abhiya'mini ff'an unknown desire' 'epilogue pg-66

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#471

beautiful and perfect ending..i loved it..abhiya moment was so cute..and baby girl chahat..aww...i was smiling continuously while reading..u wrote and described every moment so well...but its the end..feeling sad..i so loved ur ff...it was one of ma fav...but all good things has to end..but hats off to u for writing this wonderful piece of story...

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Stuti

@piya_abhay_love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

its awesome... beautiful end... thanx for pm

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

lovely ending heena. btw my daughter's name is also chahat😳

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piyali.1228

@piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

amazing DII ( MAY I CALL U DIS )

beautiful

lovely 😊

u r jst superb👍🏼

nyc update

luved it ..😃.

abhiya moment r jst fab 😉

and baby girl chahat..wow... it make me smile😊 while reading

bu its the end..so feeling little bit sad.😔

bt dii u did great job 👍🏼

hats off to u 🤗

take care 😊

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#475

That was alovely ending to the story. And looks like abahy's son matches his father in troubling the mother. So hopefully the girl turns out to be a better kid.

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_Klaroline_

@_Klaroline_

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#476

what an update...
Loved it...
No words to say...im just blank...

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#477

A perfect end . .
Loved it
hum do hamare do. . Hehe
lovely mini ff

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

ooo wow!!dis was truly an amazing writing..ah jst beautiful heena!!n thanx 4 da pm!!

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srija

@-srija-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

Wow heena di a perfect ending.i laughed,cried n felt al the emotions along with the characters.i felt as if m myself a part of it.it was awsm ff.m sad it ended so soon.a perfect ending 4 a perfect story.