new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12

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Smily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#791

awesome part

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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anupamachem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Bindu you write so beautifully. Leave apart the passion, the way you portray the emotions is really breathtaking. I'm really captivated with these line

"came her whispered voice before she succumbed to the peace the darkness provided."

"there was nothing to stand between their love...nothing should ...not her pride nor his ego..."

"The scorching need rekindled, impossible to be quenched."

I really read the update thrice.

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Rakshya Shrestha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#793

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome UPDATE DEAR 😊
i am speechless 😊😃

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#794

Superb update Bindu.

Felt sorry for geet today.

What she must be going thru wanting to be close to Maan and him not wanting to give in...

Waiting for the twist...

Thanx for PM dear...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#795

Loved the update... it amazingly well-expressed Geet's pain and Maan's turmoil..

What can be more worse for a woman than the fact that her husband doesnt want her any more - not from mind,heart and body...very well written - this part. She has been in this state for so long and is yet fighting for hope when everyday her hopes are going down and chances of success are almost nil.

Her helplessness in requesting him to make love to her was so obvious... she was ready to bear pain for this one night together..and why did Maan give in? can we see his pov in the next update?

I wonder when will Maan be paying attention to the snatches he's having from past - this memory and the mishti one..

do something yaar...cant bear to see Geet in so much pain.but i request you pls dont make her pregnant. does the twist have to do with Mahi? I want Maan to feel some of her pain when he finally realises that its been her all along...😳

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Loved the update... it amazingly well-expressed Geet's pain and Maan's turmoil..

What can be more worse for a woman than the fact that her husband doesnt want her any more - not from mind,heart and body...very well written - this part. She has been in this state for so long and is yet fighting for hope when everyday her hopes are going down and chances of success are almost nil.

Her helplessness in requesting him to make love to her was so obvious... she was ready to bear pain for this one night together..and why did Maan give in? can we see his pov in the next update?

I wonder when will Maan be paying attention to the snatches he's having from past - this memory and the mishti one..

do something yaar...cant bear to see Geet in so much pain.but i request you pls dont make her pregnant. does the twist have to do with Mahi? I want Maan to feel some of her pain when he finally realises that its been her all along...😳

What do u mean Mahi?

Did I miss that part?

Haila...i cannot remember...😲

Someone pls tell me what chapter it is...n I will refresh my memory...

Lagta hai...Maan ke saath saath meri bhi memory dhundhle ho gaya hai...

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: Water.

What do u mean Mahi?
Did I miss that part?

Haila...i cannot remember...😲
Someone pls tell me what chapter it is...n I will refresh my memory...
Lagta hai...Maan ke saath saath meri bhi memory dhundhle ho gaya hai...

mahi is Mahindra Tandon daadi's friend's grandson...with whom geet is working for the project...enters the first time in the story when he is mentioned saving geet from being hit by the car, the time she runs off when maan shouts at her in the office...then there is mention of him having dinner with the family and a phone call at night...even in last update he was there for the visit to amusement park...
haven't introduced him in detail...just scattered mentioning

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: Water.

What do u mean Mahi?
Did I miss that part?

Haila...i cannot remember...😲
Someone pls tell me what chapter it is...n I will refresh my memory...
Lagta hai...Maan ke saath saath meri bhi memory dhundhle ho gaya hai...

DUH!

I get it...

Mahi is Mahendra...Mr. Tandon.

Lolz...I got confused with Geet's Mahiii😆