New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 91

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

i love ittt plzzz no more sepration 4 abhiya plz abhay piya ko rokh le aur sach bol de

I'm so sorry dear. but this will certainly make their relation stronger. just bear with me please.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

Thanku 😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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awesome update tanzie.abhay pia part was superb.jeh got to know abt pia now what will happen?and abhay is leavin,pia will be alone,who will save her

Thanks Rumki 😊
Jeh's story is gonna take a new turn. wait and watch. Abhay is regret it big time.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 1301Princess

One of the best update that I loved till now...👏 thanks Sweta...long time.. whr have u been? 🤗
Awesome one...Without a doubt...🥳
So Jeh came to know about Piya... Finally!! Wondering what he'll do next to get Piya...😕 whatever he will do. he loves piya. show ke jaise confused love nehi.. real one 😛
Wow!! The confrontation was unexpected this way...TongueI never imagined that Piya could be this bold in front of Abhay...😆Exellent...😃 She was drunk common 😛 otherwise in this FF piya is very shy just like piya jaiswal 😆
Now the Kiss which was not expected so soon was passionate and cute without any doubt...😳 Great work yaar Tanzy...👏 thanks dear Embarrassed
Oh and the zip scene in front of the mirror was Hot...☺️ glad u liked it Embarrassed
So Piya is finally suspecting Abhay... She saw his Violet Eyes??😲 So the biggest truth is on its way??😕 It will be out on the next chpt
For me Aryan is a CUPID between Abhiya...😳 hmmm
Now the next chapter implies that someone gonna separate... I think it's Abhiya... 😭 sorry but it is Ouch
And I'm glad that you're not ending this FF..😊 At least you show what we want to see in the serial...😭 i wont end this FF so soon... the story has a lot to say yet Embarrassed
Lots of love...🤗 same to u 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mossgreen

Oh god!! Why cnt troubles sty away frm abhiya? Nw wl abhay agn bhv rudely?wil jeh retrn mkin thngs evn mr prblemAtic?

Trouble is abhiya's soulmate 😆 Jeh not for now...but just wat n watch 😉

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

U r an awesome writer... Dis chap was really awesome

thanks a lot Shafaq. I hope you are back from huzz 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TISA07

Yeh kya hua tanzie?piya saw abhay's eyes?no wndr she'll figure dat truth out soon.pata nahi ab jay akar kya dhamaka karega.luvd da way aryan put some sense in our Raichands head.

she will figure out in the next chapter This time Aryan wont help either next chpt is gonna be blasting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sonia-


Awsome update! Tanzie thanks Sonia 😳
Wow! Aryan knocked sum sense into abhay's frozen mind. . But in the end, u gave me a heart attack. . Abhay is going to be on his stay away mission again! :( Yes he is...
FINAL GOODBYE !! I guess , piya is leaving AR Villa :( .. but i think, thats for the better ! Abhay will realize his love & pia's importance in his life ! exactly.. she will go and he will become mad 😕
"Kia kare dooriyan bhi zaroori hai '' true 😆

i hope, piya goes wid arnab. . I dnt want to see her going with jeh ! Errmm...well i have to dissapoint u in this case 😕
Thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiora

lovely update tanzie..aww it was so beautiful!!!oh no dnt break piyas heart again:-(

Thanks Tora. Thsi time Abhay's heart will break and hard
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

Awesome update thanku dear 😳

Loved it
Abhay will be back with his attitude😭 yeap he will
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM you r welcome 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh oh this is worse than the cat and mouse chasing game. When is Abhay going to make up his mind and decide for once and for all what he wants. And now everyone is coming in search for Pia her father Jai and dipanitha for her own selfish reasons. Oh oh looks like Abhay has got more things to worry about than his love life. Well nice part between Aryan and Abhay the man to man talk was excellent. It showed a good bonding between them.

Abhay will regret for his actions big time. Arnab Dobriyal wont be able to reach Manali but Jeh will surely. Dips is gonna die soon. Thanks. Aryan is indeed Abhay's strength. Next chap is gonna be the high point no 1 of this FF. wait n watch 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sohiniluvsabhay

Awesome update tanzie👏 abhiya scene was amazing🤗 but piya saw his eyes!!now sure she will figure this out..par next chapter ki name sunte hi ghabra gyi yaar final goodbye!!!kya piya chale jaane wale hai?plz don't break piya's heart thanks for the pm and continue soon😊

Thanks Sohini 😳 glad you liked it Smile she will figure out in next chpt. next chpt will be heartbreaking n painful. lets see whos heart will be broken... you r welcome 😳

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