/3Being Unloved & Uncared{ArSh} /3 NotePg9 (9/10)

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

simply awsum part di..

the poem is soo beautiful...

expressing the pain...she is going..

thnx for the pm...

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Mahek

@AR-kash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

nice concept
awesome parts
loved it
cont soon

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adorableaisha

@adorableaisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

hey nice start...plz pm me...

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Magical_KaSh

@Magical_KaSh

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

heyy

js nw read d intro c.s

n both d parts its js awesome

d pain of shilpa is really untoerable

she is such swetheart deserves d best bt nt even gettin hug of her parents really feelin sad fr her

n nupur is ryt god has gv her so much of pain

cos in d future he is gonna gv her happiness her armaan yayyy

plz plz cont soon

n also add me to ur pm list

plzzz

luv

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ritu

@janu1610

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Bunny i can't write comments . you know why !!!!
Bas wanna cry nd will some day ask to God
why he made this world ??nd if he did so than why he made these pains nd griefs .Why?
why he gave happiness to some nd hurt others.Why?
why can't he make all happy .why?
Why life is so complicated .why?
😭

take care Nihu .
love you jaan.

Edited by janu1610 - 14 years ago

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eesha ahmed

@ssidra

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

hey,
Just came across ur ff.
Cs and parts are wonerfull!!
Very well written but plz try to write longer parts!
Plz do pm me next time u update.
Cont soon!

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amaniM

@amaniM

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

so much pain, so much sorrow! i don't know if i should call it nice. he fact that its a real story makes it all the more disturbing. Superb job of expressing the emotions hope to read a happy ending

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

aww, that was such a sad part, but please do continue soon and thanks for the pm!

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Hima

@k_anjali12

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Nice Update ???? Noo ... True Feelings Filled Update !

Im Really Happy For Ur Frnd ... As She Have Such A Great Sister In Life ... N She Is Right ! See As Far I Know Ur Frnd Is Going To Have Everything In Life N Its Just The Start 😃

POEM Is Beautifully Written Di ❤️ N Pleasee Update Longer Parts ❤️

LOVE U ❤️