New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: Chinky_RPattz
last customer perhaps 🤣
Read both ch-3 and ch-4. I simply loved it to the core.. Hats off to you for creating such a bond of aaryan-abhay ! Am loving both of them.. And the way abhay promised to take care of piya is awesome. No long comments this time as my cell is behaving nuts today :/
So I will bore you on ch-5. 😆 Plz update soon..

😆 you are soo funny gal!!

thanks for the comments and hope you read chpt 5 before i post chpt 6 😆 Next time long comments must ok? im ready to get bored 😉

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: pari_smart
awesome update
loved it
Who was the lady on the phone please reveal soon
continue soon
thanks for the PM

Thanku Pari 😳

Well the lady on the phone is deeply connected to Abhay but sorry she wont be disclosed so soon... but you will get hints...promise 😆 😉

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: prernasinghking
loved your update ...please update quickly

Thanku 😳 I have 2 FFs and 1 OS to cover up so it takes time to update 😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow
nice story keep going I really like this story of your

Thanks a lot Alicia...glad you liked it 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Awesome update! I'm glad Piya woke up from her unconscious state and has met Abhay! As expected, Abhay was a bit rude and Piya was charging him with so many questions! 😆 I feel bad for Jeh, I hope he finds out that Piya is safe and sound! The next chapter's title sounds very interesting! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

Thanks a lot dear 🤗

Piya will be completely ok in few days and start bothering Abhay 😆 Next update you will see Aryan and Piya spending much time with each other and yes next chapter name says it all...now guess and get ready for something hawtt 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

awww...such a sweet update...i love the abhay - aryan relationship nd understanding...nd abhiya part at the very end was cute...hope abhay just melt b4 pia's innocence nd love...

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D.O_Xing

@D.O_Xing

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Amazing work Tanzy...👏

Loved the update to the core...😳Without any doubt...😊

Starting with Jeh and Alina... These guys are so unlike the show especially Jeh... I like Alina here as well as in the show...😃 So who is she?? Itne strong intuition aa rahe hain use???😕

Coming back to our beloved Abhiya... 😳Aww... That was the amazing scene between them... The way he's irritated by her questions... 😆Caring about her and his dialogue

"Kya musibat apne sar le liya maine!!" was wow...🥳 I love them...

Ye Gaurav... Kya naya character hai??? Mystery girl and Jeh and Alina teeno hi baat kar rahe the... Waiting to know...🤔

Continue soon...😊

And please keep sending me the pm's... 😊Don't stop it please coz I don't wanna miss a single update of your beautiful FF's and OS of course...😆

Lots of Love...❤️

Sweta🤗

Edited by 1301Princess - 14 years ago

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

wah ...kya update hai👏👏👏...luved it...
but my question is that girl who spoke with abhay said she has a revenge against gaurav is this means the khurana's r were wolves??????????????????????????????

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NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

She is hardly out of her stupor and lo behold! her questioning session begins😆

I just like it when she irritates him but honestly I sympathize with Abhay...😆

Alina and Jeh's relation is superb...they are anyways at a sour note in the show...would love to see Jeh as positive character here...😊

So who is this mystery woman? Gaurav is here too...

Abhay's stand on revenge is noble...but would see if it lasts when it comes to Piya...

I loved the last dialogue😆

Precap is tempting😉

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LittleImmortal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

vEry nyc update dear 👏
cont soon😊

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sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#330

Awesome update tanzie..
Haha..pia is a question machine..poor abhay !
Awww...abhay is sadu but still he is cho chweet !
Alina looks decent n sensible...
Who was the girl & why does she wants revenge?

The next chap 'temptation' sounds very interesting...
Eagerly waiting...continue soon
thanx for the pm..
Tc

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