Tumse Acha Kon Hai... (sajan ss) completed - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Tia...Awesome update...Loved Gunjan a lot..The way Samrat was teasing her was too cute..Plzz continue soon..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar thats a great part ..
unki (ks)shadi hogayii😳..
great 😳
aur yeh log n half the way to confession😳...
lovely update❤️
do continue soon⭐️!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update, Tia. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update tia loved it cont soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome !!
loved it
continue soon
love
Ayesha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww Gunjan... soo cute... n Sam toh superbbb tha yaar...
Kashish n Sujal ki shaadi haayeee mai to waha pe b Sajan ko imagine kar rhi thi 😆
Fattang update tha ree...!!! very cute n lovely...!!!!
Kitni filmy type ki hai yaar tu?!!!! But sach me 1 alag si masti hoti hai tere updates me...!!!
Bohot mazza aaya read kar ke... Thanxx for d pm n this beautiful update... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks for all lovly comments guyzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg kitna time laga banane main :o
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 9

samrat jata hai jate jate bolta hai..

samrat:wese gunjan ..
gunjan:haan😛
samrat:hum frendz se bhar kar bhi kuch hen...

then samrat ye keh kar apne room me chala jata hai...

gunjan:(blush)yesss buddhu kahin ka...pata nai I LOVE U kab bole ga...

and sajan are sleeping...

next day...

maan:geet geet kahan ho..
geet:maan me washroom me hun..
maan:oh! acha

geet bhar ati hai ..

geet:han bole maan kya bt hai??
maan:geet chalo hame abhi jana hai..
geet:per kahan??
maan:geet kal princess ka birthday hai...tm bhul gayi..
geet:oh! nai maan muje yad hai chalo chalte hn..

geet tayar hoti hai then maan or geet khud puri party ka arengment karne jate hn..

samrat so raha hota hai then wo sapna dekh raha hota hai..

gunjan:samrat utho bht der ho gayi hai..
samrat:sone do na gunjan or ake khud bhi so jao aao..
gunjan:samrat tum uth re ho ya me pani laun..
samrat:...
gunjan:samrat..
samrat:...

gunjan coffee leke ati hai then gunjan us ka hath garm coffee me dal deti hai...

samrat:aaa!!!
gunjan:hahaha q or suna hai???
samrat:gunjan me tume chorun ga nai..

samrat uthta hai then gunjan ko pakar kar peache whole per gher deta hai...

gunjan:samrat..(low toune)
samrat:hmm ab kya hua nikal gai sari hasi..
gunjan:abhi nai plzzz...
samrat:abhi..
gunjan:nai
samrat:han

samrat gunjan ke lips ke kareeb ata hai then use kiss karne hi wala hota hai to uske room me gunjan ajati hai..phr samrat ek dam se uthta hai..nd he was counfuse..


gunjan:gud morning samrat!
samrat:tum yahn is waqt lekin abhi to tm wahn mere sath..(wo whole ki taraf finger utha ke ye bolta hai)
gunjan:kya whole ki taraf tum or me??lekin me to abhi ayi hun ander..tum koi sapna dekh rahe the kya???
samrat:shayad han..(smile)

samrat fresh hone chala jata hai..

gunjan:per esa kon sa sapna tha jo samrat itna muskura raha hai..hmm bhar ae puchti hn..

samrat bhr ata hai...

gunjan:samrat esa kon sa sapna hai jisme tum itna muskura re ho..
samrat:mus..muskura kon ra ha..
gunjan:samrat tume jab jhot bolna na ata ho to koshish bhi mat kia karo jhot bolne ki..batao kya hua??
samrat:are koi bt nai hai gunjan tum khamakha ese pagal hori ho..chalo chalte hn..
gunjan:ok az u wish chalo...


sajan phr neache breakfast karte hn...phr breakfast kar ke samrat peache ground me basketball khel ra hota hai...or gunjan ghar me hoti hai..

gunjan:are yar ye samrat kidher chala gaya kab se dhund ri hun..

gunjan phr apni mate ko bulati hai ..

gunjan:suno tumne kahin samrat ko dekha hai..
mate:jii mam wo bodyguard!
gunjan:us ka nam samrat hai samji tum (anger and shouting)
mate:ji..jii mam wo wo ghar ke peache wale ground me hn..
gunjan:thek hai jao apna kam karo...
mate:jii..

mate chali jati hai..

gunjan:ye samrat peache bb ground me kya karne gaya hai..jake dekhti hun..

samrat jese hi ball phek ta hai to gunjan samne ajati hai or gunjan ko sir per bht zor se ball lagti hai or us ka sir neache zameen per lagta gai..

gunjan:aaahhh!!!!

samrat phr jaldi se bhagte hua...

samrat:gunjann!!!!
gunjan:...
samrat:gunjan ankhen kholo..
gunjan:sam..rat...
samrat:gunjan bolo...


samrat gunjan ke muh per pani marta hai..

samrat:gunjan tum thk to ho na..
gunjan:hmm me thek hun bas thori si chot hai..
samrat:ye thori sii chot hai chalo mere sath me tme pati kar deta hun chalo...i m sorry tume mmeri waja se itni chot lagi muje nai pata tha ke tum wahn kb ayi..
gunjan:koi bat nai samrat hota hai kbi kabii esa...wese tumne muje kabi bataya nai ke tum bb bhi khelte ho...
samrat:han..wo me college me sab se bst student tha or college ka cool dude..or wahn ka bb champ tha...or sab larkiyan mere per marti thi..per kabi koi meri dreamgirl jesi nai mili wahn...
gunjan:acha to tumari dreamgirl kesi hone chaiye...


here is part end...
thnks

LOVE
TIA...

plzz do super duper comments...





Edited by ghamkansoon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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