FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 63

Originally posted by: -ZsterMG-

OMGNOFREAKINGWAYYOU'REBACK O_O! AHHH!! I've been waiting for this day for like .. an eternity?! But YAYYY YOU'RE BACK! WOOP WOOP! OMG!! Zster meri jaan!! oh how ive missed you!!! 🤗

*party over*

So glad you're back and don't worry we understand that you were extremely busy with the new positions (congratulations!) and the new home (congrats again! =D) .. but it's always so nice to see you writing and had missed your stories... so this is like the best way to make my day! ive missed writing so much too!! 😭...you have no idea yaar...i have so many ideas that pop into my head...and phir soochti hoon ke naya story shuru karungi...but then i think that i have so many pending...ek ek karke i want to finish the stories before i start new ones...and the first new one i have planned...oh...i love it!! 😉

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Oh yes .. this story and the big mystery about why in the world is Mr. Maan Singh Khurana sulking and downing glasses of alcohol when his past was going all hunky dory =( Gosh Jaz what dhamaka are you going to drop on us later on =( Since you're so famously known for your twists... lol I dread that update which tells us what tore Maan and Geet apart ... (yet again =p) lol i love...how like a seasoned pro of Jaz FF reader...you didnt ask why he is sulking...im so proud of you!! 👏👏...its been ages but you remember!! aachi training di hai maine 😆...i love that you just know a dhamaka is coming...its fact...oh meri jaan!! *pinches cheeks* 😛...

But this update was so fun! I loved that the MJ connection was something they shared and how their mutual friendship grew from there... you know when i was writing this story that MJ part was just off of a whim...yet it became a big part of the story 😳

One thing though .. we know that Maan was attracted to Geet in that sense but was Geet ?? Since it's from Maan's POV it's hard to tell if Geet was just being Geet or she also had feelings for him .. enough to want to get married to him! I think she did but you never know with you Jaz and the way you will turn around the story .. I atleast hope Geet had feelings for Maan ;) Very good question...jiska jawab miljayega...you'll truly get to see Geets feelings for Maan...you think he loves her...oh honey...you aint seen nothing yet!!! 😉

But Maan is so awww-cute with his chupke chupke niharofy-ing Geet and checking her out haha ... the Teji and Maan convo out in the lawn was hilarious though .. and I loved the throwback to the first meeting of Maaneet.. i love the Hinglish mixed words...they are so silly but we know exactly what it means!! 😆😆... as for the throwback...im nothing if not consistent with my facts of the stories...gotta keep track of what happened and how it all effects whats happening 😉

The dewar-related songs and Maan making the connections was LOL! At first I thought there was going to be yet another song Geet would dance to related to Chachi-Dewar relations but they got caught hahaa.. LMAO!! when i read "dewar"...i didnt read it as brother in law...i read it as "deevar" as in wall..im like huh...wall related song? yeh kahaan se aaya 🤣 ...

I was rofling with Teji's total turnaround .. and I'm sure that one glance over to Geet told Teji and Pammi everything they needed to know about Maan's feelings and who he wants to marry .. something tells me Teji already had a hint ;) in teji's defense...do you think he really wants to admit he was at fault too...his wife is the one thats pregnant...she can kill him if she wants!! 😆😆😆 woh toh aapne aapko bacha raha tha...😛...

I'm sure the next update will be Teji and Pammi's grilling session and asking Maan about his true feelings.. aawww.. but I sure hope everything goes fine .. Maan in the present seems pretty positive about it.. so it seems it'll be another happy update.. =D Teji aur Pammi ki dekho dhamal in next update...😈...not what you guys are expecting...ill tell you that much...

Loved it Jazzy! And welcome back .. great kickstart to your return .. and I'm glad you're doin it one FF at a time since it both suits your schedule and will help us worry about one story at a time and not worry about Maaneet in 3 different FFs LOL! =p speaking of too many story lines...the other day shreya is messaging me on FB saying she cant wait to ready my story about the one where Maan's a doctor and saves Geet from committing suicide...i was like...no...thats not my story...took a while but i convinced her...then she found it was Reya's!! 🤣

Hope you missed my essay sized comments though .. I tried my best ;) YOU HAVE NO IDEA!! totally made the return special!! i had a blas reading it and responding!! i can always count on you!!! 🤗

<3

Z

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

Hehe thanks jaz n yes it has been dt long dear i remember u stopped writing that was around my sis marriage actually she gt married n nw u are back so just on new year we are blessed with a baby gul n it feel awesum to b a khala of a niece a super duper special feeling yaar so what is the angels name? i've had two nieces and two nephews in the time ive been gone...in order from oldest to youngest i have Zanaya, Namir, Zaima and Saihan 😃 im a very proud Khala/Fuppi 😳

CHalo nw abt update it was just fab n amazing im loving the way u r taking their relation so slowly n gradually m even loving their bonding, its actually interesting to have secret relation pretending sumthing else bt actually they respond otherwise to each other. The way they are understanding each other making it feel more lively at present and even more curious to what can happen to their relation which am sure going to grow more strong then what wrong can go as he is drowning into the whirlpools of pain. Though true love hurt at times but the here its memories haunting n hurting him. SO really looking forward to this story waiting eagerly k it opens up soon i LOVE the way you put it about memories hurting and haunting Maan...that line is amazing!!! 👏 i might just have to use it as a dialogue or something in this ff...its perfect!!! 😳...but yes...they took it slow...friendship phir pyaar...you have to have a strong foundation before anything can truly develop into something more 😃

N u were even more good even after such a long break definitely masters do not need any warm ups they might leave it but cant forget their art even if they live it for long so dnt just doubt on your skills too aww...thanks hun!! 🤗

Loved the part

thanks for the pm n wishes

waiting for next do update sson

n it really feels to great to have u back again😳

TC

Originally posted by: Tyro

so his bro n bhabhi know...

PS: nice to c u back..

they know! now just to see what they will do 😉 and its good to be back!!
JAZ

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

so i come here and show all my excitement over you coming back and giving jappis that i totally forgot to read and give my comment 😆...i do apologize for being so forgetful😆 i figured...cuz i was like stalkerji got a bit too over excited ke asli kaam hi bhulgayi!! 😛

okay...on to my comment...

let's see...i laughed so hard when maan opens to the door to find Geet dancing to Thriller...poor Geet...i was torn between awwing and laughing at geet's situation...but nonetheless..it was a adorable scene bringing change to Maaneet's relationship... its so funny how randomly this song became part of the story...it was just to add some masti...but it proves very important for them two...aage aage dekho 😉

i don't know if u mentioned this and my memory is being hazy, but why doesn't Maan want Tej or Pammi abt his feelings towards geet ? eventually they will have to fix the ristha hmm...certain that they will fix it? 😉...and its not that he didnt want them to know...they just had a change from stranger to friends to something more in just a few months...they hadnt defined their relationship for themselves...kissi aur ko kya batate? they were just taking their time 😳

The playfulness at the baby shower with geet dancing and the guys getting caught...enjoyed it i love these girls vs guys functions...always a hoot! 😆

I am trying to get back into giving lamba wala comments...will take some practice...😆 it will take some practice to get me back to my lamba wala updates too..chal...saath mein practice karte hai 😊

Loved this installment ..waiting for more coming soon 😛

Your STALKERJI❤️ ( i feel special😆😳) YOU ARE!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Originally posted by: jnawaz

<font color="#cc00ff">Hi luv!! how've you been!! i was reading some OS's a few weeks ago of mine...and saw your comments...you do give wonderful comments...so thank you!!</font>😳<font color="#cc00ff">...just see what his Veerji does to him!!</font>😉</strong>

<strong><font color="#cc00ff">JAZ</font>