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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

DANG!!! these two chapters were just wow

i loved everything

and this la is so sensible, i wish she was like this in the show

please continue and update soon

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Sharu

i was about to go to bed..but thot of replying

if you feel like predicting..that means i am succeeding in my work of getting you involved..

so predict away..you got it right the first time to..that La will break the marriage..

now hmm he wont runaway so what is he going to do?
tell tell!!

i shall look out for your answer in the morning

it is almost 1 and stayed up an hour after i had thot i would sleep..

so seee you tomorrrw!

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

anita

thanks my girl

aaj koi update nahi hai

thora sona bhi toh padega..

so i shall write more tomorrow..
thanks and goodnight

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--Magnificent--

@--Magnificent--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Wah Vrushy ...badey se sounding board ne aur aapne 😃 👏 mil kar kya socha hai ...for a moment i thought she lost her eyesight 😲 ...thank God she dint ...and sachi mein kya banda hai yeh one minute he is all worried about her and the next flaring up ...poor dear Khushi ...hospital mein bhi daant na chhoda Arnav ne ...and so well Lavanya put it ...he's just like an ostrich 😆 ...good on her part that she returned the ring and tried to drill some sense into him ...also liking the nazdeekiyaan and understanding of Payal & Aakash... waiting to see aagey kya hota hai ...

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

well done..the way u changed andhera into light..the update was very good.its good that blah is bit sensitive here..

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

both chapters r awsome good work😊

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

WOW! 2 chapters! :D

lavanya is sensible :O wish this was true in the real series, lol

and arnav really needs to wake up and admit his feeling quick. i feel soory for khushi...she must feel like shes in limbo, lol.

great updates

eagerly waiting for the next one(s) ;)

thanks

xxx

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#508

Vru!!!

I loved the way you showed Arnav's mood change almost immediately!! He's at the end of his wits, and his frustration seems to be oozing out continuously.

I loved Lavanya's segment at the end. She was well composed and got straight to the point. She gave Arnav some home truths he desperately needed. I just hope it wasn't in through one ear and out the other, and it actually got through to him.

Nani heard, so I'm sure she'll have something to add!!

Lets wait and read...😊

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

wow Lavanya is soo sweet and sensible!!

I really love her. Now hope Arnav forgets everything and moves on in life with khushi.

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

#510

Oooh loved it!
Aww arnav was worried and was scolding khushi for not taking care of herself
lavanyas broken the marriage! Yay
now arnav just needs to get a hold of himself and tell khushi how he feels!
Nice update
thanks for the pm
update soon

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