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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Janet!!
This was excellent. You never fail to impress me...the update always exceeds expectations!!!!

Glad to hear that! :-) I would be disappointed if I cannot meet your expectations too!

I really enjoyed reading Arnav and Khushi's scene...he tortures her so much, through mentioning kissing and watching her blush and become uncomfortable!!! All in the name of love of course...😆

Yeah, that was for making up for the lack of Arnav Khushi in the last chapter. She is still figuring things out!

His mention of Arjun amused me. He's obviously not forgotten Arjun's interations with Khushi.

Yep, he hasn't. That's coz Arjun's really a nice guy whom his entirely family likes, so all the more reason for him to be insecure!

I loved the sibling relationship in this update. Especially when Arnav realises Akash's reasons for calling Payal and then reminds him to pick her up at the end!!!

Haha, yea. I wanted to develop a bit on the sibling bonding.

Thanks for the PM...and as always, I look forward to the next part!!!

Let's see when that is!

I'm sure there'll be some lovely Arnav and Khushi, and Akash and Payal moments to look forward to.

Don't be too sure! For some time now, I've to strike a balance between scenes and the story itself.

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-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Hello?! It's not short by any stretch of imagination! Hahahahaha you guys are too funny :-D You should just read slowly! Thank you so much for the compliment!

Originally posted by: sharneil92
really awesome update! but somehow, i think it was short cos i finished it within 30 seconds... :P or maybe cos it was so good, that the "happy times" flew past! :'(

update soon and give all of us some raahat yea? :P

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-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Thanks much! :-)

Originally posted by: sparkle2985
nice one 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Awww that's so sweet to say that you don't say 'she could've done better' after any chapter :-) Thank you!

Originally posted by: ArshForEver
U never disapoint us girl. Love how u keep on track and ho smothely. Not even chap that makes us feel like " she could do beter". Way to go.

Loved how he said " score" curte Arnav.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Thank you very much! Glad that you are enjoying it.

Originally posted by: Zbegum
love hopw everyones in on eachothers feelings , lol. this is such a great read!. i cant wait for the upcoming updates. !! :D

please update soon!
xxx

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nabeela.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

Fabulous update Janet! Can't wait for Arnav to find out the truth about Shyam's intentions and teach him a lesson! Oh the Arhi scene... ☺️ was so awesome. LOL I love how Arnav gave Khushi's hair tie back to her in front of Anjali and Akash 😆 letting them know about his naughtiness haha. Lovely update... thanks for the PM. Update soon please 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

oh my, what a hug that was, Arnav's naughtiness and Khushi surprisingly hugging back...loved it...and love how Anjali and Akash keep on teasing Arnav...can't wait for the next part...update soon

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shaheerdiwani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Wow another update !!!! Luks like Kerela has charged u up girl 😉 ... n wat a charge up darling ...an awesum update ...luvd d hug scene and d way Arnav straightened her hair after it ... sooo romantic ... and d best was d last scene ...truce vaala ...wud luv to c this one enacted out ... in all fab update ..so wen d next one's coming up ? I know I know ...thats like asking too much but I cant help it ...u write so well dear 😃