FF - Dost Ban Gaye Ajnabi *10th part updated pg.40 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update.great job.just love arhii n the ending was fantastic
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

loved the update.great job.just love arhii n the ending was fantastic


Heyy Raunika Di!!!🤗
Thank you so much!😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
oohhh woooww i never new u did this thread keep me update plz i would love to read on send me pms if possible
i really wonna read on fisrt i have to read the starting so i skimmed thourhgt this i think i got the basic sotryline but i need to catch up thanks love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Minnie.

oohhh woooww i never new u did this thread keep me update plz i would love to read on send me pms if possible

i really wonna read on fisrt i have to read the starting so i skimmed thourhgt this i think i got the basic sotryline but i need to catch up thanks love ya


Hey!
No problem! I will be updating as soon as possible...😕 sorry I'm keeping EVERYBODY waiting...
gonna try my best
Yah, just take your time and enjoy!!😉
Have a great day!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey FF readers!🤗

I'm back with my 9th update on DBGA!😉

I saw how much all of you enjoyed the last update because of the flashbacks etc.😛

I hope you all enjoy this update!

My awesome sister Zeba Di has chosen the sweet nickname for Khushi in my FF! Read on to find out what it is! (Love you Di!)

I would also like to say thank you to my awesome sister Nina Di for supporting and encouraging me on the nickname!🤗 Love ya!



We Left Of:

Everyone started group grumbling asking him what had happened and if he was okay' but all he understood' was the lost Khushi in the back' at the corner pondering.

It was like he knew what she was thinking. Why she was thinking like that.

Khushi could feel the presence of a pair of eyes watching her intensely.

Khushi knew it was familiar' those eyes' She didn't see the eyes, but could understand clearly who that was. Maybe she was wrong though'

Khushi then turned her head slowly to look at Arnav.

Khushi had tears in her eyes' but they weren't falling.

Arnav and Khushi both stared intensely into each other's eyes.

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They finally snapped out of the trance. Khushi's tear had finally dropped. Arnav had saw that and again looked at her, then looked away. Khushi quickly wiped it. Anjali noticed that Arnav wasn't paying to attention to his family trying to communicate with him, but instead someone or something else. She turned around to look at Khushi. She saw them both looking at each other.

Anjali was thinking' yeh dono ek doosre ko aise kyun dekhte hai? Kya hai jo yeh dono chupa rahe hai? Aisi koi baat hai kya? Mujhe zaroor pata lagana padega'

Anjali: "Khushi ji!"

Khushi looked at her and wiped her tear.

Anjali signaled her to come. Khushi walked up to her, avoiding eye contact with Arnav.

Anjali: "Khushi ji, bodh, bodh shukriya."

K: "Kyun Anjali ji?"

A: "Aapne Chotte ki bodh madat ki. Iss liye shukriya. Humaari toh jaan hi'"

K: "Aisa mat boliye, Anjali ji. Koi baat nahi. Iss mein thank you wali baat kya hai."

Khushi blushed a little.

K: "Sir' uh' mera matlab hai Arnav ji ne kaha ki humhe yaha kaam karna padega jab tak unke tabed teek nahi ho jati. Waise, unho ne sab ko office mein chuti diya hai."

A: "Sach?! Yeh toh bodh achi baat hai! Ab hum dono ek doosre se aur jaan sakte hain!"

Khushi smiled.

K: "Hum aate hai, Anjali ji."

A: "Teek hai' jaldi aa na haan!"

Khushi made her way downstairs to the kitchen.

Arnav got up and sat in his bed.

Ar: "Nani' Di, kya aap sab mujhe kuch dehr ki liye chor sakte hai? Please'?"

Nani: "Haan Chotte. Chalo sab'"

Everyone followed Nani downstairs.


Khushi was in the kitchen to return the glass.

"Khushi' mujhe tumse baat karni hai." said Arnav.

Khushi almost dropped the glass by surprise when Arnav ran up and held her and the glass from behind. His left arm was on her waist, and the other was holding her hand, while she was holding the glass.

*Eye Lock*

They both became conscious and Arnav took the glass from her hand and put it in the sink.

Then he stood in front of her. Khushi didn't know how to react because she was nervous, so just simply looked down at the floor, while fiddling with her hands. Arnav moved quickly closer to her and caught her by her shoulders. Khushi was shocked.


Ar: "Who are you?"

Khushi gave a blank look.

Ar: "Tum kaun ho?"

Khushi just stared at him.

Ar: "Tum' meine tumko kahi dekha hai'"

Khushi was still confused.

K: "Ji' woh' hum aapke company mein kaam karte'"

Ar: "I know that! ' Lekin usse bhi pehle. Hum usse pehle mile?"

K: "Nahi'"

Ar: "Lekin' jab bhi mein tumhe dektha hoon, mujhe kissi ka chehra yaad aata hai."

Khushi was just plainly staring at him.

K: "Humhe bhi' kuch baar, aapka chehra kahi dekha hai." she said while looking down.

Ar: "JALEBI'"

Khushi's face shot up at him.

A: "Tum' Jalebi?"

K: "Kya''"

A: "Jalebi' ? Mein * paused *, nahi' aisa nahi ho sakta. Tum meri jalebi nahi ho sakti. Aur mein aise kaise soch sakta tha?!"


Khushi started crying.

Arnav was still holding onto Khushi, and she couldn't stand in shock in front of him anymore, so she tried to get away from him, but he grabbed her back to him. This time, even closer.


Khushi couldn't stop crying, while Arnav's eyes were closed, and his eyes were watery. He opened his eyes.

Khushi also opened her eyes.


K: "Aap chahte kya hai?"

Ar: " Jalebi mein'"

Khushi threw his hands off her, then wiped her tears.

K: "Aap humko JAELBI kyun bula rahe hai?!!"

Khushi started to get frustrated.

Khushi started to run out of the kitchen when Arnav said, "Khushi rukho' please."

She stopped.

K: "Tum' tum ghar ja sakti ho ab. Yaha kaam nahi karna padega."

She slowly turned only her head back.

She started crying, and then left running out of RM.


What Arnav and Khushi both didn't know was that Anjali was observing their conversation the entire time.


Anjali thinking: Kya yeh dono sach mein * paused *'

(Said out loud): "Haan' sach mein yeh dono hain'"

She smiled.


Khushi ran out of RM as fast as she could. She couldn't believe what had happened. Everyone had seen her run out of the house, but was wondering why, and what had happened.


She had walked out onto the streets. It was very dark outside. Khushi had stopped crying, but her tears were still on her cheek. Suddenly a man had approached her. She stopped and just stared at him. She looked around, and moved away from him.


Anonymous: "Khushi'"

K: "Aap kaun hai?"

An.: "Guess'"

Khushi started to feel uncomfortable, and started to run backwards when he said, "ARNU'"

Khushi froze as still as a rock.

He turned around.

K: "Ji?!!" she said in shock.

An: "Mein hoon'"

Khushi started to get upset.

K: "DEKIYE!!! Hum aapko NAHI jaante hai, aur humhe nahi maloom hai ki aap kya, kya bakwaas bol rahe hai. Agar aap humaara peeche nahi chodenge' toh' toh phir hum police ko bulayenge!!!"

Khushi MEANT it.

She took out her phone and had a determined face.

An: "Tumhe meri yaad nahi aa rahi hai, kya?"

Khushi wiped her tears and started to run backwards again because there was a scooter.

K: "Bhaiyya zara jaldi'"

They drove away.

An: "Khushi!!!! Khushi!!!''Shoottt!"


An: "AMAN!!! Baar aao!"

Aman was hiding behind a tree the entire time.

An: "Aur mehnat karni padegi."

Am: "Yes, SHYAM'"

SHYAM sat in his car and drove away.


Aman was so stressed and confused.

Am: "Mein yeh aur nahi kar sakta."

He dialed Khushi's number.


Khushi finally reached her home.

K: "Yeh li jiye bhaiya ji'" she said while handing him the money.

She knocked on the door' but no answer. She waited few seconds, but still'nothing.

K: "Buaji!! Hum hai!"

Seconds later'

Buaji had opened the door. Beside her was Khushi's jiji, and ammaji.

Jiji had her arms folded, while buaji and ammaji had an angry look on.

K: "Kya hua aap sab ko? Humne kuch kiya kya?!"

Buaji: "Haan Sanka Devi!!!"

Khushi was confused.

Jiji: "Khushi' yeh koi time hai ghar aane ki liye. Dekho kitni raat ho gayi hai!"

Khushi looked behind her, and then remembered what had happened between her and Arnavji.

K: "Sorry jiji. Sorry buaji. Sorry amma." She said while holding her ears.

Amma: "Aacha teek hai bitiya, andar aao."

Khushi gave her babuji a hug and sat down beside him. Then they all started chatting together.


Khushi had placed her bag on the table and her phone was ringing, but unfortunately it was on silent.


Aman on the other end was trying to call her. Then he tried to call her home number.


The phone started ringing at Khushi's house.

Khushi was the one who picked up the phone.


K: "Hello?!" she said in a bubbly tone.

Aman: "Khushi tum teek ho? Tum salamat ghar poch gayi? Khushi batao na please!!!"

K: "Aman yaar shaant ho jao! Mein toh bilkul teek hoon! Tumhe kya hua hai?!"

Am: "Khushi dekho' mein tumhe bodh serious wali baat bataani hai. Dyaan se suno haan? Aur kissi ko' kuch mat batana."

K: "Aacha teek hai, mein nahi bataungi' bolo."

Aman started to recite the "serious wali baat" to her.

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Okay guys! That's it!! Sorry for not updating I like a month.😔 Too busy, and don't get enough time! Sorry once again! Forgive me...

Hope you enjoyed!!! I tried to update this as long as I could.😆

Take you time in commenting!!😉


Take care and love you all,❤️

Shilpa/Shipss😳

🤗

P.S. 😊
I've noticed new readers, and new readers, if you would like to receive pms from me then please like the first update of this FF.😊
Edited by shilparoxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yo shipss! where have you been?!lol missed ur updates. loved this new one. love anjili's observation skills. hope arnav and khushi can come closer together. update more regular lil sister! :)
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shipps baby...🤗
Love you too darling!!!
Hows you? I'm so glad you've updated!!
Update was fab.
Poor Khushi seems quite distraught at the moment.
I wonder what Aman's 'serious baat' is...!
I hope Anjali follows up what she's seen. I loved the way she was so alert to whats happening between Arnav and Khushi.
I loved the way Arnav called Khushi 'Jalebi'. It sounded even better than I thought!!
Looking forward to the next part sugar.
Thanks for the PM!!
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeee

yo shipss! where have you been?!lol missed ur updates. loved this new one. love anjili's observation skills. hope arnav and khushi can come closer together. update more regular lil sister! :)

xxx


yo zeee!!🤗😉hehe
I'm just here everyday at the forum for a bit! Don't get time to update that much..😔 I try as much as i can..😉 will try even more...😉
Glad you liked the update!!🤗
Yes, very soon they will!😉hehe
okay definitely will try!😛

Love ya and take care,
Shipss🤗❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Shipps baby...🤗

Love you too darling!!!
Hows you? I'm so glad you've updated!!
Update was fab.
Poor Khushi seems quite distraught at the moment.
I wonder what Aman's 'serious baat' is...!
I hope Anjali follows up what she's seen. I loved the way she was so alert to whats happening between Arnav and Khushi.
I loved the way Arnav called Khushi 'Jalebi'. It sounded even better than I thought!!
Looking forward to the next part sugar.
Thanks for the PM!!
😊


Hello Di!!🤗❤️
❤️hehehehe😉❤️
I'm fine thanks and you?!😛 I'm also very glad!! Don't get a lot of time otherwise...😔
Thanks so much, and glad you liked it!!😃😉
The "serious wali baat" will be revealed next update..😉hehe
Yes, Anjali will be a total help in my story.😉
😆hahaha really?! "Jalebi" is a great nickname that you've picked!!🤗😉
Looking forward to updating...😉
🥱I'm tired now...🥱 >>😆 LOL!😆haha
No problem!
Take care,
Love ya,
Shipss❤️😳🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey ships! where were u dear! long tym! missed u🤗 !!jalebi wow such a cute name! sutin 4 her!👍🏼 lovd ur ff!
take care!
hope ur studies r goin well!
love
Navya!!!

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