/3Being Unloved & Uncared{ArSh} /3 NotePg9 (9/10)

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ritu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Nihu u made me cry...😭.
Very well written..poignant ,touching grief ,which always live in corner of heart ,can never endure..
For a child his parents are his world ,his security ,their warmth nd love always lead towards confidence ,but if ground has been snatched beneath the feet then ?God knows how much Shilpa is going to face n suffer.😭

love n luck .
ritu

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Nidha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

@janu1610
u know what she faced how broken she is

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ritu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nidha1983
@janu1610
u know what she faced how broken she is

yeah nd i am ready to share all her pain...

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zoya-ammy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

so sad uptd
How can parents b lyk this &Suicide ???

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Sameera

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Hey!!!
See finally i read it...😆

The introduction was sound very realistic and interesting!!. And all the pics were really beautiful!
Coming towards the part...
"No one needs pain, all wants happiness in their life but its impossible to get a rainbow without a little rain!"
I really felt sorry for the cruel act of world around her but i am sure whatever bad is happening with her will teach her more to judge people and this cruel world... Suicide is something which is not a solution of a problem...

And i think i am getting what reality this story have... i can understand how she must have felt..Lets see what will happen in the next part...

Till then Take care
Thanks for the pm
And continue soon lekin Update touch of luv first lease!!!!

Love,
Sameera
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Edited by sameera_12 - 14 years ago

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

hey nidha nice start interesting update plz pm me waiting 4 more .

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Nidha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Part ~ 2

Shilpa's Point Of View

And i got slap from my friend for trying to commit suicide. But they know i m angry on my self and i fell that no one care for me which is true some where but i know i dnt have right to take my life. And i m thankful they helped me lot. But it changed everything in my life. i dnt feel like talking to anyone and why i talk when no one care for me. My parents never care about me may be they don't want me. May be i m a bad luck for them.

"You were not there when I needed you,
To catch me if I'd fall,
You were not there when I needed you,
To tucked me into bed...

I wanted a hug from my parents,
But I don't get a hug and luv,
Was it something I did?
Was it something I said?

I don't know what to do,
I don't know where to go,
I thought parents are the guiding hand,
But why don't i get ur guiding & luv..

But you wouldn't understand,
You were never there,
I always tried to make you proud,
Hoping you would love me sum-day,
But you never seemed to care...

Was it something I did?
Was it something I said?
Did you not want me?"

Note: ~ Try to written a poetry on her situation i hope i m able to express her feelings.

I just to school attend classes cum home and eat for the sake of living and at night i use to cry and den sleep. But Sunday is better den any day. Sunday i use to go to meet Nupur di. She is best di any one want in life. She always listen me hugs me even i m able to sleep while hugging. Di always say God give me so much pain now coz he want to give happiness in future. May be di is right. She knows better. She told me which line to chose for study where as its my parents duty. But they never did Coz they don't care for me. I dnt understand why they hate me so much. I don't know what to do how to get my parents luv. But still they never beat me but sum time physically u don't get that much hurt but sum one ignorance hurt u emotionally or break u forever. U don't have any desire. What is did wrong why god punish me so much. May be i deserve that. I can't tell all this to Nupur di she get upset so much.

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Hi Guys!
How R U!
I hope u all r enjoying...

Guys at last update Part 2 i hope u all like it. I hope u like it coz its sumone point of view and i m giving wording to it. I hope i do justice. So plz read give ur reply but dnt hate any character. I hope no one judge Shilpa(my friend) from it..

With Luv: ~
Nidha