FF: Humesha Saath 2 Epilogue Pg9 Aug9 - Page 15

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Awww...thanks for the dedication...and yes you did more than Justice to our demands...loved it!!! Finally...Geet has found the happiness she deserved...and so rightfully earned...after countless tears, endless night fill with sweet memories that tortured her soul...her being...her existence. Thanks for giving her her Maan...a maan that all girls deserve...and have a right to!!! BTW...what did they name their son??😛

im glad you liked it...it was hard doing that scene and making sure it was tasteful!! 😆...as for their son...how about we call him...umm...Maan Jr...lol

JAZ

Originally posted by: madhu.pmlist

hello ji 😃 i kno me bahut late for comment but better late than never 😛

first of all a BIG I MEAN A HUGE BONE CRUSHING HUG FOR MAKING THIS A HAPPY FF... 🥳 woot woottt!! main bhi late hogayi in replying!! he he...but im here now!! so yay!! 😳

*inhaling a deep long breath* now for the comment 😃

Part 9:

started off with a usual jerk... with the banging entry of the man, the maan, maan singh khurana... *me already in la la dream land 😳* but then u had to put that doubt in the readers... u evil jaz!! making geet n me think was he really there.. u little tease 😆 but he was there just playing hide n seek 😳 n then the chuke dekhlo,,, i wanted to pinch him until he cried for all the years he made geet cry... uff babaji i know i am emotionally high right now... please excuse me 😃

magical?... it was bloody freakin AMAZZINNN! aare...how can i just hand over MSk without some drama...thodi bohot toh chalta hi hai...😉...i had to put in one last mini-heart attack for you guys!! he he...but...alas...he was really there...😃

aawww maan couldnt see her in widowed clothes... i do understand his pain (not literally coz i am not a guy who went missing n indicating that he is dead only to resurrect yrs later n feel hurt... the reason i am sayin gnot literally coz i know in ur OS best friends u made a point where geet says she is in pain n then maan says literally he can feel it only to be chided by meera... so me not taking n chances in declaring i can really feel his pain 😳) ha ha...you're so funny!! 🤣

i seriously cannot imagine how she managed to blush in the midst of a fight but its maaneet we r talking about.. kuch bhi ho sakta hai 😆 of course...maneet ke saath kuch bhi hosakta hai...and thats what we love SOOO much!!! 😛

the kiss... was tender soft and much awaited... u even know how much i waited for it in the present track uff babajiii... but perfect nonetheless 😉 lol...i figured itna kuch drama dalne ke baad thodi si romance hojayeh...i knew you guys were waiting!! 😆

aah the ML track... hmm poor maan 😕 but i am glad he was saved, saved by geet's babaji!

loved the singh family... caring n perfect to suit maan... its great u hv given him a family who supports him n understands him! 👍🏼 lakku n sweety were really cute... kash i had sibilings like that.. i mean even cousins 😍 i loved the singh family too..i had a blast writing them up...the bond they all shared with maan was truly beautiful considering he was a stranger but they accepted him openly!! 👏

uff yeh maan bhi na.. when asked to go to wedding sirf kaam yaad aata hai... wake up my boy teri dulhan vahaan intezaar kar rahi haiii!!

loved the sweet blackmail... ma ke liye kuch bhi karega... hai kinna sona munda hai 😳 i think many boys are like that...especially the ones that are "of age" and mom wnts them to settle down...but mundas arent ready!! lol...😛

geet ka naam sunte hi bechara maan ka heart flippin ho gaya... 😆 loved the way u made him realize the importance of geet in his life. the scene was lovely! the remembrance through the song... what an idea sirji! 😉 well its amazing how the brain works.. i mean things we would never think are triggered by simple things around us in life... n it always amazes me 😊 what sirji...do i seem like a dude...ek aur hai joh mujhe PM karta hai...and says "sir"...i was like W*F!? im a chick!! ha ha...but i thought it was the best way to have the memory come back all at once 😳

the little scene with maansi was just aaawww u hv the ability to make us go weak just by these kind of scenes yet u stick with sorrowful scenes 😡 evil jazz! i love Maansi...akhir Maan ki Maansi hai!! 😉 ek scene toh banta hi hai 😛

well after that it just seemed like a dream... everything just fell into place... thnk god babaji!! i mean thank Jaz babaji 😆 lol...you're most welcome!! 😃

Present:

its great to kow maan n his bro-in-laws finally called it truce... well it was really high time maan know the truth 😃 n then the showdown with mohinder was icing on the cake!! love u for that... witty n charming from maan's side... haha thr goes mohinder's dreams down the drain... well deserved punishment 👏can you imagine if the war waged on...tauba..i dont have the stamina for all that...lol...

her fear of him disappearing was well understandable...

n now finally the end... gosh u made me cry... 😭 hv no words

A BIG THANKS FOR THE LOVELY FF N FOR THE BEAUTIFUL ENDING hats off!!! thank luv for all the comments...glad you liked it!! 😳

PS: comment for epi shall come soon 😃 me still waiting!! 😉

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Amazing update Jaz.

Z

PSYCHE! You thought that was all I had to say didn't you?! 🤣 Naa .. I'm not gonna torture you with just 3 words after that update. I'm not a sadist like you LOL .. actually I'm on a Jaz-FF-Marathon right now .. so you're gonna have to wait a bit .. and now I'm going off to feed my bro .. so this comment shall be further updated laterz :)

*Since I had so much fun reading your response to the above ^ .. I shall keep it instead of erasing it .. mission accomplished 😆* ha ha..very funny! NOT!! *hmph*

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Onto the update! yay!! 😃

WOW first of all .. you dedicated this to me ... hayee 😳 saankyou ji 😃😆 and oye! I wasn't that hungry for a behooda update as some others were you know .. 😆 .. I just said it better be good and not a two line SR .. LMAO .. but Jaz honey .. you sure didn't disappoint! lol...you were part of that entire behooda gang!! tauba!! kya kya karna pada mujhe tum saab ke liyeh!! 😲

At first when you started with 7 years later I was like oh no she di-int just skip to the future .. where's my SR!? But then you had a flashback later so I calmed down 😆 .. but omg .. what a start off .. Munda coming out of the shower .. wet hair and all .. ishhh ☺️ all I pictured was the show when Maan comes out of that shower with his wet hair and towel around his neck .. EEP save me from fainting! 😆 .. but that was hmmm ... smexy! 😆 OMG wowzers Annie is getting engaged! Wowww time flies 😲 .. but awww and they had two kids!? DOUBLE AWW! 😳 lol...i was keeping with the theme of flashbacks thats why the 7ry leap!! lol...😆...chalo...at least you pictured him clothed...i was thinking you pictured that scene when he's in the shower with just the sink covering...ahem ahem...him!! 🤣 but the dude does look absolutely scrumptious when he is wet!! 😛

Coming to the flashback:

Wow I just loved it .. it was way more than I expected! I really wanted them to have a proper wedding too .. the first time around .. though simple .. was not that successful and didn't create happy memories for either of them .. so I'm glad that her mom proposed that they'd get married properly .. dhoom dhaam se and all! Loved it! Aww even to this day Maan remembers how she looked on their actual wedding .. well ofcourse he would .. but I was just gushing with happiness and tears because finally after such a LONG wait .. their are together .. they are one .. they are happy <3 😳 see...even though i torture you all to within an inch of your lives...i deliver in the end!! 😉..and i had to give them a proper wedding...though the first one was personal and beautiful...a proper wedding with their loved ones just had to be done!! 😛

Haha I totally loved Lucky .. Annie .. Pinky's antics ... so adorable .. I love how Lucky got back at Maan for the nickname thing lmao 😆 .. keeping these two away is an impossible task and they made sure they did just that .. bohat acchi sazaa di .. I love a pachtao-ing Maan 😆 .. and a restless one is even better 😛 .. isnt it awesome when he just wants to be with Geet but cant...i loved it on the show when they did that during the wedding track..Dadi aur Annie ne bohot tang kichi dono ki!! 😉

Hayee shaadi hui .. and of course the girls would want their money .. holy camoli they asked for a big amount! LMAO Maan Singh Kanjoos just write em a check .. I can't believe he's so successful and he's choking on giving them that much .. 😆 i was ROFLing .. that was too good ... but the best part was Lucky advising MAAN about everything LMAO! Maan's reaction to that was priceless haha .. Lucky is more experienced 🤣 .. loved the feel-good vibe that was coming out of everything .. totally reminded me of the show .. hayee Maaneet <3 i wanted that feel good vibe...i figured the entire ff was laced with sadness and hate and pain...aab it was time for happiness and fun and laughs!! thats why i had to show all the various relationships that the two of them have with the families!! 😳

Finally he goes in .. gosh I could just imagine how nervous Geet would be .. her nerves would be jumping when he entered .. she's been waiting for this moment for God knows how long .. and how painful that journey was for her .. she she would be anything but calm .. I loved how caring Maan was to turn away if she wasn't ready .. I mean he'd been waiting just as much for this moment .. to make his wife his by all means .. but that was so sweet .. and the way Geet held on to him .. haye goosebumps <3 lol...abhi se yeh haal hai...at this point kuch toh hua bhi nahin!!! 🤣

Ok I get so shy reading SR scenes .. haha .. esp when it's Maaneet .. like .. you're intruding on their private moment 🤣 .. wow I'm sucha kid 😆 .. but man .. Jaz that was beyond expectations .. it was amazingly beautiful .. their union hit the mark! Felt happy that finally these two were able to become one .. forget about the rest of the world and just think about each other for once 😳 .. bliss! ha ha...you are!! such a kid!!! *jaz pinches cheeks* 😉 ...he he...but i know what you mean...i too get all blushy and stuff...of course there is this one FF where i have straight up skip the "ahem" scenes...cuz that chick is just too detailed for IF...hell...she's too detailed for adults even!! 😲

Sweet reunion .. with their marriage .. and then their hot hot SR .. totally loved it! good..mission accomplished!! 😛

Coming to present .. aww it's tayaari mode for everyone .. loved the bindi scene .. haha reminded me of our very own show .. how Maan wants to put her bindi on each morning ... aww he'd get angry if she did it herself 😳😆 ka-yute! <3 thats where i got it from...the show...cuz i loved that scene...when he comes in and ties her doori...i was swooning!! 😍

I was wondering if they had boys or girls or both boys both girls .. but aww they had two girls .. so cute! Maan's angels .. Geet's devils LOL 😆 .. I love how the father loves the daughters and mother loves the sons .. and your Maan's are always so protective and possessive over their daughters .. no matter what FF you have it's always like that and it's so adorable! 😳 .. LOL Maan Singh Khurana sitting on a small chair having a tea party .. priceless 😆 hat and scarf and all LMAO! Man I wanna see that in the show it'd be so awesomely cute and funny at the same time 😆 .. tough men like MSK shedding all manliness to have a tea party with little kids .. I'd give anything to see that! i guess its the natural way...thats why girls are Daddy's girls and boys are Mamma's boys!! 😃 ...its the way of the world!! he he...i guess i model Maan a bit after my own father...he's the same...but maybe a little less extreme!! 😆...and i think there is nothing cuter than a dedicated father...but a child in a man's arms...and im putty!! 😍

Awww the flashback of the daughters was so emotional 😭 Geet still had that fear in her that this cruel world will stay cruel .. destruction will only grow .. but when you have parents like Maaneet .. esp a father like Maan .. you know your kids are bound to be successful in everything from education to love to relationships .. but it was so emotional seeing Geet cry for her daughters' future like that 😭 .. glad Maan was there to console her in such a moment and give her the surety that as long as he's there. . nothing can ever happen to their children .. never would they be treated to such torture that her father put her through 🤢 .. this world needs more Maan's! 😳 that was the main scene i had planned before the wedding stuff came together...i really wanted to drive home Geet's insecurities about being a woman after all she had to deal with in her life because she was her fathers daughter and not son 😭...and Maan...he's a gem...just a GEM!!! ⭐️

Gosh .. the entire family scene of Maaneet and their daughters was amazing and adorable .. thanks...i worked hard on that one getting it just right 😳

and OMG OMG Geet is pregnant!? 😲 😃 .. aww I just KNOW it's a boy this time 😳 awww .. man it ended there .. I felt like reading more and more and finding out how Maan took the news of the pregnancy and everything .. but I loved it nonetheless 😃 if i showed Maan's reaction...wow...that would have been another full update...not that you all would have minded!!! 🤣

That was one amazing end to an equally fantastic FF Jaz. I loved the whole emotional rollercoasteer you took us through by introducing this FF with the notion that Maan was DEAD 😭 .. I'm glad I was one of those who refused to believe it and give you threats of bringing him back .. that was fun .. I'm pretty sure you're the only FF writer who gets threatened this much .. to the extent that we start andolans against you .. 😆 .. this is another FF that I shall cherish .. because it was beautiful .. and the journey of Maaneet was equally amazing and I had a blast reading it! Loved it and loved the extra adorable ending <3 Awww Happy Family <3 😳 im sure im the only FF writer that has a price on her head...and dont get me started on the andolans and other things!!! 😕...im just glad you all are all over the world...varna saach mein mere zindagi ko khatra hosakta!! 😲...glad you enjoyed the ff yaar!! 😳

Love ya! you too!! *muah*

Z