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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Hey Durga really I just couldn't stop laughing

confidential hai tear it off after reading hehe
this was just too good
love-Piya


Originally posted by: Jyoti121



Awesome update that 2 after a long time...



Originally posted by: maanhar

That was really a funny one, first with Sasha and then Geet and her sis


Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part..
Thanks for the pM


Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi durga, u finally updated! Gld 2 c u bak! Lovely rocking update! .Poor Maan! well witten, updtae soon



Originally posted by: Tishuu

paithon (python) hahahahahhahaa 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣and the confidential and tear after reading😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

oh gosh i have tears in my eyes...


Originally posted by: -Prithi-

awesome update
thanks for the pm
continue soon




Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, nice, brilliant part


Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
OMG Sasha...
ha ha ha...
cont soon dear...


thnx a lot for commenting ya .. ll update soon !!!!
Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1


thnx for commenting yaar ..
glad that you liked the update 😃
i ll surprise you with my next update also tomorrow 😉

hi dear how r u ?

wow would be waiting for u r update dear ...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

ahhh !! looking chooo cute !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



thank God now ur exams are over...please give us quick updates...

this is really hillarious update...

I wonder Sasha is really so stupid or she deliberately did that...
was there something else in that letter...
Geet and Pinky's fight...loved this sisterly fights...

awesome update...thanx for pm


am totally free for 2 weeks !!! so ready for reading soon !! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ixiaa

poor maan...stuck between carzy females every where, sasha, tasha, geet pinky...aur koi bachca hai kya?...but had fun reading Geet and pinkys fight.

Is there some twist or something...in that "tear after reading it" letter??
amazing update...plz cont soon.
Rose


wat to do ???thats wat happens when a boy is caught with two girls 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago



Originally posted by: sur001

Awesome
lovely. . .
Update soon


Originally posted by: amita5

awesome update


waiting for the next part

please update soon



Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

poor maan!😆

i just can't stop laughing!🤣
continue soon!


Originally posted by: ritzy09

oh dear...i liked it...totally funfilled...bas it was after a long time...so update sooner honey


Originally posted by: rennie

sooo sweet!!!!!especially the paithon bit...update soon...


thnx for commenting frnds .. ll update the next one tomorrow .
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update bechara maan
lol cnt stop laughing
update the next part soon pls
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanluver

superb update bechara maan

lol cnt stop laughing
update the next part soon pls
waiting eagerly


updating now ..
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Posted: 13 years ago

A special thanks to "poongs123" for helping me with the concept .

Pls add "mrk_pm" to your buddy list for further pms .


PART - 12

People say time heals everything . yes !! its true that time can also change people mindset or say the attitude !!! In this modern era , hours passes by sec and days by minutes . man gets to work mechanically from Monday to Friday hoping for holidays on the week-end . some people have no difference . whether it be a weekday or a week end . they work as robots to finish their work . not for the purpose of taking a break , but to go on for a new venture. In this case , not that they work as robots but also change their surrounding to suit them . well this was the case of our hero "maan singh khurana" till the entry of his dad's friend's family . On seeing them spending time with the family happily , even he wants to take a break and spend time with his family .

Break ??? is the word "enjoyment"even there in his dictionary ???? life came to this words all because of that particular weekend masti that he had witnessed at geet's home with his dadima .

( guys the parts in blue are maan's flashback of what happened that week end )

It was the usual Saturday .that week was maan and dadima's turn to visit geet's home . they started quite late since maan had to finish some of his office works. When they entered through the gate , they saw pinky running around geet in the garden with a water pipe in her hand . they were laughing and running all through the place . dadima and maan smiled looking at them . vaibhav came out calling geet but stopped looking at the mess they were creating . he called geet with a stern voice which made both the sister to stop dead in their tracks .

Their expressions were worth watching . it was like little girls were caught stealing chocolates . they gave a nervous laugh and blamed each other at the same time .

"appa sab pinky ke vaje se huwa hai"

"appa sab geet ke baje se huwa hai"

Vaibhav walked towards them still with a stern look and took the bucket filled with water near by and wat happ next minute was a complete shock to everyone . geet and pinky were dripping wet like a crow with a fearful expression . dadima , maan and vaibhav could not hold up any longer . they just roared into laugher on seeing them . maan had tears in his eyes laughing . dadi noticed this and felt happy that he was completely out of his shell , living happily ''

Meanwhile the devil sisters were just burning in anger literally .

Geet shouted : apppaaa..

Vaibhav laughed even more loudly on seeing her . chitra who was witnessing the whole scene from inside house , wiped her tears and prayed god that the happiness should last forever . she composed herself and came outside .

Chitra : vaibhav , what are you doing ?? do you think you are a kid ???playing with these shaitans ??

Vaibhav side hugged her : arey chitra , learn to enjoy the life !!! waise bhi , am only 47 , not old okay !!!

Chitra gave him a glare that instantly shut him up : haan madam geet and pinky , you both are not entering the home without cleaning the mess .

Dadi just then entered the scene : rehne do na chitra . atleast let them enjoy their life.

Chitra : sorry maa . among these acts , I dint even welcome you in .

Dadi : no problem chitra .

Chitra gestured geet and pinky to get changed and join them for lunch soon . maan on the other hand felt like laughing all over again on seeing the drenched sisters . he some how controlled himself and settled discussing some business affairs with vaibhav while dadima and chitra started their gossibs .

After some time , chitra called everyone for lunch . geet sat there with a grumpy mood while vaibhav was still teasing . dadima was the only one who supported geet and pinky . but when vaibhav asked sorry in a cute way by holding his ears , geet could not hold any more fake angry and smiled . the lunch time was full of teasing and laughing .

( guys the parts in blue are maan's flashback of what happened that week end )

Maan came out of his thoughts when he heard his phone ringing . It was from Adi . he answered and kept the mobile on silent . he thought of going for a walk . May be that could get him some clarity .

He sat on the garden bench and thought about his relation with his sister . had he ever got a chance to spend time with his sister like that ???? he actually missed out every thing in his life .. the memories that could have been treasured all through his life ' did he have any now ??? his college life , he starting office were all so mechanical ' there was nothing in his mind than turning his dad's dream to a reality '.. he never had the time to realize what he was missing all through these sacrifices ..

But now he was determined of one thing . why cant he start living his life ??? just like others , spending time with his family ???? have friends whom he could share his secrets with ??? her sister whom he could fight and tease all the time ????

Yes , maan singh khurana is all set to win his family back !!! the first thing he done was to call his sister back home from US '.

A change was all it needs for '..


PREVIOUS : Part 11

NEXT : PART 13


okay guys !! how was the update ??? i knew its short one but i had decide to update frequently from now on ..

please hit the "like" button and leave your comments .

Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG yippe me first here ... simply awesome sweetie i loved the flashback ... hehehheh lovely family for geet yeayeee frm now on we gonna see diff MSK for his family eagerly waiting for

next dear to u my kutty
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago

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