FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Superbly written! Past n presnet well incorporated! Maan n Geet became friends! Man in love wid her! Tej n Pammi r wonderful! Tej blaes Maan wen dey get caught! Ahh Poor Maan! Bt wat happend! Update soon

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

OMGNOFREAKINGWAYYOU'REBACK O_O! AHHH!! I've been waiting for this day for like .. an eternity?! But YAYYY YOU'RE BACK! WOOP WOOP!

*party over*

So glad you're back and don't worry we understand that you were extremely busy with the new positions (congratulations!) and the new home (congrats again! =D) .. but it's always so nice to see you writing and had missed your stories... so this is like the best way to make my day!

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Oh yes .. this story and the big mystery about why in the world is Mr. Maan Singh Khurana sulking and downing glasses of alcohol when his past was going all hunky dory =( Gosh Jaz what dhamaka are you going to drop on us later on =( Since you're so famously known for your twists... lol I dread that update which tells us what tore Maan and Geet apart ... (yet again =p) lol

But this update was so fun! I loved that the MJ connection was something they shared and how their mutual friendship grew from there...

One thing though .. we know that Maan was attracted to Geet in that sense but was Geet ?? Since it's from Maan's POV it's hard to tell if Geet was just being Geet or she also had feelings for him .. enough to want to get married to him! I think she did but you never know with you Jaz and the way you will turn around the story .. I atleast hope Geet had feelings for Maan ;)

But Maan is so awww-cute with his chupke chupke niharofy-ing Geet and checking her out haha ... the Teji and Maan convo out in the lawn was hilarious though .. and I loved the throwback to the first meeting of Maaneet..

The dewar-related songs and Maan making the connections was LOL! At first I thought there was going to be yet another song Geet would dance to related to Chachi-Dewar relations but they got caught hahaa..

I was rofling with Teji's total turnaround .. and I'm sure that one glance over to Geet told Teji and Pammi everything they needed to know about Maan's feelings and who he wants to marry .. something tells me Teji already had a hint ;)

I'm sure the next update will be Teji and Pammi's grilling session and asking Maan about his true feelings.. aawww.. but I sure hope everything goes fine .. Maan in the present seems pretty positive about it.. so it seems it'll be another happy update.. =D

Loved it Jazzy! And welcome back .. great kickstart to your return .. and I'm glad you're doin it one FF at a time since it both suits your schedule and will help us worry about one story at a time and not worry about Maaneet in 3 different FFs LOL! =p

Hope you missed my essay sized comments though .. I tried my best ;)

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

AHHH!!! this is what i missed the most from writing...all the WONDERFUL COMMENTS!! so good to be back amongst friends!! now im super excited to continue!! i shall reply to comment soon...im so excited!! oh how ive missed my friends...my stalkers...and my jaanus!!
JAZ

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Hehe thanks jaz n yes it has been dt long dear i remember u stopped writing that was around my sis marriage actually she gt married n nw u are back so just on new year we are blessed with a baby gul n it feel awesum to b a khala of a niece a super duper special feeling yaar

CHalo nw abt update it was just fab n amazing im loving the way u r taking their relation so slowly n gradually m even loving their bonding, its actually interesting to have secret relation pretending sumthing else bt actually they respond otherwise to each other. The way they are understanding each other making it feel more lively at present and even more curious to what can happen to their relation which am sure going to grow more strong then what wrong can go as he is drowning into the whirlpools of pain. Though true love hurt at times but the here its memories haunting n hurting him. SO really looking forward to this story waiting eagerly k it opens up soon

N u were even more good even after such a long break definitely masters do not need any warm ups they might leave it but cant forget their art even if they live it for long so dnt just doubt on your skills too

Loved the part

thanks for the pm n wishes

waiting for next do update sson

n it really feels to great to have u back again😳

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: hopehot
Lucky Timing--

sorry everyone 😆

Res-

kya yaar...ek toh first comment karti hai...phir gayab hojati hai ..i want my long comment varna update nahin karungi!! 😈

JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: Dilsay
welcome back dear awesome update dear

Originally posted by: JayaR
welcome back...
very lovely update...

Originally posted by: yappingduck
simply amazing.loved it

Originally posted by: anjucool
fabulous update

thanks for the warm welcome and the comments...so glad you guys are still reading the story...means a lot to see comments...though...some of you usually give longer comments...ahem ahem...Dilsay and Jaya!! 😉

JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: ruchshah
Hey Jaz, good to have you back!!!

I read the entire story from the beginning...n now in tune with this work😃I have always loved reading your works...Home coming being my all time fav!!! today's update was pretty good...love this past-present way of story-telling!!!
Thanks for the PM...please update soon!

Good to be back yaar!! 😃...glad it was easy to catch up on this one...unfortunately when i make my way to You & I...that will be a harder read (if you read it) 😆...but yes...Home Coming is close to my heart...it has to be my first FF where my favorite character is not even a main character...well not really..know what i mean...i just love Roshni!! 😳...hope next update is better than "pretty good" 😛...im just getting into the swing of things 😉

JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
omg u updated
really i fainted dear
yupieee u r back
nice update dear
please give regular updates
missing ur updates
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

tauba...dont faint...kuch hogaya toh? i cant send EMT's all the way from Los Angeles now can I? 😆...but im back for good now...so next update will be this week! 😳

JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: -bansi-
Glad to have u back di...!!

n of course your stories too... :)

Coming to the update...it was awesome...Maan interested in Geet...

Curious to know how his life changed forever...!!

Cont soon pls..!!

good to be back luv!! missed you all!! the story of how life changed...just give it a few more updates...😉

JAZ