What a mind blowing update after 2 days ... OMG... Am just falling in love with it along with maaneet...
The best part I liked about this track are Geet special feeling for Maan; the involuntary change of her feeling when she heard about motherhood of her friend... Her sub conscious mind always alerting her...
Coming to the update.. I was blushing reading the part when msk blushes and geet's tadap... I just loved every feel of maaneet... The way you had written their self combat between their mind and heart was beautiful...
MSK caring for her (by not allowing her to carry weight, trying to avoid impact on her while falling) were just awesome...
Geet touching his cheeks, pulling him down to fall in the garden and especially when she goes back to garden to cherish their moments of togetherness was so romantic and beautiful...
Now can't wait for the next...
Me off to sleep.. Will get up inbetween to read ur next dreams update...
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