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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Emily is freakin' awesome ;) I read her lines like a hundred and one times 😆

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@Raina123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

awsome update ..hmmm no geet in this update but i still loved it

i like emily and satya together their funny ,im not liking maan and this vadehi chick though but i repeat i still loved it

looking forward to the next part plz update soon

raina

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Line of the update(I wasnt writing this initially but then something struck me...)-

"I think they are worried about the things I could do to them if they don't agree to my terms,"

"Going to the hospital"...whats that supposed to mean Sooks? Im already waiting for the next update. I hope Maan doesnt have blood on his hands for his tactics.

We have a brand new character here who has one hell of a sense of humor. Satya has some serious making up to do, doesnt he? He has guts to date Emily btw

Thanks for the PM

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

It is becoming complicated .It is quite serious stuff and everybody is playing dark emotions and so my curiosity is increasing day by day . kudos sookie for such fantastic stuff and great going .

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-Deepzz-

@-Deepzz-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Hospital Visit...That sounds omnious..Is Vikram setting up a hit on Geet's life ?

Love Emily..She doesn't mince words 😆... She compliments Satya ..

Awesome Update Sookie 😃

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Superb...
Mindblowing.

Emily was awesome...
Missed Geet...

Updt soon,
Thanks for the pm.

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Sookie ... 🤗

I stumbled upon this ... and ... fell ... in love with your writing all over again !!!

👍🏼

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meenu

@-Nia04-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#428

i read all parts together!!
loved it!!
plz do pm me

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579908

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Posted: 13 years ago

#429

ooohhh a trip to the hospital ... does that mean Geet's in trouble??

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#430

what an intersting character - emily - you have introduced...compliments satya beautifully and my favorite part she is on geet's side...good, someone to needle maan on his activities with vaidehi...seriously what's wrong with him...why is he not hooking up with geet on a permanent basis...what are his feelings toward her????????

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