable character... yet if things go on with Geet eventually accepting this Maan without much ado, i would be disappointed... any self-respecting woman should be loth to accept such a self-destructive relationship...!

True that Geet accepting him despite all of it , easily will seem lame...but I hav had this feeling forever that Maan is purposely not dating her now!! I think he knows what vikram and Mitalee are like and he'll be an idiot if he thinks he's not already under surveillance...oh wait he already knows that , right?

WHat I'm wondering is - where does Emily come in? Or is she just to make it an even couple thing!???!?!?

BTW - updated post - pg 62.