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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Interesting concept... loved it
Pls continue
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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updating first part now ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Neki aur puch puch...
Amazing concept Durga continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome concept kutty 😊continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds really interesting Durga...please do update soon...I am so excited...new Maaneet FF...Yeah
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello frnds !! i hope you all like this update ...first one is kind of emotional but after you can see many of the maneet moments !!!! thanx for your support !!!

PART- 1

Daughter : no ways am agreeing to this appa. .

Dad : if you cant change your decision , why should I ?

Daughter : appa please try to understand ..

Dad : there is nothing to understand here . this is my final decision .

Daughter : teek hai papa . my decision is also final . I ll never marry anyone other than Swathik .

Dad : geeet ' I had provided you with all your needs till now . your education and everything . till now I had been right . also I know how to shape your future .

Geet : yes appa . I know you had been guiding all through my past . but I want to take my decision for my future .

Her mom slapped her hard : from where you got this much guts ah ??? if we don't object anything , I dosent mean that we ll accept what ever you say . I had allowed him in the house believing that he ll be a good friend . if I had known earlier that he might do something like this , I would given him very good lesson very that time .

Dad : leave her chitra . as of now , we are not important for her . some one from a garbage had become important .

Geet : appa please .

Chitra : ama vaibhav . even seeing our struggle , she is not leaving that bleady bustard ..

Vaibhav suddenly got severe pain in his chest and fainted ..

Chitra saw this and shrieked : oh my god !! what happened to you vaibhav ???open your eyes '.saii???geeet ???some one come here '

Geet stood there shocked 'pinky , geets younger sister came and passed the water and immediately called for the ambulance..

AT HOSPITAL

Vaibhav was rushed to the hospital ''.

Doctor : mam , please sign these documents ..

Geet immediately signed and made way to the reception for making payments '

Chitra sat there crying with sai ..

Geet realized that she was responsible for her dad's condition and started hating herself '

Just then a nurse came outside the ICU .

Geet moved frantically : nurse , how is my dad ??

Nurse : sorry mam , we cant say anything now .. please wait for the main doctor .

Chitra cried even more on hearing that ..

Chitra : if anything happens to my husband , i wont leave you geet ..

Geet : mom please , nothing ll happen to appa . you calm down ..

To make the situation even worser , swathik came rushing towards them .

Chitra BP shoot up on seeing him . she made her way towards him and slapped him hard .

Swathik raised his voice : aunty !!

Chitra : dare you raise your voice .

Geet tried to intervene but chitra pushed her after .

Chitra : how dare you come here ??? don't have you any shame left in you ???

Swathik : aunty this is not the right time to talk these things .

Chitra : you are no one advice me. Just get out of this place .

Just then doctor came towards them .

Chitra : dr , how is he ??

Dr : he is stable now .. but he is still in critical position .

Chitra : can I see him now ??

Dr : yea , one at a time .

With that chitra rushed towards ICU while doctor gestered geet to come to his cabin .

Swathik was about to move with her but pinky interupeted him and gestured him to stay behind .

After geet left ,

pinky : why are you here ?

Swathik : sai you are younger , you wont understand .

pinky : am 16 yrs old , enough to understand these things .

Swathik seemed less interested : what do you want now ?

pinky : get out of my sisters life . cant you see , how we are suffering now ?? do you want to see anything more ???why cant you leave us in peace ?

swathik : let your sister say this . you are no one to interfere in our life . just stay out and cry with your useless mom . am not behind your sister , she is behind me .

Geet who was standing behind him listening to him was heart wrenched . she clapped her hands : yea am behind you ..wow swathik . wow !!! am so applaused . thanks for letting me know everything .

Swathik was dumbstuck : no geet , you are getting wrong.. am just casually '.

Geet : this is not the way to speak casually ' my dad had a heart attack and you call my mom a useless ??? you don't know to speak to a teen girl ???

Swathik : no geet ..listen to me .

Geet : listen ?? what more should I listen ?? I was till now blind that you are in love with me and even went to the extent of fighting with my dad and at the verge of loosing him .. no , I don't want you in my life '

Swathik : think twice geet . you cant live without me .

Geet : yea , the geet that cant live without you died minutes before ' just get lose from my site before I do something stupid to you .

Swathik : you cant just leave geet . I wont let you '

With that he left the place leaving a heart broken geet '

Geet slipped on her knee and started crying bitterly ..

pinky consoled her .

pinky : geet please don't cry , he don't deserve your cries .see mom needs you now .. come on lets go in now ,.

Geet nodded and wiped her tears ..

Both made their way towards their parents ..

The difference is geet ready to do as per her parents wish '.

hope you guys likes it ...

do hit the like button and leave comments !!!


NEXT : PART 2


Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
awesome update
cnt wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me very very much interested

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratz on ur new FF
Awesome concept!!!
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
its really good dear and please do pm me next time when u update

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