Tumse Acha Kon Hai... (sajan ss) completed - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
i really love your part sam
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
part 6

next morning is kashish's mehendi...
maneet & sajan uske ghar ponchte hain ...

k-maan geet!!!
m-hey! kashish kesi hai tu?
k-me to theek hun tum dono kese ho?
g-hum bhi theek hain...
m-tune achank shadi ka plan bana liya hame bataya bhi nahi...
k-ab kya bataon maan sab kuch itna jaldi hogya k ...batane ka moka hi nahi mila...
g-koi bat nahi yar wese hamare hone wali jeeja ji kahan hai ? or unka nam kya hai?
k-(blushed) unka nam sujal hai...
m-hmm kya karta hai sujal?
g-uff! ho maan phir se shuru hogaye hum uski shadi me aye hain
m-han geet par ...
gu-bhai ap kahin bhi start hojate ho choro na...
k-maan ab chalo anadr yahin khada rehne ka irada hai kya...
gu-hello kashish di...me gunjan
k-hi gunjan kesi ho ?
gu-me theek hun apse milkar bohat khushi hui...
k-mujhe bhi chalo andar oa...
gu-hmm
m-samrat kahan hai?
g-bhai ap andar chalo me usey dekh k ati hun..
m-ok

gunjan samrat k pas jati hai samrat lauggage nikalta hai...

g-to janab yahan hai?
s-han kya hua gunajn?
g-nahi kuch hua to nahi hai par kya pata hojaye..
s-kya me kuch samjha nahi...
g-arey! baba me to mazak kari hun...
s-oh!
g-chalo andar bahi tumhe bula re hain...
s-mujhe par q?
g-acha theek hai bhai naahi me tumhe bula ri hun...
s-tum? par kyun koi kaam tha kya?
g-ek to tum sawal bohat poochte ho?
s-or tum jawab kahan deti ho...
g-to tum andar nahi chaloge...
s-nahi
g-acha esi baat hai...
s-ji bilkul
g-to tum mujhe jante nahi ho me kuch bhi kar sakti hun...
s-karlo...
g-really!
s-ya
g-ok then...

gunjan samart ke kareeb jati hai ,,,samrat peeche hat ta hai ...

s-ye kya kari ho tum?
g-tumhe ne to kaha k kuch bhi kar sakti hun...
s-mere kehne ka wo matlb nahi tha...
g-to phir kya matlb tha ,,, mujhe batao na
s-koi matlb nahi tha ...me jara hun andar...
g-hahhaha dar gaye ...
s-me kisi se nahi darta hun
g-han par gunjan singh khurana se darte ho...
s-kisne kaha esa?
g-mene kudh
s-itna confident hai k me tumse darta hun...
g-han
s-acha
g-han agr tum mujhe nahi darte to sabke samne mera hath pakar k mere sath dance kar sakte ho...
s-(ye kahan phas gaya yar ab me sabke samne kese) umm me
g-han bolo bolo (hahaha lagta hai bura phasa hai)
s-han karunga sabke samne tumhare sath dance...its my promise
g-kyaaa! (arey! ye to maan gaya ...chalo acha hai dekhte hain ese hi hawa me ud ra hai ya phir kar k bhi dikhata hai) ok...we will se...
s-we will see...
g-ab to chalo andar...yahi rukna hia sari umar...
s-han
g-what!
s-i mean nahi chalo

samrat left...

g-kya baat hai bada maza ayega aj raat ko to...hayeee ...ye me kya sochne lag gayi wo mera sath dance karega is par me happy hori hun ...han im happy waooo i think ise hi love kehte hain...waooo im in love ...mujhe samrat se pyar hai...

then wo bhi anadr chali jati hai...

sab hall me bethe hote hain...

g-wese kashish tu kab mil wa ri hai sujal se?
k-umm aj raat to wo ayega hi mil lena...
g-hmm
gu-wese di wo kese dikhte hain?
k-umm wo
gu-oyeee! hoyeee di sharma ri hain...
m-gunajn tu bhi na bechari ko dekh ...kese red hogyi hai
k-maaan
m-acha acha ...

now ab raat hoti hai ...mehendi ceremony start hoti hai...

all outfits...

kashish & sujal weraring this






Edited by sam_princess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved da song
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
lovly upd sam..amezing ..loved it ..sajan scens are very cute ...cnt soon ..
love
tia
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
dear me going to update my comment tommorow ok byeee

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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Sam really loved the update..Like the way story is going...SaJan was too cute...Plzz update soon...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
tht was soo awesome love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Nice update, dear. Thanks for the PM .😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
wowww just awesome
thanxx for the pm ... :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
superb parts yaar...plz cont soon...❤️

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