FF: Mohabbat Door Jaane na De-part 16 pg 46

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mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

updated take...chetti chetti likho soniya!

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EBasso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

reserved for my princess my love 😳🤗

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cutecupcake260

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

nyce concept plzzz cont it i will luv 2 read more 😊

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hey thanks a ton for liking the idea and the concept !!😊

Originally posted by: swetha10
Nice concept... looks interesting... plzz continue soon
thanx a lot for the pm...

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Zehra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

A very nice start

as the music teacher enters i got a hint k kuch tu chakkar hai and in the end she ran with him nice concept update soon 😊

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JennyPenny

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Seems really interesting. Def do continue and def add me to your PM list.. Very good start!

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

LOL Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever
wow I loved this whole set-up for Arnav's character, I can't wait to read more!👏

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey ya!!! thank you so much😳... this pushes me to write more!😊

Originally posted by: cindrella255
wow! A perfect flashback for ASR! It was superb!

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hey !! thanks .. surely shall add you to the PM list and write to you whenever the update happens!!! and thanks for noticing the similarities .. it was intentional 😳

Originally posted by: anita_21492
I love it!!!! you have to continue an update soon...please PM me when you do
It is the perfect flashback and i loved the way you set up Arnav's character...i see some similarities with his dad and anjali with her mom.
Great job!!!

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Hey Am !! my inspiration to write this story is the characters of the show, and my version of what i have interpreted of them .. this story will be more about thoughts, and emotions ... hence the story might take a back seat !! ill leave the makers to do the story telling .. this is more of an outlet ..

thanks darling for writing in ...🤗

Originally posted by: mechantefille
A hurt so deep it made him retreat into himself and keep the stern crude exterior to protect his sense of happiness.
If Arnav did indeed hurt so bad at such a tender age, then his hard exterior makes you get his protectiveness for Anjali and the base of that strong bond. More than her taking care of him, he has assumed the protective gear to keep her ever smiling.
Nihu, if ur keeping the FF with the same characters n traits as in the show, then that's how I'd sum it up.
Loved it - eager to read more.🤗