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Hey... please update soon... hoping to see the confrontation part soon...😊
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Congratz 4 new thread...superb prt n one of my fav song
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awesome.
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hi all
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chapter-29




The huge round of applause didn't ceased even after the end of the song like all were enchanted by their magical performance. Everyone froze at their place in the same posture they lasted the song. Maan was holding geet from her waist while she rested in his arms effortlessly as if it was all so natural...!!




Their hearts were pouning in rhythm feeling every beat of the other. It was like their heart was chanting the name of the other with an ardent desire to mingle into the other. Their closeness throughout the dance has casted a spell on them not allowing them to leave each other. How wonderful it feels to be in the blissfull hold of the special person in your life. Though maan had realized geet's importance in his life long back, he couldn't exactly named his feelings which has caued the turmoil in his life while on the other hand geet has named it far too before than she actually realize what it is...!!




The curtains fall back blocking them from the view of the audience and everyone eased themselves from their statue position and sighed in relief and excitement. All were really happy that their dance came out beautifully which they guessed by the thunderous clappings and cheers of he audience...!!




But oblivious to all this geet and maan were still in their statue position. Both lost in each other like nothing else matter. They were happy just by being in the arms of the other. But their dreamland was intruded by a loud noise in their background, which was due to the celebration their group mates were doing. They were cheering for their group.




Maan instantly released geet and looked the other side. Geet felt the sweet warmth replaced by his coldness and frowned, twisting her lips she looked at him with mischievious eyes and started to move ahead towards others. At first maan was upset seeing geet going away without talking to him, completely ignoring him like he doesn't even exist, but then he thought...this is what I want, so let it be this way...!!




He moved away from there and went to the green room to change. He was about to enter when someone dashed into him...



He looked upto find his dream girl right infront of his eyes, looking as fresh as a dazy.


He wanted to hug her that very moment, but remembering his resolution masked a fake angry look and said...



What the hell is this handa...??...Can you for once look where you are going...??...he tried his best to show her his mean side, bu this time geet was not ready to buy his crap and moreover when she has purposely bumped into him.




Geet smirked naughtily, but hid it from him and said with her cute little fake anger...




Oh hello...Mr. Devil singh khurana, no need to shout like this. You are shouting as if I intentionally bumped into you...she lied with the most innocent face on earth.




Maan felt something different in her snapping, like there was more to the innocence in her eyes...some kind of confidence and happiness...!!




Maan felt himself drowning in the honey brown eyes of her. He instantly avreted his gaze and cleared his throat...


Whatever...he felt a bit uncomfortable with her mischievious gaze and said...




I have to change, so get out of my way...with that he move towards the door, but geet blocked his path...




Not so soon...she said conveying a double meaning through her eyes. Maan knitted his brows on which geet cleared...




Well you see, we are here for the same purpose and so I'll use the room first...!!




Maan smiled inwardly at her bossy attitude, but didn't show a thing on his face...




And why do you think I'll let you use it before me, huh...??...he was amusingly ready to get on a one on one with her again




Geet knew what he was trying to do, she has finally figured out the reason of their nok jhok after their separation. Maan never wanted to separate from her and the only way to keep her close to him without losing himself was the one on one tussel. Their sweet-sour one on one was just a way for maan to be around geet without harming her, little did he knew that he could never harm his mishty...!!




Seeing the silly smirk on his face geet came closer to him. Maan backed a bit seeing her marching towards him while geet kept moving untill he hit the wall and geet was inches away from him...




Geet, what are...he whispered meekly but geet silenced him in the mid by placing her finger on maan's lips...




Sshh...sometimes you also speak too much...khurana...her voice was damn husky sending shiver down maan's spine...this was totally new avatar of geet maan was witnessing.


When did his innocent mishty turned so bold...??...he thought curiously, but her moves were only provoking him. As she moved closer maan held his breath fearing to his control and looked at her. But before he could say or do anything, geet pushed him aside and moved inside the room closing he door, butnot before showing him her tongue and shouting...




I don't need your permission, khurana...!!




Maan kept gawking at the close door like a fool, not believing what just happened a second ago. His sweet, innocent, shy geet turned all bold suddenly just like a tigress...!!




Jesus...!!...he muttered unable to hold back his astonishment




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Everyone gathered in the hall as the annoucement of the winners in different competition was going to made. The participants stood near the base of the stage with bated breath and anticipation as the proceeding started.




Maan kept stealing glances at geet while she saw all from the corner of her eyes. She was well aware of his thought his right now and was delighted to see her effect on him...!!




Her heart was pounding with excitement, not only for the results, but with the realization of maan's immense love for her also. Now the only question bothering her was why maan kept a distance from her and that too for such a long time, when he himself was craving for her all the time...??...this question was bugging her throughout the competition...!!




Pushing the thought for later, she concentrated on the stage when the chief guest rose from his chair to give away the awards. The first category was English essay writing competition in which both meera and dev had participated. Meera was hell nervous, but as she found dev's caring warm hands pressing hers in assurance, all her nervousness vanished in air.




The names were announced bringing stream of joy for DPS as the first and second prize were bagged by none other than dev and meera, respectively...!!




Meera's friends literally jumped on her hearing the announcement and showered her with their congratulations...!!




Dev too received appreciations from his friends and his brothers, who were extremely pleased with his achievements. Meera and dev collected their certficates and shields. It was a memorable moment for both of them. They congratulated each other and waited for other announcements.


Another surprise came in the form of pari, who bagged second prize for the solo dancing, but what shocked them and especially pari the most was rohan grabbing the first prize for Hindi essay competition, which was one of the toughest competition there...!!



Pari was highly impressed by rohan for she knew what a difficult competition he won. She came to him and congratulated with a warm smile, which was enough to make rohan faint any moment...!!...Adi and sam bagged first prize for quize competition giving new height to the flag of DPS.




The evening till now was nothing less than a treat to DPS and its students. But a big event was still left and everyone was holding their breath for it, except the two who were the main participants in it...maan and geet...!!




The duo were busy in contemplating the questions in their mind about the other. But their chain of thoughts were broken with the announcement of the first prize for the group dancing competition...




They came to know about their bagging the first prize only when their friends pounced on them with sheer excitement and delight...!!




Both of them proceeded towards the stage alongwith the others and received the trophy.The whole group was ecstatic to see their hardwork fetching them success...!!




The hall gave them a standing ovation for their enthralling performance. It was indeed an eventful evening...!!




Geet and maan's hands touched each other while holding the trophy and both felt a current pass through their body. They instantly withdrew their hands not wanting to give the audience another act with some *ahem ahem* scenes...!!




They came down with the trophy and were thoroughly praised by their friends...!!




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Everyone gathered in the hall as the annoucement of the winners in different competition was going to made. The participants stood near the base of the stage with bated breath and anticipation as the proceeding started.


Maan kept stealing glances at geet while she saw all from the corner of her eyes. She was well aware of his thought his right now and was delighted to see her effect on him...!!


Her heart was pounding with excitement, not only for the results, but with the realization of maan's immense love for her also. Now the only question bothering her was why maan kept a distance from her and that too for such a long time, when he himself was craving for her all the time...??...this question was bugging her throughout the competition...!!


Pushing the thought for later, she concentrated on the stage when the chief guest rose from his chair to give away the awards. The first category was English essay writing competition in which both meera and dev had participated. Meera was hell nervous, but as she found dev's caring warm hands pressing hers in assurance, all her nervousness vanished in air.


The names were announced bringing stream of joy for DPS as the first and second prize were bagged by none other than dev and meera, respectively...!!


Meera's friends literally jumped on her hearing the announcement and showered her with their congratulations...!!


Dev too received appreciations from his friends and his brothers, who were extremely pleased with his achievements. Meera and dev collected their certficates andshields. It was a memorable moment for both of them. They congratulated each other and waited for other announcements.


Another surprise came in the form of pari, who bagged second prize for the solo dancing, but what shocked them and especially pari the most was rohan grabbing the first prize for Hindi essay competition, which was one of the toughest competition there...!!


Pari was highly impressed by rohan for she knew what a difficult competition he won. She came to him and congratulated with a warm smile, which was enough to make rohan faint any moment...!!...Adi and sam bagged first prize for quize competition giving new height to the flag of DPS.


The evening till now was nothing less than a treat to DPS and its students. But a big event was still left and everyone was holding their breath for it, except the two who were the main participants in it...maan and geet...!!


The duo were busy in contemplating the questions in their mind about the other. But their chain of thoughts were broken with the announcement of the first prize for the group dancing competition...


They came to know about their bagging the first prize only when their friends pounced on them with sheer excitement and delight...!!


Both of them proceeded towards the stage alongwith the others and received the trophy.The whole group was ecstatic to see their hardwork fetching them success...!!


The hall gave them a standing ovation for their enthralling performance. It was indeed an eventful evening...!!


Geet and maan's hands touched each other while holding the trophy and both felt a current pass through their body. They instantly withdrew their hands not wanting to give the audience another act with some *ahem ahem* scenes...!!


They came down with the trophy and were thoroughly praised by their friends...!!


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Hey vicky, don't touch my pizza...pari wacked his hand that was trying to grab a piece from her plate...aren't you satisfied with yours...??...petoo...!! ...she mocked angrily...!!


Vicky frowned at pari and retorted...oh really...!!...I am a petoo and who had eaten a whole cheeze pizza not even leaving the crumbles that were scattered in the plate, huh...??


Haww...!!...her mouth made a complete O at his outrageous accusation...thats utter lie...!!...she spat


Guys stop fighting over a piece of pizza...nt said trying to control the two food freaks


They had came to a resturant nearby the auditorium to celebrate their success with all their friends. Maan sat at the farthest corner of the table to avoid geet as much as possible, which made her quite upset, but she kept her calm.


She was playing with her food as all her attention was towards maan, who was sitting so far away from her and that witch alisha, who tagged alongwith her useless cousin sasha, to the resturant and right now was sitting next to maan. She felt like punching her hard seeing how shamelessly she was ogling at her maan.


She just didn't understand why maan was behaving like this. But there was nothing she could do right now, so making a cute grumpy face she sulked.


Maan saw her expressions from the corner of the eyes, but can't gather the courage to sit near her as her proximity was creating within him. Geet was sitting beside meera and the end of the other side. Maan wanted to break his resolve and go to her, but controlled himself thinking its for geet's benefit...!!


Some boys from other school who were also in the competition came to the resturant and sat on the table adjacent to theirs. It was like geet sat with her back facing the glass wall at the corner and one of the boy sat just beside her, very close as the tables were set very close to each other. Geet was busy sulking and didn't notice the pervets ogling at her and passing comments among them followed by cheap sniggering, but maan saw it all as anything related to geet could not be missed by his vision. He felt deep rage surging into him.


Maan try this one, its really yummy...alisha said lifting her spoon full of strawberry ice-cream to maan's mouth, but all his attention was towards geet. Geet saw this and fumed seeing alisha chudail offering maan from her jootha spoon.


If maan even smelled that filthy spoon, I am going to kill him as well as that witch right now...!!...she thought burning with jealousy. But what maan did next gave her a totally unexpected surprise, and well a pleasant one.


He saw one of the boy shifting towards geet purposely and thats it his fuse was blown...!!


He instantly got up from his chair and came around the table to geet's place and said to meera...


Meera would you mind sitting on my chair, actually I wanted to sit on geet's seat while she can move here...he arrantly blurted making all heads turning to him in surprise except alisha and dev. Alisha felt insulted while dev was glad to meera by his side as sasha was chewing up his head with her nonsense blabbering...!!


Uh, sure...meera said and moved to take maan's previous seat


But maan, why all of a sudden...??...sam asked to irritate him purposely


I don't like the view there...he said adding on to the list of insult for alisha while vicky was quite amused.


Geet come here...he demanded with full authority while eyeing those lechrous boys with utter disgust and anger


But...she was about to protest, when maan shot his deadly glarethat was enough to make her realize that he was not in a mood.


She quitely got up and swaped her place with him. Maan sat there and looked at the boy who was gawking at him with anger. Maan smirked at his disappointment and raised his brows as if asking...' what ' and the stupid guy shook his head and shifted back to his initial place.


Though geet was irritated with maan's bossy attitude, but the lovely feeling of maan being so close to her was enough to make her forget everything...!!


The rest of the celebrations went on peacefully, well except for the two foodie who were hell bent on grabbing the same thing at the same time...!!


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It was 8 when they reach KM and naina and rano had already started to set the table. The winners got a warm welcome from the family and were asked to change and join them for dinner.


Mom actually, we had a treat already and I am quite full...saying so he moved upstairs


Geet looked at his retreating form and thought...I'll get my answers today maan, you can't run away from me like this...!!


Turning towards naina and rano geet quickly...


Uh, even I am quite full. I'll go and pack my stuff...as soon as she said, she made a dash towards the stairs


But geet has already packed her stuff...vicky thought and then smirked as realization dawned upon him. Shaking his head, he looked at thefood on the table and said...


Don't feel sad mom, I'll compensate for both of them...!!( me wondering, what a huge tummy he has got to fill in this much of food...)


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Geet walked up to the terrace on not finding maan in his room and looked around...


Arey...!!...he is not even here...she thought frowning, but then her eyes caught a figure at the corner in the dark area and she knew its him...!!


Gathering up her courage she moved towards him to have some "words" with him.


Maan...she beckoned softly


Maan stiffened at her voice which was urging him to look at her, but he still prefered to stay where he was. Geet slowly stood behind him and tapped his shoulders gently...


God...!!...why she hell bent on making it difficult for me...he thought suppresing his anger...does she even know how difficult it'll be for him to see her leave...??


Why are you standing here all alone...??...came her soft sweet voice. Her words were enough to melt maan like a wax close to a flaring fire


However he turned around with a straight face and answered...


Its my house, my terrace and my body, so I can be anywhere I want...!!...he knew he was rude, but he wanted geet to leave immediately.


Why are you talking like this...??...her voice was heavy as she was hurt by maan's rudeness


Listen geet, don't waste my time and just leave...he said and was about to walk away when geet held him from back encircling her hands around his waist tightly. She was not ready to let him go away this time...


Maan why are you trying to create distance between us...she was all teary by this time making it hell difficult for maan to continue...


We have always been like this geet, its nothing new...he said trying to be casual, but his eyes were contradicting him, threatening to get moist any moment.


He removed her hands and said...


Its better if we stay like this only...!!


Geet looked into his eyes which were trying hard to be uneffected, but alas the poor thing couldn't do much infront of the piercing gaze of geet.


I love you...she said not knowing what more to say and hugged him with all her love.


Maan was shocked, astonished , stunned and what not. Never in his wildest dream he thought geet would say the words to him. Her confession was resonating in his ears.


Did she really said that or its my imagination...??...the question hammered his brain cells


He could feel her soft hands around his still forming abs transmitting the heat through the cotton. The surrounding froze for a moment for both of them. Winds stopped flowing, the moon halted its shine...


Their hearts were in complete rhythm, beating in sync, feeling every nano second of the beautiful moment.


Geet herself couldn't believe she said that. Her face had turned crimson due to shyness...!!


Maan felt like he got everything, just everything...!!


Geet...was all that escaped his lips and that too in the form of a whisper. He knew geet was attracted to him, but love was a total surprise package.


His own voice striked his ears as bullet and broke his trance. He jerked her away breaking her reverie too.


Maan...she was shocked at his response. She thought her confession will make things easy for both of them, but it doesn't look like its getting any better...!!


Go away geet...chali jao yahan se...!!...he moved but geet held his hand...


No, I won't...she said stubbornly and added...I love you and I know you love me too, then why all this...??


Maan was feeling miserable, but his head snapped up hearing her...


I don't love you geet...he said with a feeling of self-loath creeping up his body...and I am not worth being love...!!


And its just a crush you have on me, nothing more...he tried to break her misconception, when he was the one filled with them


Crush...!!...geet felt herself erupting with anger...why the hell everyone thinks feelings as crush, just bcoz she is a teenager...??...can't teenagers fall in love...??




I know my feelings full well, so don't you dare call it a crush...!!...her voice was deadly...here I am confessing my love and you have the audacity to call it a crush...!!


Geet listen to me...maan stepped forward to hold her, but she snapped away...


No you listen to me. You think its easy for me to come here and blurt out my feelings for you...!!...I was hellscared and apprehensive, but I did confessed bcoz I know you love me too, so don't you dare lie...!!


Geet you are getting it all wrong...maan saw her getting hysterical and felt a stab in his heart...I care for you and can't see you hurt thats why its better for you to stay away from me...he paused and added...I want your well-being...!!


Don't make excuses maan, I feel safest in your arms...she said and then averted her gaze shyly


I am not making excuses, its true and I have hurt you in past...he retorted reminiscising the night


Geet came forward and gently placed her hand on his...


Why don't you accept it maan...??...she said softly


Why don't you understand it geet...??...he held her shoulders. Geet was totally pissed off due to his continuous denial and jerked his hands...


Stop it maan...she was very much hurt now...I thought you love me, but it seems as if you don't even care for me...!!


Geet...??...he was shocked this time


Yes maan, all these are just excuses to keep me at bay. But you know what, you don't have to act all concerned for me from now onwards...I am freeing you from this responsibility...she said with a pained voice and turned around...


Maan felt like he lost his soul hearing her words. He caught her wrist and turned her around crashing her in his chest...


You think my care for you is an act...??...his voice reflected the incredulity...have you known me this much only...??...the excruciating pain was tearing him apart, but his anger rose even more...


You think you can handle me, huh geet...??...he stared at her with a dangerous glare.


Coming very close to her, he grabbed her by her waist and crushed her to him not leaving space even for air and pulled out her hair band letting her think hair fall freely. Moving his face into her jasmine scented hair, he sucked the fragrance losing himself in the heavenly feeling...!!


Geet felt goosebumps on her whole body and an intense sensation crept up her stomach when she felt maan's lips caressing her nape. He placed wet kisses at the exposed skin setting her body ablaze. The mere touch of her skin unleashed the animal within maan.He felt like devouring her from head to toe. The long suppressed desires were surging and surfacing.


Moving infront he moved his lips all the way from her forehead to her satin like cheeks to her jaw, tasting every inch of her skin.


Geet felt her knee would give up any moment as her hormones were creating a havoc inside her body. She arched back when she felt maan moving towards her neck ravenously biting it and then licking it to turn the pain to pleasure. He moved down to her upper chest biting her collar bone, driving her into the world of insanity. Not able to take his tortures a drop rolled down from her thick lashes and fell on maan's cheek bring him back to reality...!!



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Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Yay...me first
superb part...finally she confessed.
The most awaited part...
Maan can be a devil at times.
Loved it...

Updt soon.
Edited by Vidushi89 - 14 years ago

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