Tumse Acha Kon Hai... (sajan ss) completed - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

192

Views

40k

Users

49

Likes

465

Frequent Posters

ramishamalik thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#21
awesome update dear,,,,,😛
Thabassum19 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#22
haan mujay bahut pasand ayya.😳..
gunjan has got so cute attire😳
lets see ki wo uss suit sam kay liya lathi hain hai ya nahi😆..
great update😳
445892 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#23
waooo cute update
sajan were sooo sweeet
cant wait to see samrat s expresion when she giftd him suite
Silhoutte92 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#24
awesome part
do cnt soon🤗
Joseph_A thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Lovely Concept SAM👏 👏👏 Thanks for PM.😳 I'll submit my comment very soon,till then Reserve😳.

Joseph❤️
..-Ayesshhaa-.. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Sam 🤗
loved your part alot !!
great job !!
Amazing update !!
frndz_is_my_lyf thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#27
guyzzz thanks for ur lovely comments...

love
sam
preety88 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#28
interesting and fantastic concept...pls pm me when u update...cont soon
nishi_I-fian thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#29
nice ss samy...
Luv it...
Add me to ur pm list ...
Update soon...
frndz_is_my_lyf thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#30


gunjan:its realy nice par me ye kis k liye loon bahi to ese pehente nahi or mera yahn koi frnd bhi nahi hai...idea me ise samart k liye lungi ya gud idea...gunjan wo le lti hai

ab dono ghar ponchte hain...

samrat outhouse me chala jata hai or gunjan KM me ...

g:koi haiii hellooo bhaiii bhabhiii...arey sab kahn gaye.?

then servant ata hai

servant:choti madam bade sahab or geet mem sahab bahar gaye hain ...
g:bahr gaye hain ...kahn?
s:woto pata nahi hai
g:acha theek hai jao or dinner lagao
s:ji

g:bhai bhabhi bahar gaye hain wo bhi mujhe bina bataye?

then gunjan ka cell bajta hai...

g:bhai ka call >...hello bahi kahn ho ap?
m:actually princess me or geet ek marriage me agye hain mere frnd ki marriage hai to achanak se jana pada sorry tu bahr thi to tujhe batana bhool gaya sorry realy sorry...
g:koi bat nahi bahi to ap log kab tak aaoge?
m:hum 2 dino me ajayenge tu apna khayal rakhna or kisi cheez ki zarurat hoto mujhe call karna ok...
g:ok bahi
m:aagar tujhe dar lage to tu samrat ko bula dena ok...ek kaam kar us se bol k 2 din tak wo KM me rahe jab tak hum na ajayen theek hai...
g:theek hai bahi ok byee tc
m:byee love u

call end...

g:uff! ho im very tried pehle change kar leti hun ...

gunjan change karti hai then lite off hojati hai...

g:aaa!!!

in the outhouse

s:ye awaz kis ki hai arey! ye to gunjan ki cheek thi par wo itni zor se q chilla ri hai bhoot dekh liya kya? jake dekhta hun...
g:ye lite kese gayi? nakulll ramuuu koi to aao ...koi sunta q nahi hai sab k sab kahn gayeee omg! ek to itna andhera upar se itna bada ghar me ...mein akeli...koi haiii...or ye candle bhi nahi milri pata nahi kahn padi hain...

then gunjan ...samart ko dekhti hai wo samjhti hai koi bhoot hai ... or faint hojati hai...

g:bhooot ...bho bho bhoottt
s:gunjan gunjan me koi bhoot nahi hun me samrat hun gunjan...arey! ye to behosh hoagyi hai ...ab kya karun room me lekar jata hun...

thodi der baad gunjan ko hosh ata hai...

g:ahaan! me kahan hun me is room me kese ayi kahin wo bhoot to nahi laya mujhe...
s:ji haan wo bhoot hi apko yahin laya hai...
g:kyaaa kahan hai wo haan kahan hai?
s:apko dikh nahi raha...
g:nahi to
s:apke samne to khada hai ...
g:hahahah tum ...tum mujhe yahn laye...
s:haan ap behosh hogayi thi wo bhi mujhe dekh kar kya me itna bura dikhta hun kya?
g:nahi nahi esa kuch nahi hai me tumhe dekh kar behosh q hone lagi ...wese ho bhi sakti hun...
s:kya? par wo kyun?
g:kyun k tum itne handsome or janouble jo ho...
s:hehehe ap kitni pyari batain karti hai ...
g:sach me?
s:or nahi to kya wese ap chillayi q thi pehle?
g:wo mujhe andhere se dar lagta hai...
s:apko darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai jab me apke saath hun to...
g:sach me tum hamesha mere saath raho ge...
s:hannn
g:kabhi chor k nahi jaoge...
s:ap esa kyun kehri hai ap bethiye me apke liye khana lata hun...
g:nahi tum yahin betho mujhe warna phir dar lage ga...
s:me hun na phir darne ki kya baat...
g:theek hai tum jao par jaldi ana...
s:me yun gaya or yun aya...

gunjan smiled...

gunjan :samrat kitna acha hai na wo mera kitni care karta hai hamesha mere saath hota hai ...esa to koi apna hi kar sakta hai jab bhi me samart ke saath hoti hai mujhe bohat acha feel hota hai esa lagta hai bas ye waqt yahin ruk jaye ...or me uske saath har lamha rahun wo mujhe kahin bhi chor k nahi jaye...jab wo mujhse door hota hai to becheni si hota hai dil usko har jaga talash karta hai k kahan hai wo...oho! ye mujhe kya hota jara hai? tu bhi na gunjan pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hai?

s:kya sochti rehti hain ap?
g:umm...wo...kuch nahi
s:acha par apki ankhen to kuch or hi kehri hain...
g:choro na mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai lao khana lao
s;ye lijiye...
g:par yahan to andhera hai or me andhere me khana nahi khati hun...
s:koi bat nahi ye lijiye candle jala di ab to roshni hoagyi na...
g:par...
s:dekhiye na ab hamara aj ka dinner candle lite dinner ban gaya hai na...
g:hehehe hmm chalo khate hain...tum bhi khao na...
s:nahi ap kha lain mujhe bhook nahi hai...
g:dekho mene kaha tha na naa sunna mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai chalo khao..
s:ok ok

samrat in mind:wao! gunjan kitni pyari lagri hai mene socha tha gunajn kisi rich family se hai to wo bohat atituted hogi par ye to boaht simple or bohat innocent hai ise dekh kar to kisi ko bhi is se pyar hojaye...isko bholi shakal iski cute cute ankhen iski muskaan par to koi bhi larka fida hojaye...par me ye sab kyun sochra hun nahi sam nahi tu or gunjan ek nahi ho sakte wo ek rich family se belong krti hai or tu ek mamuli sa bodyguard...no no ...

g:kya hua samrat...
s:no ans
g:samrat
s:no ans
g:me tumse kuch poochri hun?
s:ji haan wo...
g:kahan khoye hue ho khana khao na...
s:han me khara hun...
g:wese samrat tumhe kabhi kisi se pyar hua hai?
s:umm nahi q?
g:ese hi poochri hun?
s:apko hua hai?
g:nahi par itna janti hun wo mujhe zaroor milega wo kahin na khain mera intezaar kara hoag jiss trha me uska intezaar karti hun... duniya me har kisi ka life partner hai or me janti hun mera bhi bohat jald mujhse milega...
s:hmmm ap kafi uncha sochti hain...
g:kyun na sochun akhir ye meri life hai ...mujhe pura haq hai isko janne ka...hai na...
s:hmm kafi raat hoagyi hai me chalta hun or ap bho sojaye...
g:par ?
s:kya hua kuch kehna hai apko mujhse?
g:nahi wo...actually ...haan yaad aya bhai or bhabi kahin bahar gaye vw hain or bahi ne kaha hai ke tum do din tak KM me rahoge...outhouse me nahi...
s:par me wahan theek hun ...
g:arey! hote hoge theek par me to yahn theek nahi hun na ...
s:ji me kuch samjha nahi?
g:i mean ke agar mujhe raat ko dar laga to me tumhe kese bualongi is liye tum yahan rahoge nd thats final...
s:ok theek hai ...me apna saman lata hun ..
g:me bhi chalti hun saatj me...
s:ok

dono saman lete hain or KM me ate hain...

s:kya soch rahi ho?
g:me soch rahi thi thoda music hojaye...
s:music?
g:haan i love dancing & singing ...chalo na hum dance karte hain
s:par me apke saath /...
g:ufff! ho kuch nahi hota chalo
s:par...
g:chalo na...

gunjan uska haath pakar kar dance karna shuru hojati hai ...background me ye song chalta hai...

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua

Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum ... -5

heres the part end

i hope all are like the part ...so do big super duper comments & also hit the like button...

PART 4_

love
SAM



Edited by sam_princess - 14 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 months ago

The Unending Dream OS [Completed]

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 months ago

Moh-Maya ~ MayRa OS [Completed]

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

5 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

5 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".