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Posted: 13 years ago
@ kiddo


u r rite 😆
its our thread

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1


ooo !! madam so hot .. out AC and sit .. seems like u ll fry me now with anger 😆


not excatly coz u know im a veggie 😆 so u r life is safe😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

we don't need u r permission dear bcz its our thread too 😛😉


i like this 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
accha hay
u r exams are over ?????
kya???

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Posted: 13 years ago
updating now in 2 mins 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

accha hay
u r exams are over ?????
kya???


for whom is this question ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

a big thanks for pari for helping me with the hindi part 😊

this part is for all my friends who encouraged me to continue this FF .. for some days i even thought of discontinuing it but poongs and thabs wont let me ... the word thnx is not sufficient ...

PART - 13


Dadi was sitting and a reading a book in her room . suddenly two hands closed her eyes from back . dadi touched the hands and was totally surprised .

Dadi : annie ????

Annie laughed : wow dadi !! you guessed right !!

Both hugged each other and arjun took blessings from dadi .

Dadi : arey you both just now left to US and you are back ?? anything special ???

Annie pouted : dadima seems like you are not happy to have us back .

Dadi : aisa nahi hai beta . am totally surprised to see you both in a short span of time .

Arjun : dadima maan ne hume phone kiya tha jaldi aane keliye so hum sab jald se jald agayi ...

Dadi was even more confused : maan ne kaha ??? per why dint he inform me about it .

Annie : may be bhai wants to give you a surprise .

Dadi : surprise ??? okay you both freshen up now . I ll ask nakul to prepare lunch .

Annie : teek hai dadima .

AT the same time in office .

Maan was walking towards his cabin with adi besides him .

Maan : adi , makes arrangements for the meeting next week .

Adi : sir , we can finish it this week itself .

Maan gave him a look : tomorrow is a holiday right ??? next is week end . do I need to explain this also ??

Adi was startled : but sir what is the speciality tomorrow ??

Maan gave his famous MSK glare and hissed out : its REPUBLIC day .

By that time they entered the cabin , adi was even more confused .

Adi : per sir , what is the connection between republic day and holiday sir ???

Maan yelled : OUT OF MY CABIN NOW .

Adi just ran away for his life seeing his avatar .

Maan : I tried to be nice for a day and these guys start questioning me .

Just then maan received a call from dadima informing about annie's arrival . he replied that he would be there within an hour and cut the call . he then called his secretory and told her to cancel all his meeting for that week and schedule it in the next week . his secretory was pleasantly shocked but felt happy that she would get a long week end off ..

Maan reached home and found everyone sitting on the dining room waiting for him . as soon as annie saw maan , she hugged him tight followed by arjun .

Maan : how are you annie ??

Annie : am fine bhai . how are you doing ??

Maan : fine annie .. then to arjun : arjun I hope I dint disturb your busy schedule ..

Arjun : nothing of that sort .. wats the matter that you called us to return urgently ??

Dadi cleared her throat to indicate her presence . Maan gave her a sheepish smile as if a little boy getting caught while stealing a candy .

Dadi : am I missing something maan ???

Maan immediately changed his expression to stern and said : nothing dadi , am just planning for a long vacation this week ..

Annie , dadi and arjun shouted at the same time : WHAT ??? ARE YOU PLANING FOR A VACATION ???

Geet who just now entered the house asked : Why are you all shouting like you had seen ghost ???

Maan just shrugged his shoulders .

Geet went to dadi : arey dadi batayiye na . kya bath hai ??

Dadi spoke as if she had seen a ghost : maan is planning for a vacation .

Geet smiled widely : tho yeh bath hai .. we had been making arrangement for this for last two days .

Annie : we ???

Geet : haan mai aur maan .

Arjun : matlab u r also coming ??

Geet faked being angry : oh u r planning to leave me and go ?? this is not at all fair annie .

Dadi : arey muje chakkar aa rahe hai aap logo ko bhat sun kar .

Geet : dadi meh batati hun . we are going for a week end vacation to goa . myself and maan had made all arrangements for the stay . aur haan maa , papa and pinky bhi aa rahe hai .

Annie started shouting and jumping : wow dadi !!! a perfect family vacation after a long time !!! we gonna enjoy this immensely !!!

Maan smiled at her and said : now that everything is cleared , pack your luggages after lunch . we ll leaving in the evening .

Annie : oww bhai !!! I cant wait for it ..

Everyone proceeded to have lunch ' dadi could not thank god enough for bring this change in maan . "may be time for some special occasion" she thought . but sensing his angry grandson she decided to take things slow and steady ''

precap : : vacation in goa 😉

PREVIOUS : PART 12

NEXT : PART 14


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okay thats the update for today .. hope you guys like it .. please hit the like button and leave your valuable comments

Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow
so the changes came in angry young m(a)an haan ????
cool !!!!
loved the way those three wer shocked to see maans new behaviour
and really loved the way they responded
wen he announced about
the family vacation
so both the families are going on vacation
hope this vacation chang maans totally
and so geet with him in goa wud really be intresting
no doubt u have an admirable writting skills



sweety😳




Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet n maan planned for a vacation...nice...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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