ll Heartbeat: An ArHi FF ll*part 5a page 40 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Danina

Loved the FF;D
plz continue soon;D
and plz add me to ur pm list;D

Originally posted by: xXShriyaXx

Hey pls add me to ur pm list and continue updating...

I am going to be very honest and say that I am in LOVE with your
concept...after each update the plot just mesmerizes me even more..
the whole Diary idea is just so new and different from the reel storyline
also seeing Khushi so battered and in love makes me feel really sorry
for Arnav...the poor thing has no idea...but i cant wait till he/we find out
abt her life... I love how you wrote the two points wit much ease..
absolutely adore it!

Originally posted by: -Vishwa-

I am going to be very honest and say that I am in LOVE with your
concept...after each update the plot just mesmerizes me even more..
the whole Diary idea is just so new and different from the reel storyline
also seeing Khushi so battered and in love makes me feel really sorry
for Arnav...the poor thing has no idea...but i cant wait till he/we find out
abt her life... I love how you wrote the two points wit much ease..
absolutely adore it!

Do you want to kill me for not commenting? :P Please don't! Wo na exams aaj khata hue hai! Thodi der mein edit karti hoon :)

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

Do you want to kill me for not commenting? :P Please don't! Wo na exams aaj khata hue hai! Thodi der mein edit karti hoon :)

Originally posted by: shootingstar.xx

ahh cannot tell you how beautiful you wrote that part .. now honestly am too lazy to edit my first post 😆 but to keep it short about the 1st part .. I truly love the concept 😳 and it seems to fit ArHi in my perspective too

so this part was simply amazing. and the way you described Arnav's thoughts and Khushi's dreams being shattered .. 😳

you MUST update this more often .. not like on some FF's where you forget the actual story 😳🤣

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

NAHIIi!!! Ye nahi ho sakta! Meri dost (ex-dost ab tho), jisse main dil se pooja karti thi, Ussi ne aaj mere saath DHOKAA KAR DIYA! Main is samaaj (forum) ke saamne moo dikhaane laayak nahi rahi! Ussne mere dil me jo deep deep dark dark raaz hai, usse aaj KHOL DI! NAHIII!!!!! Maine apni hi kahani bhuladi! Ab main Kya Karoongi!?!!!!!!!!

Main tujhse kabhi baat nahi karoongi! 😡😆 That was supposed to be between us u know!😆

😆

Originally posted by: shootingstar.xx

agar ex dost ban gaye hain .. toh ab hum BEST friends ban gaye right? 😆 omg kounsa raaz? 🤣

omg seriously .. tum naraaz ho kya? mujhe yeh bohot funny lag raha hai 🤣