Janet's FF: IPKKND Imp Note on Page 157 (9/26)! - Page 15

Originally posted by: Yazzy91

Awesome FF! Loved the way arnav was getting jealous!! Please add me to the pm list!!

Originally posted by: mahiem94

Nice update continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

So, I need to comment on two part! :P Here goes

Part 8

I loved this part mainly because of Anjali! She can see through them two :) Loved her dialogues :D I also like the feeling Arnav gets when Khushi goes to help him 😳 Anjali is amazing.. she doesn't want her saree to be ruined by the seatbelt 😆 So Khushi sits in the front! Haha. Oh, and I loved it when she gave that perfect jodi comment! She has got to be the smartest person in the house! :D

Btw, should we be expecting news headlines the next day? ;) Media and all. And Arnav protecting Khushi from the cameras and stuff? Ahem... ;) Loved that bit as well... :D

Oh, and Arjun! 😡 He should stay away from Khushi! She is Arnav's, back off! 😆

Part 9

Okay... so I am completely hating Arjun! Arghh... But loved it when Khushi justified her work with Arnav.. :D And then she refused to dance with him.. :D And then he said he will give Khushi company while Arnav dropped Anjali off! Ya right, you think Arnav will leave Khushi alone in you? 😆 And Arnav made Khushi sit between him and Anjali. :D Possessive! :D There car waali nok-jhok! Jealous Arnav! ;) Love is in the air? :P :P And the way Khushi screamed at Arnav, then he helped her get to the room 😳 You know, the best part of the update was the end! :D Their tiny little moment in the room.. :D Love this Arnav :)

"Haan bilkul. Tumhaari aankho se paseena nikal raha hai. AC toh on hai na?" he smirks

🤣 That just cracked me up! Really did!

He turns around at the door "I mean, aisa toh nahi hai ki maine already nahi dekha, right?" he shuts the door before he could see Khushi turn into the color of her saari.

☺️ That's that I can say for this line! ☺️

You are an amazing writer, love the way you write, especially your dialogues! :D Very few writers can adapt to the way the characters speak in the show, and you are one of them :D

Continue soon

Jyotika

🤗

PS: I hope you like reading long comments, because this is one hell of a long comment 😆

Originally posted by: LEYLA2005

Gr8 update, love their arguments, ur writing brings out their jealousy really well, I love the way you show Arnav getting all protective and jealous, the way only a boyfriend or husband would.

Originally posted by: Suman786

Hiya, can you PM me please?

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Janet, suffice it to say am in love with ur ff. Just loved the quarrel in the car, arnav was sooo jealous. anjali is already being match maker, making khushi sit in front. R u going to update daily? So that i know when to check, since u dont have a pm list.

Originally posted by: Janet.Das

Hey Jojo!

I love reading long comments, and I especially love reading your comments :-) It makes me feel real good coz I feel it's worth it to take so much effort and write this story when I see you go into an analysis mode with my story. I am even more elated when you quote specific parts and tell me what you think of them! That just makes my day, so please do continue writing your long long comments.

About headlines the next day, honestly, I'm not sure. I won't say that I didn't think about it, but let's just say I've not decided. You'll find out. When? I'm not sure. I'm having a busy day today. So, not sure when I'll update. Just like the CVs, I don't have an episode bank either! Haha.

About Arjun, I've been trying to not make him look like a cheap flirty character. I want him to turn out to be a nice suave character. Clearly, I need to work more on that!

Thank you so much for your elaborate compliments! They mean a lot :-)

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Janet...🤗

I loved Parts 8 and 9!! Arnav's outburst in the car was just great. It was just sheer jealousy and possessiveness, and I absolutely loved it!!

The last part in chapter 9 was really sweet.

Your writing is a real pleasure to read. Well done dear.

Looking foward to the next part!!

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