Oh My God...!
I had understood @ the end of the previous update that this update is gonna b dealt with Nupur's biggest fear but I never thought it would be potrayed in this way...
Mayank's point of view was completely different... I actually did not understand if he was right or wrong... For a moment I thought that he is trying to eliminate her fears by speaking bluntly and trying to make her realise her blessings but then the end made it clear that Mayank was clearly very disgusted with her... Racist, I think, would be too blunt a word... She was just being scared about herself...about her complexion... I dont think she was exactly being a racist...
Well, I think Mayank did not understand some things... He knew she is very sensitive so obviously she was sensitive about her biggest fear too... She must have seen a lot of things which must have made her think like that... Maybe being taunted which has made her think that being fair is being beautiful... No wonder she is very sensitive about this whole thing... And yes, many girls do aspire to be fair and thin thinking this makes them beautiful, pretty and all such other things... But, honestly, beauty is from the heart... I think its ur thoughts, your words that actually is your beauty... What is the use of being Fair from Face and Dark from Heart, right??
Well, I can just hope that Nupur understands this... And also hope that Mayank loves her and makes her understand properly...
Beautiful writing and a very beautiful potray of emotions... I was completely shocked by the update though maybe because I just did not expect this,... But, overall, perfect writing...! :D
Love the way you write Kinza... Its just PERFECT...!
Well now I am really eager to read how Mayank and Nupur understand each other and how they deal with this situation... Waiting to read more... Do update soon please...
Oh, and by the way, in the very first update you had written that Mayank saw her in a mocking glance in the office because of her complexion... I really dont wanna that to b true... At that time, I had felt that that mock or smile is because of the way Nupur was being nervous... So, please just clarify that naaa if possible in an update because I really dont want Mayank to mock @ Nupur's complexion... I know after reading this update, my asking this is probably silly but still that one line I just could not forget... Isliye, I thought I could jus tel u 2 clarify...
Well, Awesome update,..!
Eagerly waiting to read more,
Pooja
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