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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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superb update tanzie😃👏
finally pia got her scence back😃 and abhiya 1st meet😳...it was beautiful😳⭐️
pia got lost at 1st sight😳☺️...but behaved rudely with her😭 but i think he too is falling 4 her😃
who is the girl who called in raichand house😕?khurana's r werewolf or human😕?
aryan is doing late to come home,i think he is doing it purposely🤣
alina is a sweet sis here.liking her here😊


Thanku so much Rumki 🤗 She was lost ever since she saw the eyes 😆 Abhay is determined to stay away from her but doesn't understand the pull he's having towards her...so hide n seek will be on for some days... The girl who talks with Abhay on the phone is the mystery and i won'y disclose her so soon 😎 Khurana's r werewolves... all... I like Alina in the show as well and here too she would be a imp character 😊
Aryan will handle Piya better then Abhay...pyaar se 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey tanz 😊😊😊 Hey sweetu 🤗

u knw wat i reli need to buy a dictionary nw for commenting on ur updates...i m done wid my vocab!! always running short of words to priase ur writing skills!!!
another brilliant piece of writing!!! Awww thanku so much... such a huge appreciation 😳 i have one dictionary and soon i will use that too for commenting on your updates 😉
so abhay felt bad, dat he couldn't resist pia's blood!!! does he ever felt so bad bf4??😉😉 No.. that's the main problem 😉
don't knw wat to say, bt just loved every single dialouge of ur update!!
finally pia came back to her senses n found her angel!!! rude angel!!!
n i must say this time u r too admant to keep things under fold!!!😉😉😉
dat was mindblowing in last where abhay after answering pia's questions said- kya musibat le li maine apne ser😆...gosh, dat was damn good!!! ohh yes... secrets nt to be spilled quickly 😎 lolz.. i had that line in my mind for a while...loved using it...they are so cute na 😳
i m sure abhay gonna kill aryan for nt being there wid pia , bt i loved d way he took care of her!!! he will say something and so something else 😳 and Aryan will handle Piya much better then Abhay 😆
wat abt orchid!! haan!! i m sure abhay would av done dat!!!
jay-alina, damn cute!!!! It was simply a coincidence 😳 Abhay doesn't know Piya likes Orchid...you know what my fav flower is orchid as well 😆 Alina is as powerful as she's in the show and she's good heart too 😳 and their brother Gaurav is alive here 😉
n dat gal who was talking abt gaurav?? a new mystrey!!! I wont disclose about that girl so soon but yes you will get hints time to time 😉
looking for wards to d nxt chapter tanz
do update soon
lov u n a big hug to u!! Luv u tooo... bear hug 🤗🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Hey awesome update sweety I loved it.Wow hosh aate hi question express chalo.Poor Abhay Pia usse question pooch pooch k dimag kharab kar deti hai ahahah.I loved Abhay & Pia's attraction towards each other.His concern 4 Pia.Alina-jeh bond.Waise who is tht lady who talked wid Abhay on phone.Aate hi aryan ki band bajegi I guess ahaah.Plz continue tanzie

LUV U🤗


Thanku Shrish 😃 question ki to bas suruat hai 😆 He doesn't know himself why he's caring about a human and that is whats bothering him That lady... hmm... is very imp in Abhay's life and let her be in the shadows for a while.. she will come in time 😳 Aryan ki band to zaroor bajni hai...but yes...he will handle Piya better then Abhay 😆

Luv u too 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Lovely update tanzie and nice brothers aryan abhay loved them and dipu and prabeen so bad people thanks for the pm


Thanku Rashu 🤗 Aryan and Abhay are the collest bros ever 😎


Thanks Priya 😳

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Awesome..so finally Piya regained her consciousness...and she saw Abhay...

mindblowing...
update soon...


Thanku so much Seli... glad you liked it 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant,awsum,marvellous,mindblowing tanzie👏 i always patiently wait for ur ff and believe me the patience is worth it 👏 loved the way u potrayed abhay's feelings emotions d care for pia. loved jay alina bonding.
tc dear love u😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
and thx for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi tanzie

Hw are u dear? Hope u had a wonderful eid😊
Wonderful update👏. Simply loved it😃
I loved the beginning wid Abhay n Aryan. It was sweet n funny😳. Abhay is trying soo hard to avoid pia😆
I also loved jeh n alina's conversation👍🏼. They seem to have a stable relationship here than in the show. I really like alina, she's sweet😳.
Omg I cant believe pia already started wid the questionnaires😆. But I guess that's the pia we all love. Awww Im soo happy that finally she met n spoke to him😳, even though he was a bit rude. But he still held her in his arms didn't he?😍 Those 2 moments were magic😳
I think I know who the female vampire is but I wil wait for u to reveal it in good time.
I loved abhay's last line, that was hilarious😆

Continue soon dear n thanks for the pm

Take care
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Posted: 14 years ago

awasome update dear

loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Tanzie.. Great update!! Poor Abhay.. Messed up with Pia's questions.. It was cute indeed!!

Who was that gal? who was that guarav? Alina's bro?? What twist are you planning..??😲

Please PM me the next time!!

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