Translucence - Finished.

First Previous

Page

102

Next Last

Frequent Posters

-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

Mwuhahahaha I've taken your first place position 😈

Mera number bhi aayega...buhahahaaa...😈

Quote

-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Congrats on the new FF
Awesome start... loved it
Thanx for the PM

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

A playboy this time huh? Interesting. Geet's so cool

Quote

febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Congrats on the new FF honey...

Maan a play boy and Geet doctor.. can't wait to read more..

Please continue sooon dear.

Quote

Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hell - I'm so intrigued. It had to be so short, hun? :$ Anyways, I love the title - irrelevant, I know, but it just sounds, good. (-; Coming to the part - obviously, it was neatly written. I loved it.

So, I'm not gonna lose the track of it, I swear and I intend to read Till Human...soon, I just don't find a perfect mood. Anyhow, I'll do it - soon, cause, woman - I was so interested in that thing. x|

Coming to this - Lady Bug does want an update soon. and ask your friend "A" to update IoL soon too. :|

Great start, btw. :P

Quote

-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wishfully yearning, enticed for another...an alabaster night ... translucence!
You are marked! 😉

Quote

-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Love the start! At least lots of verbal sparks will fly- if not the other kind 😆😆😆

Is this going to go the other Maan Geet MB meets Motorcycle dude route- with a twist in their roles?

Quote

shona

@shona2010

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Congratulations for the new ff...

nice start yaar... loved it... hmmm Maan stayed at hospital wen he felt bored...or he come there for Geet...

i think im going to luv this Mann ...

we r LOYAL followers...

so we make demands...u must give us LAMBA update...im not threatending you?? NO WAY darling... meri itni mazal ...but atleast i want looonnnggg update...

Edited by shona2010 - 13 years ago