FF - Dost Ban Gaye Ajnabi *10th part updated pg.40

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Hey Shilpa, it was a great start .really loved ur os.plz do continue.eagerly waiting for it.👍🏼

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chammak_challo

@chammak_challo

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Shilpa this is a great start...! Keep writing...! and thanks for the PM😳

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Really good work, keep it up

you should turn this into a ff instead of an os, it has great potential for a ff

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

frm where did u get this idea!!! i inspired u rite wit my os thn u got d inspiration frm nd wrote thisZ rite na! :p gud one

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Hey!!! your ff is just great!!!!!!

I mean your OS and it should become an FF...

I really like it but hope you would try to put the dialogues and everything in english rather than hindi as I am sure thiere will be international best seller!!!!

ha ha ha

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

wonderful

but thoda aur likhna tha nah

anyway nice sutiable idea

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Awesome,Shilpa 👏👏.

Nice OS, Not all amateurish...keep up the good work,amd thanks for the pm...

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

really nice work dear...continue soon...:))

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Shoaib Khan

@shoaib_khan

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Great Work Shilpa 👏 Do Continue 😃

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Shilpa Sobti

@shilparoxx

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Danina
OMG shilpa amaaazzzing job:)
its the perfect blend of humor..drama...suspense plus romance and having you write it is a cherry on top:D
i love it:D
i am waiting for it to become a FF:)
plzzz do make it a FF:)
and pm me the update:D

😳
Thanks🤗 ❤️ yaaa
I will FOR SURE now because many people are ❤️ it!!!😃
yes for sure I'll pm you