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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG loved it...
ohh maan to the rescue..
aww he asked her permission so sweet..
now i really cant wait to rad the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Your ffs are amazing! Please add me to ur pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woah amazing part Marvee.
So Maan is a business man. Goons are crazy. Why cant they let people leave :s
Aww loved the fact that he completed her poem. ;)

Hayeee he came in full hero ishtyle to save her.
Frappucino. Even i want one now lol.

Kiss you. Oye go ahead ji hehe.

Interesting precap. Cant wait for the next part.
Keep up ur great work. ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update i have been waiting for this to be update
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!dese 3 days wud b the golden days 4 maneet...
and for us...
i liked d permission part a lot...
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Posted: 14 years ago
seems like ages and ages since you last updated..but thanks so much now that you have finaally updated..wowww...as soon as i was eading that part where geet was heading o toronto somewhere deep i knew you were gonna put maan in there..another th9ing ...i thought maan was some gangster now im so much pleased and not at all worried ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...
why these goons are over him...
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its a very beautiful poem..
Maan completed it so well.
So he is a businessman and was mistakenly been attacked.
I was so curious thinking that he might be some gangster or cop.
There he came Maan as an Hero to save his princess.
It sounded not less than any Bollywood movie.
Such a dramatic scene but well placed.
"Maan"..."Geet"..."Maan"..."Geet"... 😃
I guess the police a Maan an reason to kiss Geet.
He needs to kiss her so than the police would leave the place
as this two love birds are bzy with their own world.
Wonderful update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...was waiting 4 dis update...now again waiting 4 d next part...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
this part was really nice
thought their meeting was quite filmy but really enjoyable
and he is going to kiss her to distract the police men?
do update soon

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