New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#881

Very Nice Tanzie . aww abhay gonna behave rude to piya again. 😭😭😭😭. i was really happy seeing abhay being nice to piya. i hope soon piya finds out abhay;s truth n she tells him she still loves him n even the monster inside of him n she is only safe when he is with her. 🤗 thanks for pm. n update soon.

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#882

first of all dnt evr think of ending ur ff's ! evn if the show ends m nt going anywhere! so just keep continuing. Nw coming to the update. beautiful update tanyie. ohh aryan is so hurt.sad to see him like dis. and tht dialogue of aryan to abhaxy-(if she wants to stay in ur room forevr then also u will agree) was t gud. i ws enjoying imagining abhay's expressions.aww piya's dress was so beautiful.and tht line of aryan (murder mission to kill my brother) was just awesum. aryan is so naughty bt sweet at the same time! abhiya dance part ws dreamy and mesmerising😍ohh no! abhay again in his stay away mission mode !poor piya🥺wonder wht will ay do nowjay do nw! and tanzie u bettr keep on writing.got it? otherwise bangladeshe 4a tomay khuje bar korbo😈

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#883

thx tanzie for deciding nt to end ur ff's😃fav fav fav update tanzie👏👏dis is one of ur most beautiful update🤗tht line of piya'heaven shud b empty when god made you'was 👍🏼aww that abhiya kiss was..😍kano je show te arokom hoye na sigh. so aryan caught abhay. bt koi fayeda nahi hua! the zip scene was very well wriuen. poor piya😔nw abhay will go back to his usual stay away or hate me piya mof again! god knows when will dis abha boy realise the truth😡a/w our strong headed piya wont give up so easily tht toh m sure. aftrall abhay belongs to piya na😳and dear who was dis ragini?was she mohini's sister? and why was abhay blaming himself regarding ragini's death? k nw m behaving like piya so i shud stop😆so humm jay too is a werewolf nt an adopted one😕so r u planning to turn him grey nw? m eager nw fr d nxt part. plz update asap . t.c.🤗

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Arians

@Arians

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Posted: 13 years ago

#884

awasome update 👏
thnx for pm
cont soon

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#885

Awesome update! I'm glad that even if was for a few days Abhay and Piya were happy together! I know that Abhay will keep away from Piya as he wants her safe but I hope that no matter how hard Abhay tries, he and Piya will only get closer! 😳 I think the arrival of Jeh back in Dehradoon somehow might bring Abhiya closer, lets see! 😊 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#886

wow tanzie awesome update.Means atleast 3 days Pia enjoyed Abhay's attention.Oh Aryan was right tht Abhay shuld accept her but now after tht zip episode Abhay phir se crying baba ho jayega.God give him brain.I wnt Abhiya & lo Jeh vampy hai & Abhay thinks neel hai.Plzz continue tanzie I loved it

Love U🤗

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Stuti

@piya_abhay_love

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#887

nice update.. thnx for pm

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Mousumi

@-Chinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#888

I dont have words yaar.. Such an enchanting update ! I cant really think what to comment exactly. I feel like quoting each n every line 😆 😆 at last you gave the most awaited kiss 😳 😳 thanks a bunch for that.. Superb update tanzie. Well done 👏 👏
Update soon though the title itself is terrifying me 😭 😭
Love ya 🤗

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#889

TANZIE🤗.🤗🤗...it was marvelous...such a beautiful update.⭐️...

i luvd it 2 d core⭐️...abhiya were gorgeous😳...jeh is gonna return....wish he understands d situation😊...abhiya's kissing part was magical.☺️...i luvd it...i was blushing hard reading that part☺️...so abhay finally have to give up!!!now i come 2 aryan ..😍😍..my sweet heart.😳..he makes things perfect...i luvd his dialogues..⭐️...u portray him well...he really cares a lot 4 abhay...he is cho chweet.😳...so that mohini not only ruined my sweet hearts love but abhay's also😡..i hate her..😡.m waiting eagerly 4 arhu.😍..its good atleast piya was happy 4 three days...n now that mirror part was romantic...i luvd it...imagining ur update..even i was in my seventh heaven..😳...gosh!!..not again...don't make abhay think too much...his theories of predators...r😡🤢 ...what u mean by final meeting...is it abt jiya or abhiya...or arhu!!!...continue soon ...m waiting eagerly ...m really curious 2 know wat happens next...luv u loads...n take care🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
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first i would love to mention dat how much i loved this particular line "which was more intoxicating d vodka or d kiss"😉😉😉 , bt tazn don't u think she already hd vodka bf4 dat kiss or she didn't (bt ofcourse she hd some hard drink)) n after dat kiss, intoxication to double hona hi tha😆 lolz..yea but the kiss was certainly more intoxicating 😉
cmng to their beautiful moment, it was described well wid d suitation👏 love n passion both were there!! Thanku dear 😳
last update was full of abhiya n it was reli very beautiful , specially d morning scene😳...dat was so adorable...awww, i want their every morning to b like this only , ofcourse minus pia's hangover, although mujhe koi problem nahi hai, if abhay would allow, bt wat i want loadsss n loadsss of love to b there b/w them!! Its not gonna stay for long 😭
n then dat last b/w them , i was xpecting something more and ummm😳, it started beautifully bt ended😭!! tu thode time hame khush nahi dekh sakti???😆😆 lolz... i know what makes u ppl happy but i want to reach the main story before show ends.. thts y i even mentioned i cut down 2 chpts to make it quick. and thts exactly i will do wid the beautiful stranger as well...but in the end it will make u hpy.. trust me..
aryan, 😳
he is a man wid beautiful heart😳😳😳, abhay-aryan convo was well written👏 thanks.. it was 1 of my fav part of the last update 😃
finally dobriyal's r introduced!!! would love to c nw how wl u shape this intoxicating story wid new characters!!
abt jeh, i want him to b very positive, want him to understand pia n her love for abhay!!! Dobriyals will come soon. and nope Jeh wont understand it ever... he's probly gonna be evil here.. im not sure 😕

hats off to u for ur awesome work n thanx alot for updating it first n so quickly..😳😳😳 becoz of u 🤗

luv u loadsss🤗
p.s do tel me ye wale bhi comments xpected the??😉 some yes n some no.. yes for the vodka wala line 😛
btw thanx for ur wishes regarding aving someone like aryan in my life😳😳😳 awww ...i wish tht from the bottom of my heart ❤️

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