New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

wow mindblowing update tanzie👏too good👍🏼and dipu is always ready to flirt wth aa bache log🤢omg the line 'overpainted lips' aryan's sarcastic remark-do u have a makeup buisness?...crackd me up🤣it seems u love dipu a lot😆dear the way u expressd abhiya's feelings fr eachother ws mesmerising d romantic❤️😍eagerly waitng fr the nxt chappy. update soon.tc love ya 🤗p.s. this is the best gift f my b'day😳


Thanks a lot Indu 😳 yes, as Shrish says...Deepu is baccha chor 🤣 I loveee Deepu and that's why just wait to find out what I would do to her 😆 😈 Thanks soo much...romance is beginning... will update soon and im soo glad i could give you something as a gift 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

First the secret is out. Pia being alive and Dipanita coming to know of it. Aryan helping out Alina did the mother come to know of that too. And Jais frantic search for Pia is causing more problems than good. Dipanitha eying for Aryan was like ... the least said better. Now his wife returning. Its like one roller coaster ride this chapter. Abhay opening up to Pia is also happening. So is the next chapter were the whole thing drops and falls


Yes. truth reached the wrong person which neither Abhay or Aryan is aware about and the consequences of this event is certainly not going to be pleasant. Jeh will cause more problems in the future as his obsession towards Piya will be no good. Abhiya will bond strongly when Aryan wont be here to babysit both of them. thanks for commenting 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinky_RPattz

hey tanzie ! Howz ya ? Long after 10 years, right ??! 🤣 🤣
Profuse apologizes for not commenting on last 2 updates.. College, internals, practicals are eating up my poor head nowadays
😭 😡

OMG... you are alive?? 😲 😲 😲 jokes apart... finally your are here... 😛
Anyways, I read all the 3 chapters now.. I wont confuse n bore you by commenting on previous updates., just one word FANTABULOUS AND FANTASTIC !
Thank you soo much... pata nehi iske bad kab dikhoge 😆
The latest update is the best till now I guess.. Piya and abhay smelling each other ! Aww!
Piya took away his shirt with her..that was damn cute !
Deepu will send jay to london ? I feel so bad for him yaar..poor boy ! Deepu will send Jeh out of sight so he wont cause any problem in her evil plans but Jeh will return sooner thn she will expect 😉
And piya cooked for both the bros.. Aryan was enjoying n bechara abhay ! 😆 pyar mein kya kuch nahi karte log ! Toh phir yeh toh sirf khane ki baat hai..hehe. soo true...hahaha... abhi to bohut kuch karna baki hai 😉
I loved the part when aryan was cursing the lipstic aunty..lolz ! She indeed is a child abuser. But I am worried as well as anxious to know whats gonna build up between aryan n allina !
The best part of the update was when aryan was sure abhay loves piya now and promised that he wont let the smile fade on abhay's face..awww !
Superb update dear.. Thanks for the pm. Thanks soo much sweetz...come soon ok? 😆 Aryan and Alina will have their own bonding... wait for that... it will take time 😳
Love ya 🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Nice and long update tanzie loved it thanks for pm


Thanks Rashu... i update only once in a week so long update 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
ABHI res kardo tanzie taki mai bhi res kar sakoon😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

wow what a wonderful update
how do u manage to write so well Aww...thanks dear. Im honored with your comment 😳
the way u described abhiya feelings towards each other was just amazing thanks soo much 😳
aryan's words have really given me a gr8 hope now i know he will definitely help in blossoming abhiya love with all his might
but for now he has gone to search for his wife
i hope he will find her and get her back he will find and lost her again... but yes he will defo help ABHIYA uniting
abhay is really so sweet he ate human food for pia awww
aryan and dippanita cono was hilarious
but precap sounds scary are u planning separation of abhiya
they have only started yaar no no..not so soon... their bonding will become stronger ..just wait 😳
well i know u will give us one more fabulous update
thanks for pm and do update soon thanks dear... hope you will like the coming updates as well...will update soon within saturday 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhaypiya4ever

Thanks for the PM 😳


Abhiya I so love them and finally they are falling for each other 😳 yes... time for romance 😆

And Peehu has returned that's a shocker when she will come you will like her I guess 😊
Update soon sure 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks Ash 😳

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

cool tanzie!!!! aryan was too gud yr... cont soon..


Thanks Akshi...OMG... every reader loves Aryan...makes me too happy dear 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Puja_Nava

awsome work👏..simply loved evry bit of it...please update next chap as soon as possible😳


Thanks Puja 😳 will do soon and please you do the same 😛 I'm waiting to read your FF dear 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

ABHI res kardo tanzie taki mai bhi res kar sakoon😆😆


Le me reply to all pehle then karungi 😆

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