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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: 26javey26
wowww that was amazing. poor arnav and I hate arjun already. continue soon.

Thanks a ton yaar! 😆 Even I hate Arjun!😛

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@-scarlett-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

🤢 Stab me please...
Well the update was certainly fabulously amazing like always but the
precap makes me wanna pull out the hairs of Arjun...
I really like how you explained Khushi's guilt towards Arnav throughout
Awesome!

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: -Vishwa-
🤢 Stab me please...
Well the update was certainly fabulously amazing like always but the
precap makes me wanna pull out the hairs of Arjun...
I really like how you explained Khushi's guilt towards Arnav throughout
Awesome!

Phew...almost killed me with the first line and emoticon! I thought u hated the update!😆 And lol! ur not the only one who wants to kill Arjun! I'm with u on that one!👍🏼

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@..Anita..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Great update

What is khushi doing? she better not run away with arjun...arnav will be so heart broken

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Rocking update.😉

Will be eagerly waiting for next part.Gosh, really don't want khushi to leave and want Arnav to know the truth about her love.

Raunika

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Chinu5

@Chinu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

awesome update ...

about your precap ...what is she doing ? she better not leave Arnav ...

can't wait for your next update please update soon...

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Miya_Malik

@Miya_Malik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Arjun ka khoon karne ka mann kar raha hai abhi 😡 Someone get me a hockey stick, lots of chilli powder and a sharp pocket knife, Am in a mood to murder Mr. I-perve-on-other-people's-wives .. the sound of Arjun in the first two chapters made me feel extra sympathetic towards him, I mean the guy lost the love of his life only because her family didn't approve of him .. but chapter 3 made me feel like Arjun is after Khushi for reasons other than love, or he loves her but has other motives too, like revenge with Arnav, or her family??!
whatever it may be, Arjun is such a d***!! He deserved that treatment from Khushi, go KKG! She rocked in today's update, I kinda hated her for behaving so rudely with Arnav (he's mine!😆) at the start of the chapter, and especially when she said "no, he ain't home' but I totally fell in love with her character by the end of it, and lets just say I never read the precap! *realises she can't just ignore the inevitable precap*

Onto the precap, I take back all my praises for KKG, she can't do this 😲 She cannot just play with her life and Arnav's sentiments like this, there's something called 'communication' Khushi! If not release you for you to see Arjun's evilness yourself, Arnav would atleast hear you out and you two could come to a conclusion together (even if that meant seperation), but no! Khushi's made hasty decisions, and now she's going to regret BIG TIME for what she's going to do, ala run away :/ Chalo, let's see what she does next and how Arnav reacts to her stupidity of running away (I feel so bad for him, poor guy!)

Sanju!🤗 *I do a victory dance coz now I know your name* Your writing is so intense man! It has the power to make me love,hate and murder characters, itna intense tha! 😳 Beautifully written bro, hats off! 👏👏

PS: may you always treat us with quicker updates than promised 😛😆

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Davi

@Davi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

hey sanju

excellent update

this arjun guy seems to be a total jerk

how could khushi love such a fool.

I still feel really bad for arnav.

Hopefully arnav can show khushi what real love is.

Thanx for the PM.

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: anita_21492
Great update
What is khushi doing? she better not run away with arjun...arnav will be so heart broken

Thank u so much! So glad that u liked it! Continue reading, and you'll get the answer to all your questions!😉

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: rsk16
Rocking update.😉
Will be eagerly waiting for next part.Gosh, really don't want khushi to leave and want Arnav to know the truth about her love.
Raunika

Aww! Thanks a lot dear! 🤗 Keep reading! u will love the next part!😉