abhiya'mini ff'an unknown desire' 'epilogue pg-66

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wowww...such a perfect ending. Specially because Piya was all alone when she had Abhi and Abhay never got to experience the entire feelings of preparing to be a father and feel how it is to be to hold his own child in arms... so another kid would be relally great. I'm really glad you write about it 👏 😳

So finally he could take care of Piya when she's expecting and give all the attention and love she had missed when he wasn't there for her. Their family is perfect including Sid, Panchi and their kid. Jeh finally Jeh found someone who would love him back. So sweet... everyone's happy.

Abhiya romance is amazing and I knew Piya's pregnant the moment she felt dizzy 😛

Simple perfect ending... 😳 great job heena 👏 👏

Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

Wow heena awesome update I was thrilled yar.Abhiya were perfect & their family was jst wow.The perfect ending u can give 2 this beautiful luv story.Oh It was jst wow 2 read abt this story.Chahat nice name I must say.Mere ko pta tha now its baby gal time & tht too somewht similar 2 Abhay's mom.Oh how wish ki yeh FF kabhi end na hoti.Abhiya scenes were well defined & Abhi is so cute.Happy 4 Jeh-Misha😳.A perfect ending 2 perfect story

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Super awesome ending! 👍🏼 I love happy endings! 😛 Abhay and Piya and their perfect family! 😍 I'm glad Jeh found Misha and now they are happily married! Awesome job with this mini FF, it was a pleasure to read! 👏

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Neytiri

@Neytiri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Awsum updte di...happy happy endng...all is wel dat ends wel. U r a fab writer,plz keep on writng...

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

thanks for the last part dear i thought u r ending this ff wid 9th part only but u made my day wid this beautiful amazingly written part thanks once again

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

Awww...Such a beautiful update!⭐️ I'm happy for both Abhay and Pia.😃Loved the way he was concerned about her...❤️She was living her dream atlast. Abhay got the perfect gift on his b'day!With the new addition to their family,now their family is complete.Finally Jeh found his True love-Misha!
Lovely quote-"I desire nothing more than to be in your heart, until forever dies"
Thank you for such a wonderful mini FF.I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

Perfect ending to a perfect FF.👏
Chahat what a nice name.
Write more. will be waiting for more Abhiya from u.

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

amazing update & a lovely end!!!!!!!!!!

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

loved the update
i was really waiting for it
that was a very long and fabulously written epilogue
just what we wanted
abhi was so cute
abhiya scenes were fab
the way abhay cared for his family was so touching
their romance was really sizzling
i m also happy that jai has finally found his soulmate in misha
pia's pregnancy part was really well written
the best part was when u mentioned that chahat's eyes resembled to abhay's mother
that was a gr8 idea really touching
anyways
his was a gr8 ff
i wish u will write more ff's and this time i would love to read a love story of them without any baby😉😆just kidding yaar please write more

Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago