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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
nyc update ..

w8ing for he next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
part 5

ab subha hoti hai ...dono uth te hain nashta kar te hain ...then maneet wapas ate hain...

g-bhaiii bhabhiii ap log agaye?
m-han agye hain kesi hai tu?
g-me to theek hun ap dono kese ho?
geet-hum bhi theek hain...
g-acha ye batao shadi kesi rahi?
m-bohat achi thi ...
geet-han hame bohat maza aya ...
g-hmm gud! ap dono ne nashta kar liya hai ya nahi...
geet-nahi bas fresh hoke ate hain phir kar lete hain ...
g-ok ...

maneet fresh hone jate hain ...
sab dining table per hote hain ...then samrat bhi ata hai...

s-gud morning sir...
m- gud morning
geet-arey! samrat aooo tum bhi nashta karlo
s-nahi mem mene kar liya hai...
g-oh! plz ziyada jhoot mat bolo aao or nashta karo...
m-princess!
g-han bhai theek kehri hun me pehle bhi isne esa hi kiya tha
geet-pehle bhi matlb?
g-i mean mujhe esa lagra hai yeh jhoot bolra hai
m-tujhe q esa lagra hai?
s-rehne dijiye na sir
m-koi baat nahi aaao karlo nashta
s-nahi sir
g-ufff ho! karlo na khane me zeher nahi hai...
geet-gunjan!!!
g-sorry bhabhi
geet-its ok
g-ab to ajao ...
s-hmm

sab nashta kar lete hain maan office chala jata hai ...geet apne kamo me buzy hoti hai or gunjan apne room me hoti hai ...

g-ufff! ho im damn bored yar ...kya karun?

or udhar samrat

s-agar aj gunjan ne kuch bol liya hota to meri band baj jati ...thank god bach gaya
g-itni jaldi kya hai super cool
s-ye kahn se awaz ayi...
g-agar ap peeche murne ka kasht karenge to apko sab kuch saaf nazar ayega
s-ap!
g-ji han me...or tum mere bare me ye kya kehre the?
s-me kuch bhi to nahi ...
g-dekho sach sach batao warna
s-warna ...kya?
g-warna me wo karungi jo tumne socha bhi nahi hoga ...
s-acha to matlb ap mujhe challenge karii hain
g-kuch esa hi samjh lo
s-hahah samrat shergill ko challenges se nahi darta...
g-really! hahah par gunjan singh khurana se dar lagta hai...
s-ji nahi
g-ji haan
s-nahi
g-haaan
s-nahiii
g-han han han

then geet enter...

geet-ye kya hora hai?
s-kuch nahi mem bas
g-nahi nahi batao batao
s-kya bataon? kuch batane layak thodi hai
g-haawww! u lier
s-me lier
g-or nahi to kya
geet-stop it!...tum log mujhe bata re ho ya me maan ko bataon wahi tum logo se poochenge ok abhi bulati hun..maaan
g/s-nahiii
geet-ab aye na line pe ...chalo batao ye sab kya hora tha...
s-actually mem ...gunjan madam ko shopping pe jana chari thi or mene kaha abhi nahi thodi der baad ...to wo maan nahi ri thi ,,,,isi liye wahi hora tha han nahi han nahi...
g-kyaaa???
s-han or nahi to kya bolen na gunjan madam
g-han han bhabhi
geet-itni si baat per lad re the ...or gunjan to kya hua thodi der baad chala jana ok
g-ok bhabhi
s-hmmm

geet chali jati hai...

g-thank god
s-hahaha
g-tum hasre ho ...ruko abhi batati hun tumhe...

phr dono poore room me bhagte hain ...then slip hoke bed per girte hain or ek dosre ki ankhon me kho jate hain...phir senses me ate hain gunjan has k neche chali jati hai ...samart bhi smile karta hai...then background me song chalta hai...

'gunjan'
Aah aah aah aah, aah aah aah ' 2

'samrat'
Pehli baar dil yun beqaraar hua hai ' 2
Aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai
Ab to bada mushkil intezaar hua hai ' 2
Aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai

'gunjan'
Dil pe mere tera ikhtiyaar hua hai ' 2
Aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai

'samrat'
Neend nahin aati hai saari raat mujhko
Har ghadi sataati hai teri baat mujhko

'gunjan'
Haal kya hai mera kaise main bataaoon
Door jaake tere paas chali aaoon ' 2

'samrat'
Yeh kya mere dil ko mere yaar hua hai ' 2
Aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai

Bolti nazar ki bekhudi ne loota
Yaar mujhko teri saadgi ne loota

'gunjan'
Dard lag raha hai mujhko ab suhaana
Aaj maine jaana kya hai dil ka lagaana ' 2

'samrat'
Mujhko dhadkanon pe aitbaar hua hai ' 2
Aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai
Pehli baar dil yun beqaraar hua hai

'gunjan'
Ab to bada mushkil intezaar hua hai

'samrat'
Haan, aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai

'gunjan'
Haan, aisa lag raha hai jaise pyaar hua hai
Jaise pyaar hua hai

'samrat'
Hey hey hey, aah haa haa aah haa

'gunjan'
Aah aah aah, aah aah aah

'samrat'
Hey hey hey, aah haa haa aah aah

'gunjan'
Aah aah aah aah, aah aah aah

background song was end...

then call ata hai ...gunjan recive karti hai ..

g-hello

caller-hi kya me maan se baat kar sakti hun?

g-par ap hain kon?

caller-mera nam kashish hai ...me maan ki friend hun

g-oh! but bhai to ghar me nahi hain wo office gaye hain ...

geet-kya hua gunjan?

g-ek min hold plz

k-ok

g-bhabhi bhai ki kisi friend ka call hai nam hai kashish?

geet-kashish...oh haan yaad aya lao mujhe do phone

g-ok ye le

geet-helllo kashish ...kesi ho ? pehchan mujhe?

k-umm geet! rite

g-han sahi pehchan kaho kese call kiya?

k-actually agle hafte meri shadi hai or tumhe or maan ko zaroor ana hai ...or haan maan ki sis agyi hai na to usey bhi lekar ana ...ok

geet-ok hum zaroor ayenge...

k-ok byeee take care...

geet-byeee


ab raat hoti hai maan office se ata hai ...sab dinner kare hote hain ...then geet kehti hai ...

geet-maan aj kashish ka call aya tha?

m-kashish ka ...par kyun?

geet-wo is liye kyun k agle hafte kashish ki shadi hai or usne hame bulaya hai

m-waoo! thats gud news ...

geet-hmm or usne kaha hai gunjan ko bhi lekar ana hai to gunjan tu chale gi na

g-bhabhi me...me wahn ake kya karungi? wahn me kisi ko janti bhi nahi

geet-to kya hua samart to hoga na tere saath tu uske sth baten kar lena...

s-par me?

m-han kyun nahi samart wese bhi hamari princess bore na ho to tumhe to chalna hoga ...hai na geet

geet-han maan sahi kehre hain ...to final hua k hum sab wahn jare hain ok...

g-ok to me chalungi...

all-good!

ab raat hoti hai sab sojate hain... ab subha hoti hai sab nashta karte hain ...

next morning is kashish's mehendi...



heres the part end

PART 6

love

SAM






Edited by sam_princess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
owesame part i loved it its so amezing nd suparb upd..cnt soon
thanks for pm me..
love
tia...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
awesommee part sam ji loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
wowww great ...love it ..
waiting for the next part ...:D
thanxx for the pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Nice update hon, Thanks for the PM.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
superb ss dear
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
SuperB Update! Nice chapter keep updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Superbbb update dear...
Loved it a lot...
N that song... mujhe bohot pasand hai wo gaana...
Very nicely expressed scenes... bohot accha laga...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
superbbb part
i really like it ..<3333

love
muskaan

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