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Posted: 14 years ago
abhay pia enter the room...pia is really happy that she is married to her first love n is on cloud nine...n she think that is most luckiest women in the world that she found husband like abhay who is caring,understanding , love her soo much n nice human being...abhay is also on cloud nine...as he finally married to pia after such great difficutly now he can save her from outer world ssuddenly he makes worried face...as he reads her mind n last word she said bring him on the earth...human being as he remember that he has not told that he is vampire...then he tell pia get some rest she nods her head n went to the bathroom meanwhile abhay plans that he will tell pia tonight that he is vampire n give her memory back...then he phone someone tell him to book table for two...pia come out of bathroom n smile at abhay n goes to bed to rest...after sometime abhay tell pia that they will go to dinner tonight as an official couple...pia smiles at him...AP reach at resturent at around 9 p.m...worker take them the table...pia is suprise n looks around nthen at abhay n hug him tightly...then abhay pull chair for the pia...pia smiles at abhay n sit down...abhay sits opposite to pia...then he tell her order something for her...pia is confused n asked him that he will not eat ...abhay tell her that he never eat at night as he was on diet...abhay jst had drink n then abhay take pia to the jugle where they used to meet...abhay take deep breath n open his mouth to tell her abt him...suddenly out nowwhere werewolf come their to attack abhay as they smell him...n the werewolf is non other than khurrannas...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx haa...hey do favour for me yaar...abhay n panchi confrontation part i will write...as i love panchi more than aything in this world...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Piya is shocked to see a werewolf and its Jay!Piya shouts..She faints.Abhay turns into a vampire and kill jay..After sometime Piya is back and is shocked to see Jay dead body.Piya: Jay is a werewolf and who killed him? Oh God... Abhay: Piya I am a vampire and I killed him because he tried to kill me...

Piya is shocked when Abhay turn himself into a vampire but still Piya hugs him and says, I love you Abhay and i know that you cannot hurt you and what ever are you!


Abhay is very happy that piya accepted him as vampire!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaFan_Qusim

Piya is shocked to see a werewolf and its Jay!Piya shouts..She faints.Abhay turns into a vampire and kill jay..After sometime Piya is back and is shocked to see Jay dead body.Piya: Jay is a werewolf and who killed him? Oh God... Abhay: Piya I am a vampire and I killed him because he tried to kill me...

Piya is shocked when Abhay turn himself into a vampire but still Piya hugs him and says, I love you Abhay and i know that you cannot hurt you and what ever are you!


Abhay is very happy that piya accepted him as vampire!

hey why u killed jay yaar...i reversed him for misha...plz do something...i want jay alive for misha...plz plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
i will slightly change ur stary ok...like jay is still alive n pia's memory...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunu123

hey why u killed jay yaar...i reversed him for misha...plz do something...i want jay alive for misha...plz plz...


Make his mother get him alive like jay did to his mother!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaFan_Qusim


😉😉😉

Make his mother get him alive like jay did to his mother!

i will write my part ok ...whatever i wrote..then if u r not satisfy i will edit the story😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

pia sees them n scared seeing thia abhay come infront of pia...n turn into the vampire onfront of her...seeing this pia faints...abhay feels guilty for hurting her...n put her aside...now the fight is 1 vs 3...abhay first punch hard on neel n neel fell on ground...then he start fighting with jay as well as mrs.kurannas...after sometime abhay's mom dad also joined the fight...now its 3 vs 3...abhay fight with jay...chand with neel n haseena with lipstick chudail...fight is equal on one knows who will win at the time...after sometime pia opens her eyes...n then she start to remember everything right from her entry in dehadhun to abhay to see is in luv with abhay-abhay is vampire-abhay bit her-abhay confesses his luv-sid mathali-mathili's cursed-abhay erasing her memory-seperation...first she feels hurt that abhay did all this to her...meanwhile jay is about pierce wood into abhay's heart pia stops him...tell him to move away from him...jay tries to tell pia...but pia refuses to listen n tell him if he do so then she will kill herself...jay back off n everyone stops fighting...pia stand up n run as fast possible n hugged abhay tighlty n started crying continously...abhay is taken aback...abhay try to console pia meanwhile alini enter the spot n tell jay n neel that abhay didnot killed their bro...but bro killed himself only (all yesterday's dialouge what alina told jay)...jay thinks for sometime n said alina ur right...mom use us as weopen to take revenge on raichand...n that their is no reason to kill abhay...meanwhile lipstick ainty is quite as well as shock that her plan fail...then she tries to tell but jay stop her n jay says sorry to abhay n other n drag deepu aunty with them😆😆😆...haseena n chand is happy that their family is safe n no more problem in their life n pia accepted abhay...n then they return to mansion...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Piya and Abhay are really happy with the end of the fight. Now they want a bacha!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaFan_Qusim

Piya and Abhay are really happy with the end of the fight. Now they want a bacha!

itni jadi bhi kya hai...remember panchi uska khoon chusana hai muje😆😆😆😆...

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