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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234

Oooh loved it!
Aww arnav was worried and was scolding khushi for not taking care of herself
lavanyas broken the marriage! Yay
now arnav just needs to get a hold of himself and tell khushi how he feels!
Nice update
thanks for the pm
update soon

mariam

kya ye bolega?

i dont think so but i am saying it like a reader..

ab writer janab kya karte hain woh toh mujhe bhi nahin maloom till i start writing...

so yeah hang on..jaise hi mujhe pata chalega mein tum logon ko bata doongi 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: lwfw

hope you had good night sleep
oh your FF is very good 👏 so i wonder what will happen next 😆
but you want me to predict 😲

trying to use right brain 😭😭

1. he will say about kushis mother to naani 😒 so that naani will deny marriage to kushi
2. he will bring contract to lavanya in front and try to force lavanya
3. he will get married to kushi happily 😛😆

is anything right i doubt 🤣

ah something's gotta give but i guess that is becoming my takiya kalaam

ha ha..will anything make this man happy?

i doubt it!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: fanfictionlover
Read all the parts in one go😊. But couldn't leave my comment earlier. Nice FF👏👏👏

Thank you...i like the way the silent readers are finally coming out to tell me they like what they read..

kibla ab ye bhi bata do..ki aur kya padhna pasand kareinge?

i have nothing against readers..i just love to get feedback..achha bura, so so..jo bhi ho..ek baar keh toh do!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: diotima
👏 gooo Lavanya!
Somebody had to give that to him n Lahh was the best choice.
I really want to see Arnav finally accepting and Khushi not giving in right away...cliche? 😆 thts why u do the writing n me the reading.
And some more on Aakash n Payal, pleash? 😳 aaargh, I wish they'd work on this cute pair's track in the serial.

Thanks rachel

i am writing now...wht you asked for..

see it helps...to know what you want and i can weave this story accordingly..

i am pretty flexible for i really dont have a planned story... so ask wht you want and thou shall get it..

mein genie toh nahi..

magar e..hansin..

jab bhi keh do

toh ye sunlo

likhenge wahi. (mein shayar toh nahi style)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
SSorry Vrush I have not been able to edit the post for your previous update

Another profound thought For ur updates through a poem

The Rose in the Deeps of his Heart
by William Butler Yeats All things uncomely and broken,
all things worn-out and old,
The cry of a child by the roadway,
the creak of a lumbering cart,

The heavy steps of the ploughman,
splashing the wintry mould,
Are wronging your image that blossoms
a rose in the deeps of my heart.

The wrong of unshapely things
is a wrong too great to be told;
I hunger to build them anew
and sit on a green knoll apart,

With the earth and the sky and the water,
remade, like a casket of gold
For my dreams of your image that blossoms
a rose in the deeps of my heart.

wow i am spell bound

had missed this.. just saw..

and no i dont have a reply

for a change my fingers are tied..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: random12
my heats jumps wid joy wen i c ur pm evry mrng.. 😃
brilliant updates.. 👍🏼 loved how lavanya spoke 2 arnav n how she ws being sensible unlike d dumb La on d telly.. 😛
so wat gonna happen next?? will he realise his mistake?? payash r goin 2 b d cupids??
i'm not goin 2 ask 4 a fast update as u have already given sooo much in 2days... a big hug 4 treating us wid so many wonderful updates.. 🤗

my pleasure..

i am a demented person...so bear with me!!

sruthi...pata chala na..mera ek nahi kaafi screw dheele hain

shayad ek aad gir bhi gaya hoga..

now about what will happen next?

mr ASR and mistake...gibraltar kya mt everest bhi chota hai..uske ego ke saamne...par dekhte hain..

khushiji...shayad..kuch hathode... maar... hi de!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: iHeartTVD
Loved both of the updates. I'm glad Lavanya left him and loved what she had to say to him. I hope he thinks about what La told him and gets his act together now. It was so sweet that he wouldn't leave Khushi's side. I hope Arnav finally confesses his love for Khushi now and then Arhi's wedding!!!! 😍

sure Cuz Mac..

lets see ye shaadi hoti bhi hai ya nahi!!

aur arnav confess his love..

bolege when pigs fly

or when hell freezes over..

woh toh ek din hona hi hai..kyon ki woh wahin jaayega..na..khushi ko jitna pareshaan kiya hai!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly
Great chapters! For a moment I too thought Khushio became blind! Hehehe...Chalo La stood up for herself against this marriage, and Nani can't blame La!

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i never thot of it that way..Nani ko shayad La ko blame karwana tha..na.

par uss bichaari ki kahan galati hai... kameena toh arnav hai

nani jaanti hai apna sikka hi khota hai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..
Ohh.. okay! :) Btw.. I have FINALLY caught up with your FF! :P And man I love it! Jaldi se update karo please! :D

Thanks jojjo

i know you are busy so it is double special to know that you took time out..to read and comment

mmuuuaah for that..

and yes i shall update today as well

yaar..shayad...mein apne haath kulhaadi maar rahi hoon by giving so many updated..

par pagal hoon..toh bhukto!!