Journey to Life and back!!~MG~2 Thd3 link-p.155 - Page 77

U UPDATED! 👏

Ok I am going to comment as a read as compared to after I read ….

1^st of all loved the choice of instrumental music ..it was great! 😳

Ahh…I like how u show his confusion then realization of his emotions ..

FINALLY!!

He understands …(took him long enough after she left ..)😡

Suddenly the world seemed to stop. As his eyes started following what she wrote, his grip on the book tightened, his heart began to race. He could hear his own heart beat. He clutched the book tight, wondering what was he reading. By the end, he was shocked. He stood there still. He tried to look at the book once again and when he did, he couldn't see anything as his eyes were clouded with tears which are threatening to fall. He was shocked by her innocent confession. His head began to spin as the reality hit him hard. She loved him! She loved HIM! He didn't know what shocked him more.. the fact that she loved him or the proofs showing how much she loved him. she never expected him to love her back. She even thought that he can't love her? he smiled at the irony.

He turned the page instantly wanting to read more.. wanting to know more. To know what else was he supposed to know.. to know how stupid he acted all these days.

It was fabulous the way u used the poems to describe her feelings 😃

"It is cruel isn't it? To lose your love after knowing your love is reciprocated?"

I LovE this line right here ..^^^^^^^^

I m a big sucker for quotes and phases🤓 ..i really love them..loved this one too

AWESOME FANTABULOUS uPDATE! 😃

Cont soon

Originally posted by: Amiiish

Superb update dear. But I cant remember when they first dance , when she for the first time felt for him, what chapter was that?
Do continue soon:)

o.k no point in telling that no feelings for Maan's pain as it does not effect at all after all he did.

Waiting for more.