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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#841

What am i supposed to say about the part 😳...

Really your work was Outstanding 👏...

As well as Hot ☺️...

Everything was Superb 😃...

She was still conscious about her dress in that state 😆...

Armaan's concern for her was great 😊...

Loved it ❤️...

Great work Rida 👍🏼...

N thanks to Zarqa who motivated u to write 😉...

Update the epilogue soon 😊.

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Maheen!!

@--Mahi--

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#842

u didnt PM me..i read ur every update .. :(

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Hey ...I was a regular reader and commented on the updates too then why am I deprived of the pm part ...please pm me the part.I dying to read it

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#844

heyya...

im a new readr to your ff..and hve just recntly joind bACK IF

Believe me when i say ur just too good at writing gal,...

i actually sat for 2 days straight and read all ur parts up till now and it was just tooo good!!

from the very beginning ur ff had the potential to capture the interest of the reader...it had a very hatke storyline..

the journey of armaan from his so called obsession to finally accepting his love for shilpa..

and then again a little mu followed by shilpa's confrontation again...

all in all u were just superbb gal!

And please do pm me the final part if u have no issues that is...

Becoz itz just now that i rejoind if after like 4 years and came across ur ff!

anyways do write more stuff...and will be eagerly waiting for your pm as well as other works!

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#845

Thnak you for the PM, this has to be the best and most sexy pm part Rida...just finished reading it and I was myself shaking throughout the reading ...can't imagine how "they" wld have felt ☺️ and how you have written..kudos girl... 😳when i read the first part of this ff, i thought this is the most passionate part, and then each coming part kept proving me wrong, the last part is seriously beyond the limit...⭐️ i still cant get over the last bit...kitchen? like really? 😲 😆 every bit of this part was so hot yet beautiful ...as if you have carved their love that too at its passion peak ..m at loss of words so dont knw what to say more..but this is definitely one of the best passionate stories ever :)
wld be waiting for epilogue...and sequel 😛

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Book_Kash

@Book_Kash

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#846

reserved

couldnot able to find the link of previous threads please helped me out somebody

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unnati_gupta

@unnati_gupta

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

firstly.. thanks for the pm...
now your update...
it's was simply awesome... and HOT...
the way you described and penned down everything was just unbelievably fantastic...
armaan cares for shilpa zoo much ya... even after loosing senses he just wanted her to be comfortable and that her first time should be special...
and the way you portrayed shilpa's character was beautiful... she just wanted to show armaan how much she loves him and that she belongs only to him... and she showed that really well... I am in love with them a over again with your this update... finally they are one... now no1 can separate them... I am sad you are ending this ff... I will miss it soo much... the way armaan always proves himself as the winner in the challenge... is wicked...:-);-)
will wait for the epilogue... do update it super soon... can't wait now...
thanks for sharing this beautiful ff with us...:-):-):-)